增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
I fell in love flower gardening after a school assignment. To me, it is not only relaxing but also educationally. I had experienced lots of successes and failures in growing flowers, making me realize failure is a normal part of life that lead to improvement and success. When I’m in low spirit, I often go to see how is going on in the pots. Watch things grow makes me feel at peace. He also reminds me that life is not a race but the most precious moment is now. Besides, I usually listen to books while are tending to my plants, killing two birds with one stone.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Journalism has a good development future. Attracting by it, I’m writing to apply for a position as a journalist. First of all, I’m hard-working but ambitious, which can true help me do a good job. In addition to, I have accumulated some relevant experience, which can not only broadens my vision but also improve my ability. Therefore, that I want to stress at last is that I am skilled in photographing. So at your convenient I hope you can take a look at your personal resume. I would appreciate very much if you could take my application into account.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, I went to an amazing Chinese art festival. There were different stands artists could demonstrate their skills and teach the visitors! It was definite an exciting experience. What caught our attention first was a 18th-century qinghua bowl. It vividly illustrated two dragons’ playing with a ball, which were typical of Chinese porcelain. Then I try some paper cutting, namely, making images out of papers. It was difficult, but a lot of fun! With the help of an artist, and I managed to make one in the shape of a fish. Another man seating next to him showed me how seal cutting worked. He made one for me with my name on Chinese — pretty awesome!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, I went to a museum nearby and had a good time here. I got up early in the morning. It was sunny, so I decide to bicycle to make a greener travel. After about an hour’s ride, I finally arrived at entrance. I had my ticket check quickly and walked into the museum, following a group of visitors with a tour guide, which was really knowledgeable. She gave each exhibit to a vivid description. What impressed me most were the development of Chinese characters. This visit not only increased our interest in Chinese history, and broadened my horizons.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How time flies! We were going to graduate soon. Stood here, I feel honored to have an opportunity express my heartfelt appreciation to Ms. Zhang. Looking back on the past three years, I can’t thank for her too much. When I entered senior high, I was deeply impressed by her excellent spoken English and patient. So I was determined to work hard at English. Therefore, the pressure of study made me feel so depressing that I couldn’t focus on my study. She noticed it and offered me some constructive advices. It was her constant encouragement which helped me regain confidence. Feeling deeply grateful to her for what he has done for me, I wish her all the best.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
Dear guests, teachers and fellow students, I’m Li Hua, a chairman of the Students Union.
First, please allow me, on behalf of our school, extend the warmest welcome to our distinguish guests from London. And we were honored to have the chance to play a friendly match with you. Found in the 1950s, our school football team enjoys a good reputation for one of the top teams throughout the province, winning one championship after another. Now it has 50 members and 4 coach. Today’s friendly match is a golden opportunity, with whom young players from Britain and China can develop footballing skills and enhance their friendship.
Finally, I hearty wish the match a remarkable success. Thank you!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
I’ve always had a passion for the medical field. When I was a little kid, I used to wearing a lab coat but run around with my first-aid box. Acting like a professional, I find it fun then. Later, I wanted to be nurse when I witnessed what considerate the nurses were while they were looking after my sick father. During that difficult time, the nurses were the one who interacted with us most and provided for the best care. I was deeply impressing by the difference those nurses made to my father life. Therefore, I’m now determined to pursue that career and work hardly to help others.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before get into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor orders. Once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot that what he had said to me altogether. She kept repeating the words. “Speeding up!” “Slow down!” “Turn left!” I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, he asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle on the road.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I preferred my English classes to be taught only in English, because it is helpful for us to improve an ability to speak and listen.
I have strong interested in English and foreign culture, so I’d like to be total absorbed in the atmosphere of English. I can quickly make a progress. However, since we are all English beginners, it’s really hard understand the words which is difficult. So they need mother language to understand sometime.
My viewpoint is that we should use Chinese as a minor way to explain something which is difficult for students.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, an increasing number of people have trouble falling asleep and suffer from lack of sleep, lead to serious health problems.
Definitely, a good sleep can restore our physical strength what is needed to get refreshed for the day ahead. On the contrary, lack of sleep can result in poor outcomes, absent of mind, memory loss and low spirits including. Consequently, effective approaches should put forward to address the issues.
Firstly, we should lay a efficient learning plan and strike a balance between your study and rest. Secondly, remove our phones or other screens before going to bed. Lastly, creating a sleep-friendly environment can be of extremely helpful. Something as simply as a comfortable pillow can do wonders.