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A son took his old and weak father to a restaurant for an evening dinner. Father, while eaten, dropped some food on his shirt and trousers. Others diners watched him in disgust while his son was very calm. After he finished eating, his son, who was not at all embarrassing, took him to the wash room, quiet removed the stains on his clothes, combed his hair. When they come out, all diners in the restaurant were watching them in silent. The son paid the bill and started walking in with his father. At that time, an old man among the diners who called out to the son, “Thank you to leaving a lesson for every son and hope for every father.”
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注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My name is Li Ming, a student studied in Ganzhou No. 18 Middle School. I am eager become a volunteer in your group and I can work till my next term begins. I have a real gift on singing. I get first prize in the singing competition in our school last year. However, I can teach children how to sing songs. Besides, I play the piano very well, that will help a lot in my work. I am warm-hearted and always be ready to help. Helping other people makes myself happy. I believe I can make friend with the children. I hope I am fortunately enough to be a member of your group.
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注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Thursday afternoon, I attended for a special online class given by the Shenzhou-13 crew members from Tiangong Space Station.
The amazing class started at 3: 40 but lasted about 45 minutes. At the beginning of the class, under the help of the other two workmates, Wang Yaping showed us their living and working areas. He is the first female astronaut enter China’s space station. To my astonished, they have a fully functional kitchen. After the “house tour”, a crew worked together to conduct some experiments relating to cells in the weightless environment. They also explained the reason that astronauts couldn’t walk as they use to do on the Earth.
How fun it was!
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Last summer, I went on the trip to Qingdao, where I stayed for seven days and enjoyed myself. Before leave Qingdao, I went fishing on a beautiful lake. Unlucky, I didn’t catch any fishes, and I got boring. I decided to go swimming. When I stood up, my wallet with all my money fell into the water. I jump into the deep lake to look for it, so I found nothing. The next morning, I wasn’t able to leave the hotel because of I had no money to pay for anything. I had no alternative but call my parents and asked for help. They sent myself some money by WeChat. How an embarrassing trip!
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We’ve all heard of the saying, “Reading good books are like having a conversation with the finest men of the past centuries.” By reading books, we can know which is going on at home and abroad. In fact, reading has many benefits. It can bring us knowledges and pleasure. From reading the number of books, we can get a lot. Reading books enables us broaden our horizons, made our life colorful and meaningful. We can not only understand how to live in a happy life and also learn new ways of doing things. When we faced difficulties, we can solve them peacefully. As someone puts it, “A good book is exact a good friend.”
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注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On the behalf of my school, I warmly welcome you to learn Tai Chi with us. This is amazing that you have a great passion to Tai Chi. In our school, there is quantities of super Tai Chi masters. Actual, many international exchange students, whose ages varied from 16 to 28, have a preference for Tai Chi. Not only Tai Chi a conventional martial art, but it has also been acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Tai Chi provides both mental relaxation and physical fitness, that are very essential in our modern stressed lives. I’m convinced that you will be addicted to practise it. Looking forward to your arrival!
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Beijing Opera is a tradition opera with a long history, that dates back to over 200 years ago. In the 18th century, to celebrate the king’s 80th birthday, who is strong interested in local operas, four famous troupes (剧团) from Anhui Province came to Beijing to perform for her. After that, a new type formed gradually, knowing as Beijing Opera. Beijing Opera features four major role-Sheng, Dan, Jing, and Chou. It has regarded as one of the cultural treasures of China. Beijing Opera is not only popular with China, but also has spread to many the other places. It is playing an important role in carry forward Chinese culture.
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Dear Li Ming,
Glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. On my opinion, you should return after you finish your study abroad. For one reason, what you are studying is badly needing nowadays in China. It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In the fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like yourself. For another reason, that will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they were getting old. So what are you waiting?
Yours
Li Hua
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2 .只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m gladly to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August. You’ve made a wise choose to travel there. As we all know it, Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions, enjoy many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation(灌溉) Project.
Jiuzhaigou is well-known as its beautiful lakes, of that the water is clear and looks colorful. It can excite visitors’ imagination. Another attraction is the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It is built twenty centuries ago. And it is still playing such important part in irrigation today. Beside, the nice weather and convenience transportation there can make your trip more enjoyable.
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注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
The long-desired winter vacation was arrived in the end. As soon as the bell rang, announcing the end of the class, we couldn’t wait to rush out the classroom. Half an hour late, my good friend Li Ming and I were on the way back home. The train we took was such crowded that we had to stand. We both felt exciting because we had four week to stay with our parents. All of a sudden, I saw a man picking an old lady’s pocket. Under the help of Li Ming, I caught the thief and forced her to give back the purse to the old lady. The thief was taken away by the guard. Praising by other passengers, we felt proudly of what we had done.