1 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When studied in elementary school, I talked to a better friend about volunteering. I was sorry to hear she has never volunteered before. More surprising, several days later I was told that opportunity to volunteer was not easy to get for other classmates either. Then I came up with an idea, this was to organize one volunteer opportunity a month at school. Other kids would make a difference through simple act of service if I could offer situations to teach them the importance of giving back. However, I presented my idea to our headmaster. To his great happiness, it was recognized. It started as one project in a small classroom, and eventually was turned out a success in my whole school.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
According to scientific researches, complaining every day was bad for you. It actual hurts your brain. It causes damage to the areas for learning, make new memories, and solving problems. Complaining is bad for the people around you as well, that is just like secondhand smoke. The negative comments and energy also affects them and get to them. So, turn the negative thought into positive ones. Also, be sure to calm you so you can see real problem and fix it. Finally, appreciate the good or forget the bad. Your brain will thank you for not to complaining.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, my mother and I went to a park. We had a goodtime, deciding to have the lunch in the park. With some milks and bread ready, my mother and I went to wash my hands. However, when we came back, our bread was going! We thought that it was someone took it. We were very angry. I thought that the thief will come back to take the milk. So, my mother and I hid behind a tree or waited. One hour late, no one came. We were such hungry that we had to give in. Suddenly, I found something under the chair. Oh, it was our bread!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My English teacher is in his fifty and of medium height. Always wear a smile, he looks more than kind. The reason why I honor and admire for him so much lies in two respects. For one thing, I wouldn’t have got so great progress in English without his patient and significant assistance. For another, it’s my devotion to the career and consideration for us that earns not only my but also other students’ gratitude. So touching am I that I’m determined to spare no effort study hard. I dream of being an person like him in the future or make great contributions to society.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A boy went to a shop and bought a pencil or other things. When he was going to pay for the bill, he took out his wallet and found he had not enough money pay. He felt awkward. At that moment, an old man whom was in charge of the shop smiled and said to the boy that he could give a rest of the money next time. The boy was so shocking, as the old man trusted him so much. When the boy went home, he remembered them all the time. So the next morning, when he passes the shop, he gave the money without hesitations. Integrity (诚信) is priceless and decide who we are.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I signed up for a competition on garbage sorting on the Monday and I participated in the first round, a written test. Though there was many candidates, I succeeded entering the final with another student from my class. Last Friday where the final was held, my classmate and I played with the participants from other four classes, and answers all of the questions accurately. Finally, we won out! We were extremely happy what we brought honor to our class. When interviewing by the school TV station after the award ceremony, I expressed my prides in protecting our environment. The competition not only broadened my knowledge on the garbage sorting and increased the awareness of environmentally protection.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was elected as the screenwriter and a director of our group in an activity Reading and Acting out Classics. No soon had I arrived home than I throw myself into choosing a story. The famous novel A Dream of Red Mansions popped into their head. I read the whole novel attentively but devoted myself to adapt it. It took us a lot practice to perform it. Finally came the big time which we presented it before our class with impressive acting skills and vividly lines, which turned out to be a great success.
We uploaded our video on WeChat Moments. Just several minutes later, we received many good comment.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I still remember the lesson my mom teaches me. It was an very important exam. I met such a puzzling question that I couldn’t answer with it easily. So I put my hand into the pockets to take out the mobile phone find the answer. Suddenly the teacher stood beside me. I was catching cheating. Then my mom was asked to come to the school. Having heard that I did, my mom was so angrily but said nothing. That night I thought my mom would shout at me, but he just told me not to cheat in the future. After that, I ever cheated in any exam.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last September, a common graduation ceremony held in Henan University, and it received much attention. Xue Minxiu, born in 1937, graduated with excellent grades after worked hard for 4 years. Going to a university has always been a dream for Xue. But with some reasons, she doesn’t have the chance when she was young. Even so, she never forgot his dream. In 2014, she was accepted by Henan University and final her dream came true. Since then, Xue has been a model for the people around her. She got up at 5 o’clock every morning. Her room was filling with books and newspapers. Wherever she went to, she would take books with her. Her hard works paid off in the end.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Double Ninth Festival is celebrate on the ninth day of the ninth month on the Chinese lunar calendar. In Chinese tradition, nine is the larger number. It sounds similar the Chinese word jiu. In ancient China, it is a custom to climb mountains to pray for a good luck. Also, people would admire the beauty of chrysanthemums (菊花), drink wine but eat Chongyang cakes. Although people today don’t observe all the traditional custom, it still keeps the traditional meaning of respect the senior citizens. Recent, travel has become a very popular way for senior Chinese people to spend his leisure time. A lot of senior citizens begin to pay more attention to their later years.
