增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Delighted to be informed the news that you have won first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulation to you.
I think you deserve a prize. For a long time, you had shown great interest in Chinese culture, especial Chinese calligraphy. I know you always refer to calligraphy books, learn from masters and keep practice writing Chinese characters. It’s your passion and hard work that contributes to you winning the championship. Hopefully, you can achieve even great success in the future.
Also, I hope you can make great progress in calligraphy together. Please tell me that when you are available so that we can exchange our experience of learning it. Looking forward to your early reply.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, my mother and I went to a park. We had a goodtime, deciding to have the lunch in the park. With some milks and bread ready, my mother and I went to wash my hands. However, when we came back, our bread was going! We thought that it was someone took it. We were very angry. I thought that the thief will come back to take the milk. So, my mother and I hid behind a tree or waited. One hour late, no one came. We were such hungry that we had to give in. Suddenly, I found something under the chair. Oh, it was our bread!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10处, 多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
My mother is good at making dumplings. So every time I see her making dumplings so skillful, I think it is easy thing. Last week, I decided to learn to make dumplings with her. The first step was to roll the dumpling skins. My mother told me that it was of great important, just like the base of a house. After build the base well, I began to make dumplings directly. It takes my mother only three seconds to finish one dumpling and I spent much time making a dumpling. I had difficulties closing the dumplings well. As a result, the filling for some dumplings I made was came out. We never expected making a dumpling would be so hard.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was getting dark, and my parents didn’t come back home yet. Thinking about the supper, I stopped doing my homework and decide to make a meal for my family instead of simple waiting. Since it was my first cooking, so I surfed on the Internet with my cellphone to get the detailed informations on how to do homely dishes. Followed the step-by-step directions, I managed to make my first dish, then another. When my parents came back home, they couldn’t believe their eyes see the dishes made by me. While Mum was taken pictures, Dad couldn’t wait to have a taste and gave her the thumbs up. Imagine how exciting I was!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This summer, to support the activity of environmental protection, Jack and I was passing from Mainpuri city to another city while two young kids came to us and said: “Well done, you are doing good work. We are with you.” It was a very inspirational moment for me to get acknowledged and appreciate. They walked with us for one mile. They were very impressed by our work and looked very happily. They also offered food. But their words and companies were enough for us. Before that we didn’t need food or water, so we thanked them and were moved forward. Through journey, I hoped everyone could realize the important of environmental protection.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, our school held a 5km cross-country running race, that attracted many enthusiastic participants, included both students and teachers.
The route went from our school gate to the foot of the South Mountain. About 200 students and 60 teachers participate in the race, which began 9: 00 am and lasted about an hour. The whole course was extreme difficult. However, no participants gave up halfway. All the racers are held on to the finish line.
As the activity was challenging, everyone enjoyed it but benefited a lot from it. Therefore, we both think highly of it, and expect more activity like this in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is reported that 1 out of 3 school child doesn’t have the needed supplies support their learning. To collect school supplies for the needy students, my friends and me organized a charity action in our school on last Sunday. I lay some tables in the playground, where the students involving in it could put their donations. Eventual, forty backpacks filled with school supplies was donated to the needy children. Meantime, we collected two boxes of school supplies for teachers with the total value of approximately $1,100. It’s amazing that we can accomplish when we work together!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last year, with Christmas approached, my sisters and I felt quite thrilled. However, one day after Christmas, my father gathered us together. He told us he can’t afford any presents, even our traditional treat. As the oldest child, I felt upset and understandable. My mother had a serious disease, who cost my family much money to constant seek a cure. On the Christmas Eve, we heard a knock on the door. Unexpectedly, two our neighbors came in with some gifts. It kept we entertained. I will never forget the two kind neighbors who have always been inspiring me to share anything with those in need.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am awful sorry to inform you that I can’t go out sketching with you in a national park this Saturday. Which you know, my mother is in a state of poor healthy. Last night, she suffered a serious heart attack and sent to hospital. My father is on business in abroad and can’t make it back to Beijing for him. I have no choice but to give up our appointments to attend her. How about go there next Saturday or Sunday? How I wish you will accept my apology. I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was my way to school last Saturday afternoon, I saw a mother and her son preparing to go across the street. A mother was about to run the light while her son prevented her. The mother felt embarrassed and stops. With more and more cars coming into our families, it had greatly improved our life. But unlucky, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accident. Traffic safety is everybody’s business. We must to obey the rules. We can tell our parents not to drink before we drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while drive etc.
