增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2) 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My name is Adam and I’m the freshman at senior high school. Going from junior high school to senior high school are a really big challenge. The first week was a little confused.
First, I had to think very carefully about what courses I wanted to take. The school adviser helped me choose the suit ones: maths, English, chemistry, world history, and Chinese. My adviser recommended that I should sign up for advanced literature because I like English and I’m good at it.
I had to choose extra-curricular activity, too. I tried to join the school football team, but the coach told me that I didn’t play well enough. Obvious, I was unhappy, but I won’t quit. I’ll find a way improve on my own so that I can make the team next year.
I know I’ll have to study harder as a senior high school student and get use to being responsible for a lot more. I’m a bit worried about keep up with the other students in my advanced courses.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As freshman in senior high school, I am sometimes confusing and anxious. Not all subjects are suit for me and I prefer some subjects for the others. For example, I can speak English fluent while I can’t improve my maths even if I put extra efforts into it. Though attracting to literature, but I can’t focus my attention on chemistry classes. Beside, I am so busy to sign up for extra-curricular activities. Can you give me some advices?
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, I went to the zoo where there were a lot of child visiting elephants, monkeys and pandas. They looked very happily. I was about to leave while I found a little boy crying in the zoo. He was lost but couldn’t find his parents. I tried my best to make him to stop cry and played with him. At last, his parents come. I was proud of myself. After while, I met my friend Li Ming and we went for boating together. Both of us enjoyed myself very much. How a meaningful day!
增加：在缺词处加一个(∧)符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1. Much are being done to protect wildlife, but if we really want to save the planet, we must change our way of life.
2. They were hunted, illegal, for their valuable fur.
3. More and more people are concern about their health.
4. The software has downloaded to help my phone battery last longer.
5. They use the same flag, knowing as the Union Jack, as well as share the same currency and military defence.
6. Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence to its people and traditions.
7. Since then, the virtual choir has become a worldwide phenomena.
8. Have you ever faced a time when things look dark and you had no hope at all?
9. The young man benefited doing part-time jobs during the college.
10. The computer doesn’t seem to work well. You’d better get it repair.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下面画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1. He kept concentrating in the same topic since he was a stubborn person.
2. I prefer writing a term paper than taking an examination
3. Another time five months ago, I happened to be upstairs at dusk when the window open.
4. India has a largest number of fluent English speakers.
5. He can’t forgive him for not seeing his mother before she died.
6. You must listen carefully and follow that teachers said.
7. It is not easy to quit smoke cigarettes.
8. Some puzzles look difficult but are actual quite simple.
9. I was frightening on my first day of classes at an American university.
10. I sat quietly on myself.
Last summer I have an unusual experience. It was raining hardly. Because of this, the river near my town rose but flooded some of the rice fields. The villagers, included me, went to the dam to make them strong. The PLA soldiers also came to help us. We fought hard for three days. On the end the dam was saved and our village protected from the flood. Though I became very tired after I returned home, but I was very happy. I learned many things from the villager and the soldiers. I also learned a lots from my unusual experience.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每句错误及修改均仅限一词;
.2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
1. My adviser recommended that I signed up for advanced literature.
2. I’m looking forward to see the colourful lakes.
3. We’re also plan to visit several other places in Xian.
4. l’ve heard that it is an amazing sight, and I can’t wait go.
5. How about watch badminton this afternoon?
6. Lose two important players was a big challenge.
7. Jordan says that the secret to his success is learn from his failures.
8. Strange things were happen in the countryside of northeastern Hebei.
9. Here are some of the people who homes were destroyed by the typhoon.
10. I remember that day that I suddenly felt like German was no longer a foreign language.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirty and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must find ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2) 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
1. Reading has a lot of benefit.
2. Reading can open up our eyes because of books are full of knowledge.
3. You are very kind that you win others’ praise.
4. I like read stories and magazines.
5. Playing sports makes me exciting.
6. It is important for me learn English.
7. Their books are new, but our are old.
8. I usual spend a whole afternoon reading.
9. I am studying with my sister yesterday night.
10. They was an group of dancers from Beijing.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There is no doubt that cell phones play a important part in our daily life. However, be addicted to cell phones does a lot of harms to the users. First, staring at a cell phone screen for hours can lead to dry eyes or other eye diseases. Second, if you always overuse your cellphone, your head as well as your neck ache, which will have a bad effect to your daily life. Beside, on your way home or to school, with your attention fully focus on the cell phone, you may fail to notice the traffic around you, which will be a great danger to you. Therefore, I strong suggest that everyone would use our cell phone wisely.
