增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently, the number of the students in our school who skip breakfast has increased greatly. In my opinion, skip breakfast is a bad habit what should be kicked.
For one thing, breakfast offered us the energy we need for the whole morning. When you are hungry, it is hard of us to keep our mind on our studies. For another, people who skip breakfast will consume more food at noon and in the evening. Hence, the extra calories will stored in our body and make us gain weight easy.
In a short, skipping breakfast leads to poor school performance and poor health, even a bad figure. Moreover, do not skip breakfast and having a proper breakfast every day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Li Hua and I were neighbour and we went to the same school. We always went to school together. We was good friends and had a great deal share every day. However, one day, Li Hua copied my homework, that made me so angrily that I did not want to be friends with him any longer. Then on Monday morning I run downstairs without realizing it was raining, but there was no time to return home to fetch a umbrella. It happened that Li Hua was just around the corner but he offered to share his umbrella with me. He made an apologize to me in a gentle voice. I forgave about him and gave him a hug.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
We live in a society that honesty is very important and necessarily. However, to make more profits, some businessman sell fake products. To get better scores, some students cheat in exams, but dishonesty did not pay in the long term. Those who sell fake products end up destroy their own credibility and losing customers. Students who cheat in exams not only cheat them but also result in unfairness. If everyone behaved dishonestly, trust build between each other would be damaged, eventually leading to the collapse of society.
Honest people are of looking-forward. They keep their promises, tell the truth, and bear responsibility, but they enjoy popularity among others. Only by sticking to the principle of honesty can we help make world a better place to live in.
增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a exchange student from Shanghai, China. I’ve learnt from the Internet that you are in need some volunteers. I am writing to recommend me to your organization.
I have the following advantage. First of all, I love all the animals no matter whether it is a bird or a tiger. I intended to be a biologist and I am studying relating courses in college. However, I have a good knowledge on how to do to take care of animals. Second, I don’t have classes at weekends, it allows me to have a lot of spare time to do volunteer work.
I would appreciate it that if you could give me an early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear cousin,
Long time no see! It has been almost a year ever since you move to London. I miss you a lot. I’m writing the letter to ask you for help. As you know, I am eager to be a photographer like you, so I asked my parents to buy me the camera last week. But he told me I wouldn’t concentrate on my schoolwork if I got one. Oh, my God! What can I make them trust me? I’m not a kid any longer, but I can control myself. What’s worse, I have promised that I will take photo for the school’s newspaper in next month. When asking by my classmates, I will be absolutely embarrassed. Therefore, would you like to lend me some money? If you’d like, I will return it as soon as possibly.
Yours Sincerely
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In order to promote participation in outdoor exercise, our school organized an activity to climb Mount Tai last Sunday. The majority of my classmates joined the activity. Early in the morning, we gathered outside the school gate and head for Mount Tai. We were in high spirits when the moment we arrived at the foot of the mountain. In a course of the climb, we cooperated with each other and eventually we reached the summit, which we enjoyed the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was beautiful. There we entertained us with stories, songs, dances and game. This event was extreme beneficial. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more seriously. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aiming at raising people’s awareness of ocean conservation.
Not only ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. However, it is important to protect ocean. First of all, how we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbages shouldn’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, you can also call on more people to protect ocean. The more people are involved, and the better our ocean environment will be.
All in all, it was high time that we devoted ourselves to protect ocean.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Yu Cai Middle School, whom you helped me during my preparation for the English speech contest last month. So I’m writing to express my grateful.
Your classes were unforgettable, that not only could I learn much knowledge on speech but I had a lot of funs. You were always listen to my speech carefully no matter what many mistakes I made. Above all, you helped me to correct these mistakes with patience. With your kind help, I couldn’t have got the first prize.
What a hugely influence you had on me. I’m determining to work hard at my study in order be a useful person who can make a contribution to our country and society.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the fast development of science and technology, our studies are sure to change great. As for us, lifelong learning is the must in the future. First, we can study in anywhere in the future, not just at school. For example, we can have various online class from the best teachers without leaving our home, make our learning more convenient. Besides, there will have more tools like Ding-ding and Wechat help us study. We will have no exams at school as all of us students can study easily and do that we have a gift for. Learning will also be delightful for all of us. Every time I look forward to the future, I can’t feel more exciting because many kinds of possibilities were waiting for me.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Hank,
I'm writing to apologize for having lost the book American Culture borrow from you last week.
My friends asked me to play the football yesterday afternoon and I put the book besides the basketball stand. Therefore, I forgot to bring it back afterwards and when I returned to the playgrounds, it wasn't there. I have put up a notice on the notice board to see if anybody took the book in mistake. If I can't find, I will buy a new one for you. I'm sorry for cause you some trouble. I really hoped that you can accept my sincerely apology.
Love,
Li Hua
