1 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修以你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How many time do you spend with your parents? Your parents are your dearer people in the world when you are young. And they always care for you deep. But even though many children still loves their mum and dad, families may become less close as you get older. The end of the year is a time for families to got together. Have you ever thought of how you can show your parents that you love them? Find a chances and do something for them or have sincere talk with them. What you can do this, your parents will be very happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, I had drove my car to see a doctor. At the hospital parking lot, I tried to back the car into the space, and failed. I just got my driving licenses and was not skilled at operating it. As more cars lining up behind me and some drivers even yelled at me, I got nervously and worse at handling it. When I was about to quit and left, a man walked up to me. She offered to back my car. Then he suggested equip the car with a camera so that it would be easy to park it. I was relieved that he lent me hand and I was grateful for which he had done for me.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our school organized a hike last week, what impressed us deeply. In order to strengthen our bodies, all the students and teachers in our school took an active part in it.
We set off at 8 am on Wednesday at the school gate, head for Qixing Mountain happy. On the way to the destination, we chat with each other, sang songs and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. We had hiked for about one and a half hour before we arrived at the mountain. Then they had lunch there and played with some interesting games. How meaningful and impressive activity was!
After walking a long distance, all of us was exhausted, and we felt very happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, I didn’t get up early as usually. In the morning after I finished my homework, I do some washing. Then I telephoned one of my classmates, invite him to see a film. And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema, we found all the tickets had sold out. Then we went back to school and played the football. After that, we were about to go home while we saw our English teacher, Ms. Gao, coming into the school gate. She told us we had made great progresses in English. This term she suggested that we would read and write as much as possible. She also asked us to help those on need. She hoped we would improve English together.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was 7:15 in the morning of January 8th, 2023. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while a passer-by of average build came out of the park on the other side of the road. Just at that moment, I see a yellow car driving up the Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. Unlucky, the car hit the man when she was crossing the road. And he knocked down with a painful cry. However, instead of stopping, the car drove off even faster. Seeing this, about two minute later, I stopped a passing car and rushed the man to the most nearest hospital. When his family came, they were moving to tears.
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, I planned to save money for a trip. My father told to me a local zoo was looking for teenagers to work on the weekend, so I immediate applied for the position. To my delight, I got it. My first tasks was to clean the elephant’s house. Luckily, another girl who had begin working there two weeks before taught me how to do a job and that helped me a lot. Each weekend, I was sent to work with difference animals. What I liked best were feeding the giraffes. Tiring as I was while work hard at the zoo, I felt happy because I got close animals and I also earned a lot.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mary is a fifty-year-old travel lover. She thinks it is very excited to go to new places and experience different situations. Last Sunday she decided to join in me in going mountain climbing. Early in the morning we drive to the destination. Upon arrival, we set out to climb the mountain in high spirit. We saw the wild flowers in full blossom along the way but we took lots of photos. About three hours later, we succeeded in reaching the peak of a mountain. We rested on a large stone, enjoy the beautiful scenery faraway. Mary happily talked about his past life in the breeze. She delighted to talk and how luckily I was to learn about her colorful life!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Recently, one of my friends had sent me a short message, say that true friends are one soul in two bodies. It moves me very much and makes me think how true friendship is. Nowadays, the word friendship has been used very often that it has lost its meaning. Some jokingly put it that friends made to be taken advantage of. In my opinion, true friendship doesn’t mean that when you need your friends’ help, you’ll treat them for dinner. True friendship is the communication of the hearts and understand of the friends’ souls. True friends keep you in the mind, no matter where they are. Once you have found such true friends, do treasure him. With true friendship, life proves happily and harmonious.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today, it has been almost 30 years when I first started volunteering at the local library for “Children’s Story Hour”. Every week, I go there to read to kids. Also, I answer question that they are curious about them. This job, what I have kept doing for so long, help me escape from the daily stress. I am really happy to be with them. Yesterday our local news channel completed a program naming “Local Heroes”. 127 adults voted me, saying something like, “Cheryl’s Story Hour is one of the warm memories from my childhood.” And interesting enough, all the others names on the top of the list were firefighters, policemen, and politicians.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
册除: 把多尔的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处钳误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处，乡者(从第11处起)计分。
A few weeks ago, I participated a camping trip at Pitt Lake. It was a new experience for me, so I was both nervous and excited at the first. Because there were many participant, we had a bigger canoe(独木舟) and a smaller one. I chose to be in the smaller canoe with my friend Mitra, but we soon found that this was not a wiser choice. In order to keep up of the bigger canoe, all of them had to paddle(划桨) hard. My arms quick became sore. To take our minds off the pain, Mitra and I played “20 questions” while paddle. In this game, one person thinks of an object and the other person asks 20 questions to figure out whether the object is. We had a good laugh before we finally arrive at the campsite.
