假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I lived in my hometown ten years before. It was a quiet and beautiful village with green tree and clean water. I miss the days spend in my hometown so much.
When I was in my hometown, I always wake up early in the morning. Some people took a walk around while others was doing their farm work. I used to go to the hill nearby with my grandpa on every day with a little dog following them. There I’d like to play the dog while my grandpa was taking care of his fruit trees. Sometimes I would go to the river to catch fish. What happy I was!
I will keep the beautifully memory forever.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One night, the mother and her daughter went out for dinner together. The mother was a heavy smoker, that made her daughter feel very upset and worrying. She would often tell her mother that smoking was bad in her health, but her mother wouldn’t listen and refused to stop smoking.
However, during dinner that night, she noticed that her mother didn’t have a single cigarettes. In fact, she realized that she hadn’t seen her mother to smoke at all since the day before.
“I see that you haven’t smoked at all today. Are you trying to give smoking?” the daughter asked hopeful.
The mother answered: “No, I’m just feeling a little bit sick right now. I didn’t smoke cigarettes when I’m sick, because if I do, it takes me longer to get better.”
The daughter replied, “Well, I guess you would probably live a lot longer before you got sick a bit more often!”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning, I was in Starbucks for a cup of coffee and have some schoolwork to do. Suddenly, I noticed a gentleman next me, who was helping a bee climbed onto a plate in order to enjoy some well-placed honey. She might have had an injured wing. It was raining heavy and cold outside. So the man had brought her into the store in what she would hopefully warm up. I was moving by the man’s kindness of treating the honeybees. Although he wanted to keep a little insect company, but he set her free later. I hoped he was able to survive in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
This morning I went to my favorite restaurant for breakfast as usually. Touched by an elderly couple next to me, so I offered to pay for them. Knowing their request, the owner there told me one of her unforgettable day. It was a cold morning that she went with her baby to the store. Her baby was screaming and crying, and she said sorry to all the other people try to shop in peace. Then, when she got the bill, she realized that someone else have paid for it. It touched her so much that it brings her to tears. After she saw me doing this, it reminded her that moment which meant so much to her.
