删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Anne is my best friend in high school. Honest and friendly, she gets along well to other students. She always lend a helping hand if someone needs help. Anne is as older as me but tall than me. Basketball is her favorite sport though she is girl. Because Anne studies very hardly, she often gets high grades in exams. I’m not good in English, so he often helps me with my English after school. With her help, I have made great progresses in English. And I also help her as much as I can. I hope our friendship will last as long as we lived.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
It was about 9 o'clock one evening. While do my homework, I heard strange noise which sounded like the flowing of water. Suddenly I find the walls shaking as if someone was pushing it. Thinking perhaps I was such tired, I stood up, and was going to bed. Just then I heard someone shout “Earth－quake!” The word put much fear into everyone heart. I rushed out of the house as quick as possible. The whole street was already full with people. I felt everything was trembling. The earthquake was lasted for a few second. Then everything was quiet again.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
A lady once wrote a long story and sent to a famous editor. After a few week, the story was returned to her. The lady got very angrily. She wrote to the editor, “Dear sir, how do you know why the story is not good? You didn’t read it. After I sent it to you, I pasted pages 21, 22 or 23 together. This was a test to see whether I would really read the story. When it came back, the pages was still pasted together. Is this the way in that you read the stories that are sent to you?” The editor writes back, “Dear madam, at breakfast when I open an egg, I don’t have to eat the whole egg in order to discover that it is bad.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was sitting at my favorite table in a restaurant on last Sunday waiting for the food I had ordered to arrive. I suddenly found that Lin Ling, one of my classmate, worked as a waitress there. Honest speaking, it was great surprise for me to find her working there. As far as I know, she’s from a richer family. What made her work there? I walked up to her but asked her the reason. When asking, she said, “I just want to earn some pocket money so that we can help some children in poor areas go back to school.” How a good girl! I should learn from her.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Daniel,
I’ve got a good news for you. Last week I win the first prize in 2016 NEPCS (全国中学生英语能力竞赛). My parents was so glad that they agreed go to Harbin with me to see ice sculptures. You cannot imagine how exciting I was! My mother said he would get me a warm coat. But my father decided to ask three day off for this journey. How do you think of my parents? I'm looking forward to your quickly reply.
Yang Yang
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning on my way home I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old lady in rag was counting her money when a young man ran into her by accident, lead to the money flying off. Everyone at nearby quickly picked up the money and gave them back to her. The old lady counted money again and find not a single bill was missing. The old lady was very content with that the strangers had done for her so she bowed to them but said thank you again and again. It was clear that the old lady was much touched by the people’s kind.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线（____），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I stayed at the South Lake Hotel, that is in the middle of the city, for a week when I visit Beijing last month. It is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. I stayed in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. I checked his email messages with the high-speed Internet connection in the room every day. I also shared for my friends many photos that was taken in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, but I enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I will tell this to all my friends who are going to Beijing.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, everyone has a dream. I dreamed of being a doctor ever since I entered primary school. Nowadays with modern life going rapidly,much people suffer from different kind of diseases, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in a great need at home and abroad. My dream is to become a successful doctor who help to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I’ll devote myself on studies. After all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I firmly believe that everyone in the world loves his mother. So am I. My mother is an ordinary teacher. She always works hardly, just as other mothers do every day. Actual, she isn’t in good health. She had been suffering from arthritis many years. In spite of this, he never stops working or gives up hope. I still remember the day that my mother received a card of congratulations for Teachers’ Day from her director. The card was read “Thank you for your hard works; Happy Teachers’ Day to you!” At that moment, I was so moving that tears came to my eyes. I’m proud of my mother.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写作该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Yesterday, I read article about the Hongkong-Zhuhai-Macao Bridge, the longer sea-crossing bridge in the world. It’s 55 kilometers long, which lifespan(使用寿命) is set at 120 years. And it can stand heavy storm and earthquakes. What’s more, the travel time among Hongkong and Zhuhai is cut from 3 hours to just 30 minutes.
After reading the article, I am wildly excited. In my opinion, drive a car on the bridge was an enjoyable experience. Besides, my dad didn’t agree with me, because she was not skillful at switching freely between Chinese driving. Though I can understand him now, but I do hope someday we can drive on the bridge.
