增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandma is old and she has to walk with a stick. For years, she had been sharing one room with me so that I can look after her or she can also take care of me. One morning, I woke up a little of late and felt surprising that she had not woken me up. I got dressed in hurry and rushed out. I asked the man sells breakfast if he saw my grandma. He told us she had bought all his pancakes and walk away. As I turned a corner, I saw she was giving the food away to some workers, what were eating the pancakes with smiles on their face.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As the saying goes, “Friendship is like sunshine keeps us warm and helps us grow.” I think it is important for us to making good friends so that we can always have a fun. I like to choose people who are kind, honesty and helpful as my friends. I like to share my thoughts and fears about them whenever I get into trouble.
Now I have some good friends who trusts me. I always care about what had happened to them, because I call them once a week. I always go out with my friends, chatting and play. I try to offer some advices to my friends when necessary. In this way I am able to keep friendship.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is quite important for parents and children to spend quality time together regular. It helps build a close and health relationship between them. On the one hand, spending time with parents give children the impression that their parents care about them. This can create a sense of security, that is particularly important for our overall development. On the other hand, it allows parents to know better about their children, include their interests and concerns. Besides, parents can also educate their children in case if they make mistakes. All in all, parents’ love and care can't replaced by anything. But no matter how busy parents are, never forgot to set aside some time for children.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Talked about personal relationships, I’d naturally think of my relationship with my mother. Wherever I need help, my mother is always there for me. She often tells me that I can be anyone I want, as long as I’m confident of me. She sees my talent and push me to do the best I possible can. I respect my mother so much as she never treats me as a child, but as a equal. She gives me the freedom make mistake and learn from them all. Unlike friendships that can disappear gradually and break, I know I’ll always be connected to my mother no matter what I face with. She is not just a role model, but someone I love.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I will be 18 years old. The person I want to expressing my deepest gratitude to him is my dad, a construction site worker. In order to support the whole family, he always works very hardly, and never feels discouraging. In a sense, my dad tells me indirectly to be optimistic person. In other words, he has taught me to enjoy how life has offered to me instead of complaining about it. On addition, no matter when I encounter unpleasant things, he always comfort me patiently. He often helps me find a few useful solution. Because of my dad, I have became a loving person that I am now.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My dad is the person to which I’m most grateful. Not only does he take good care of me physically, but he also inspires me spiritually.
Every morning, he gets up early to prepare a healthy breakfast for me. No matter how busily he is, he would drive me to and from school, rain or shine. When I am down or feel anxious about my grades, and my father will take me to a park, or inviting me to see a movie to help me relax. Unless necessary, he will accompany me to see a psychologist for professional assistance. What’s more, the fact that he has a positive attitude to life really have an everlasting effect on me.
It is because his care and consideration what I grow up happily and healthily. My gratitude to him is beyond describe.
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, my friends and I go to climb the West Mountain. While climb, we enjoyed the sunny weather and a beautiful view. We were very delighted reach the top without much time or effort. Therefore, we found it more difficult to go down, so we went slowly but helped each other when necessary. Though I took care a lot, unfortunately I slipped and hurt me leg badly. As the result, I could hardly stand up. One of my friend came to me immediately and carried me on the back till we reached for the foot of the mountain. I was very thankful and felt proudly of having such good friends.
8 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Spoken of the one I'm grateful to, I will tell you without hesitate that it is my father. Not only does he take good care of you physically, but he also inspires me spiritually.
Every morning, he got up early to prepare a healthy breakfast for my family. No matter whether how busy he is, he will drive me to and from school. When I feel anxiously about my grades, my father will encourage me. Additional, he has a positive attitude to life, what has a lasting effect on me.
It is because his care and consideration that I grow up, healthy and happy. My gratitude to him is beyond descriptions.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, my dad and I took a bus to a village. Uncle Paul, my dad friend, picked us up or drove us to his farm. We spent the night in a guest room, listen to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early on the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfasts. After that, I went to help Aunt Mary feed chickens. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul I could take a horse ride, and he said yes as my father would go with him. My father and I headed slowly towards the mountains at the first. Eventually, my father was impressing to see me ride a horse free.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Every time I was got high marks, I would show my test papers to my parents. They would be very happy and proud of me. But last time, I didn’t do perfect in the exam. I was afraid that it might let my parents up, so I planned not to tell them result. When I went home, I rush to my room. Then my mother asked me that had happened. I decided to be an honest children and told her the true. She smiled and told me she was still proud of her, and she believed that I could perform well in the future. I was so happy to get some encouraged words from my mother.
