删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Anne is my best friend in high school. Honest and friendly, she gets along well to other students. She always lend a helping hand if someone needs help. Anne is as older as me but tall than me. Basketball is her favorite sport though she is girl. Because Anne studies very hardly, she often gets high grades in exams. I’m not good in English, so he often helps me with my English after school. With her help, I have made great progresses in English. And I also help her as much as I can. I hope our friendship will last as long as we lived.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
It was about 9 o'clock one evening. While do my homework, I heard strange noise which sounded like the flowing of water. Suddenly I find the walls shaking as if someone was pushing it. Thinking perhaps I was such tired, I stood up, and was going to bed. Just then I heard someone shout “Earth－quake!” The word put much fear into everyone heart. I rushed out of the house as quick as possible. The whole street was already full with people. I felt everything was trembling. The earthquake was lasted for a few second. Then everything was quiet again.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three years before, I visited the Great Wall with my parents. In the way to the Great Wall, we met a foreign lady. She was happily handing out pencils to friendly students which were talking with her. My mother was asked me to chat her.
Without the second thought, I begin to talk about the warm weather with her. We quickly became friend. I learned that she came to China by herself, so she didn’t feel lonely with so many kind people around. Thought highly of my spoken English, she gave me a pencil made in Canada.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(ʌ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I visited the West Lake, Hangzhou, where is extremely beautiful on spring. I saw many young people rode shared bikes as they offered so much convenient. With so many bikes offered by different company, you can find a bike almost everywhere. Also, you can drop them anywhere you want and they are cheap to use them. This new service is much good than public bikes. When someone wants to use a public bike, he has lo find a bike station. He also needed a station to return it. As result, he has to walk any distance to fetch or return it.
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party in five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much. But we’ve kept writing to each other.
6 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, Daisy went to see the animals that give fur to make her sweater in a flying carpet. It flew away to Tibet in China first, which she saw an antelope. The antelope told to her that they were killed for the wool that was taken from their stomachs.
Then the carpet flew to Zimbabwe, where Daisy saw an elephant. The elephant said they were endangering in Zimbabwe. Farmers used to hunt them with mercy. Now the government allowed tourists to hunt only a certain number of animal if they paid the farmers. The flying carpet rose again and almost at once we arrived at a thick rainforest.
There a monkey was rubbing a millipede insect over its body if the insect could protect it from mosquitoes. But Daisy decided to produce this new drug with the help of WWF. The carpet rose and flew home.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
In recently years, many young people prefer to go shopping on the Internet. People have different opinions about online shopping. Some think online shopping was more convenient and the goods are cheap. However, others believe it is unsafe to buy goods by credit card. And that is impossible to check the quality of the goods. As far as I am concerned, go shopping in a store is a better way. It is a fun to walk around stores and look different goods on sale. We can choose that we need.
Beside, we can chat with the shop assistant and know a lot of useful informations.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all know, the Olympic Games are held in every four years under a regular basis. There are 2 kind of Olympics---the Winter and the Summer Olympics. It is in the Summer Olympics which there are many events include swimming, sailing and so on. Every of the sports has its own standard. All the competitors from all over the world enjoy compete for honour of their countries. Those who win the medals is very proud. Women are not only allow but also play an important role in some events
As matter of fact, it is a great honour to host the Olympic Games for many countries.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
1. He lived in Beijing for two years, during when he learned Chinese.2. Shakespeare’s works were highly thought by people of different times.
3. The policemen tried hard in the search of the missing boy, that made his parents very moved.
4. Though you have failed many times, you shouldn’t lose your heart.
5. Which has been said above, grammar is a set of dead rules.
6. The birds survived in the severe winter.
7. Those successful deaf dancers think that dancing is an activity which sight matters more than hearing.
8. It is no doubt that he couldn’t escape punished this time.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last vacation, I take a journey to the Nanxi River, which lie in the southeast of Zhejiang. It is a water theme park. The water sports equipment makes the world to come to life. It is also known as the ancient buildings and cultures. Besides, there are some another things that I will never forget, such as special noodles or all kinds of fruits. How deliciously they are! There are many excellent hotels near the Nanxi River, the prices of that are different. So travelers can choose the most suitable one. Travelers can also see the scenery from the hotel windows. In word, here is the perfect mix of funs.
