增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
Last year, my friends and I had a trip. We started early and traveled for a few hour on a bus.When we arrived, everyone was tiring. While we were getting off the bus, I noticed a young man, standing very close one of my friends. Suddenly, I realized that she was trying to steal my friend’s wallet! I felt really nervous, and I knew I had to pick up courage to take action to stop him. Luckily, I saw two policemen and got a idea. So I fell over and cried out painful. The policemen heard that and came to help. Then I told them that was happening. They catch the thief right away. After that, we thanked for the policemen and went on with our trip happily.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. White,
I’m writing to you from my home in China. I returned back home last Sunday. When I think of the wonderfully two weeks I spend in Australia, I just can’t help thinking of you. You has provided everything to make my staying here such a happy and lucky experience. I’ve learned so many, not only English and also culture. Thank you very much. I’ll always remember the fun and laughter we shared each other as well as your kind. I’ll get in touch with you and write to you often. Please take care!
Yours,
Li Ming
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，井在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As the proverb goes, “Good habits benefit from you all your life.” Enter high school, I was crazy about fast food and ate too much. As a result, I was too heavily overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. Bad still, my classmates play jokes on me at times. From then on, I made up my mind to avoid snacks and to take up jogging to lose weights. Because the timely change, it was not long after I did succeed in creating my new image. Only then did I realize the importance of forming a good habit. To be honestly, the change in my habit means a lot to me, that is good for my success and helps me regain confidence.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad here to give you a short speech. As we all know, we are what we eat. As a result, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. Therefore, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often went to school without breakfast. Some like to have snacks. Others are particular about food, and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to us health.
To keep fit, we should have balancing and healthy diets, they generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, fruit, vegetable as well as staple food. Remember to eat fewer snacks and little junk food. Besides, we had better to have meals regularly.
On my opinion, we should try to build up strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.
That’s all. Thank you!
I am delighted to hear from you but feel excited about your intention of studying at a university in China. You are warm welcome! Peking University is at the top of my recommendation list. It’s appealing to students at home and abroad because its high academic level and rich cultural diversity. So it had been my ideal university, for that I have worked hard for many years. To be frank, study for a degree in a different country isn’t easy. You had better to equip yourself with some basic Chinese language skills apart from some important knowledges about Chinese customs.Of course my wonderful academic ability is a must as well. Let’s work hard together and hope to meeting you there.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mark Twain, like you know, was famous in his days as the public speaker. He always liked to play joke on his friends. One day, the one of his friends lost their wallet and asked him to buy a train ticket for him. “But I don’t have enough money to pay both your ticket and mine,” Mark Twain said. The friend didn’t know what to do. “Let’s do this,” Mark Twain saying, “You can get off the train and when the conductor comes to check the ticket you can hide under my seat.” Later, however, when the conductor comes to check the ticket, Mark Twain gave him two tickets— one for him and the other for his friend.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One of my unforgettable memory of my school in Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunch bell finally rang, my friends or I met under a tall tree and had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was used to share her Nang with me. Nang is a specially kind of bread in Xinjiang. I like them very much. Now Aigulie and I study at different college and we can only see each other during the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I miss the food and the good time we had together.
8 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. As for me, Marie Curie was the person I respect most. It is general acknowledged that Marie Curie is one of the greatest scientist in the world. Her discoveries are crucial to the later scientific research.
Marie Curie was interesting in science when she was young. After she graduated from university, she committed himself to her work with the objective of serve the whole society. Marie and her husband found the element radium, for that they were awarded the Nobel Prize. Not only was Marie the first female professor at the University of Paris, but she was also the first scientist win two Nobel Prizes in the world.
Madam Curie was intelligent, brave, strong-willed but never gave up. To sum up, she is a person I respect her most.
1. Please ask your teachers for help if it necessary.
2. She has no friends to depend .
3. The little boy’s father passed away to leave the family much poorer.
4. Henry was about to sit down while the telephone rang.
5. There ought to have enough space for all of us.
6. On 12 April 1961, Yuri Gagarin became the first person in the world going to space.
7. They had decided to make bet which would settle their argument.
8. We were surprised finding that he had already left.
9. The boy hardly watches TV programmes, apart for nature documents.
10. They allow visitors who has never been to China to experience traditional Chinese culture first hand.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As the saying goes, chances preferred the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience.
I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Lucky, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing the volleyball every day. When another tryout arrived, I was fully prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.
From this, I am firmly convincing that, no matter when chances arrive, we were able to seize them as long as we get well prepared.
