增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am sorry to hear that you are upset because you were too fat at present. I have learned how to lose the weight for a long time. I will give you some advices. First, it is necessary to spend one hour a day in working out regular; try to walk instead of take a bus. Second, develop a good eating habit, what helps you keep a healthy body. When they are stressed, try to relax yourself by listening soft music. Finally, never stay up too late or make sure you get enough sleep. Hopefully, you can live a much good life than before.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear classmates,
It is a pleasure for I to have a chance to make a short speech today. Recently, I had found that some of our classmates study late into the night and do not take some time to take a rest during the day either. They often cannot help fall asleep in class. And some classmates seldom have breakfast, that is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to our health.
In my opinion, it is extreme important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet. We must learn to make a wise use of our time, and only in this way can we keep fit or study well. I wonder if you agree me.
Thank you for listening.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am Li Hua, senior high school student. I had recently learnt on the Internet you are helping students with spoken English by offer an online course. I am writing to ask you for some help.
I have learnt English for more than four years and I really like English. However, my spoken English is such poor that I can not communicate with foreigners free. My broken English always discourages you from opening my mouth. I am really worrying. I hope if you can help me with my spoken English. I believe that I can make many progress with your help.
I would appreciate it if you could agree to helping me. I am looking forward to your reply.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jack,
I’m more than pleasing to know that you are eager to learn Chinese. Confucius Institute may be a good choice, which are intended for the Chinese learners whom are not native.
Confucius Institute provided various interesting subjects. You can learn from Chinese history as good as Chinese writing. Besides, teachers will introduce any traditional Chinese festivals, such as the Spring Festival, Dragon Boat Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival. Some relevant activity will be held during different festivals, such as making dumplings and eating zongzi, where you can not only enjoy delicious meals but also have good knowledge of Chinese life.
I hope you will find my recommendation helpfully.
Yours,
Li Hua
