增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week, I saw a program about Chongqing hotpot on TV. I was curious but planned a special one-day trip there with a friend of me. Our fast train was packing with passengers. A attendant gave us some travel brochures about Chongqing. When we arrived, we went straight a famous restaurant and ordered dishes, which tasted greatly. The atmosphere here made the meal all the more enjoyed. Hotpot is meant for families and friends to sit together, dip everything they like this in one pot, and shared friendship and love.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
This Friday is the traditional Dragon Boat Festival, also knowing as Duanwu Festival. One of the major custom is to make and eat rice dumplings. It’s obviously that most people don’t make rice dumplings at the present. They can buy it at the supermarket or online. However, it’s still considering one of the most important elements celebrate the festival. It’s not easy to make rice dumplings by hand, that takes too much time. And it is fun and brings family members together. So let’s made our own rice dumplings to keep the tradition alive.
1. Nowadays, it is common in China that some people tend to run the red light in group when crossing the street.
2. Actually, running the red light are quite dangerous.
3. As the saying go, treat others as you would like to be treated.
4. Not only cellphones but also the web are necessary for me.
5. Li Ming, one of my best friend, was still not back and his parents were very anxious about him.
6. However, even an hour is of much valuable.
7. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jam.
8. My son, life is like a battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.
9. One who fail to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.
10. Meanwhile, volunteer travel enrich your life by offering different jobs in youth hostels.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
刪除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My uncle is a firefighter. The work of firefighters is to put out fire and responds to emergencies involving life or property. In face of danger, we are always the first to step out. That is because I admire them very much. Last Sunday, his way back home, my uncle hear someone shouting for help. Turn around, he saw many people running to the river. He rushed over. It was turned out that a boy dropped into the river when playing with water. My uncle jumped in and saved a boy with the help of several other passers-by. The people all praised him for his selflessly behavior.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to a farm for a activity about picking various things.
No sooner had we arrived on the farm when we saw many kinds of fruit trees, surrounding by many animals. I picked some pears, which I think are good for health, because of the fall is the best time to eating pears. After the activity, we get a better understanding of labor’s mean. During the activity we felt tired, and we had a good time.
I think these labor activities are important for students health. I hope students can participate these activities more often.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was a very hot weather and my bike stopped running in the middle of the road. Therefore, I didn’t have tools on my bike to repair it. At that moment, an old man were passing by and asked me how happened. I told him that my bike is not starting. He replied, “I live nearby. I will fetch some tools, then we will try to fix it.” Five minutes late, he came back, gave me some tools and helped me repair them. At last, we fixed it successfully and felt very relaxing and calm. He also brought me a drink. He was so generous, and I thanked him for being so kindly.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was relaxing at the apartment’s pool yesterday evening while I saw something smaller swimming across the water. I got up and walked the edge of the pool and noticed it was the squirrel. I was not sure that how it got in the pool, but with no easy way out it surely will have drowned. With no basket nearby to fish it out, I simply reached after it, grabbed it gentle around the waist, and set it on the pool deck. The little thing were all wet, but rushed off from the pool. Be a lifeguard volunteer, now I can add “squirrel” to my lists of beings I’ve pulled out of the water.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My parents and I decided to visit Hong Kong for our holidays in last summer. I was very happy because I looked forward to go there for a long time. Hong Kong, which is coastal city in China, impressed me with its high building. The sky was blue and the air was fresh, which were that relaxed me. I enjoy taking a walk along the beach while my mother liked reading her book, laying on her chair. I also liked surfing in the sea with my father, who tried hardly to keep her balance. How excited the experience was!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Thursday, I decided bake a cake for my sister’s birthday. I carefully selected all the ingredients at the grocery store, make sure I had everything I needed. The recipe I chose came from a cookbook what had a picture of a deliciously cake on the cover. I was confident that his cake would be perfect. I followed a recipe step by step, mixing the flour and preheating the oven. But to my disappoint, when I carefully removed the cake from the pan, it breaks into pieces. Although this recipe didn’t quite deliver the expected results, but it was a learning experience of me.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My name is Jimmy. I’m writing to recommend me as a candidate for the chairman of the English drama club. Equipping with fluent English and a good knowledge of drama, I have no difficulty communicating with others in English. I know exact what is expected of a leader of the club but I’m experienced in cooperating. In addition of, I’ve been working in student organizations for while, so I’m quite familiar to the daily routines. Last but not least, I’m enthusiastic about drama and eager to take responsibility for a reliable chairman, contributing to the prosper of English drama. Should I have the opportunity to serve the club, I will lead it to the best of my ability.
