1. 祝贺她获奖;
2. 请她分享经验;
3. 希望她明年也参加。
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As a saying go, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” However, it is necessary for us take exercise. By taking exercise we can get physically and mentally relaxing. At the same time, we can have a very well figure. If we don’t take exercise for a long time, we may easily fall sick.
Actually, I enjoy a various of outdoor sports, of which swimming in the sea is mine favorite. Because there are so many swimmer in swimming pool and the water is always dirty, I have a preference in swimming in the sea. Besides, I am also interested in playing the badminton.
3 . There are a lot of benefits to staying physically fit. You’ll have more energy, you’ll look great, and you’ll notice improvements in your health.
Find the time. Exercise is one of the most important aspects in staying (or becoming) fit and healthy.
Go outdoors. It is really good to work out at a gym—without air conditioning and televisions. But scientists report that exercising outdoors, at least part of the time, can have more benefits.
Be social. If you join other people in your exercise routine, you’ll see a positive influence in your results.
A.Make it a habit. |
B.Enjoy your exercise. |
C.Unfortunately, it’s not always easy to stay in great shape. |
D.In a word, it is absolutely good for you to stay physically fit. |
E.Finding a workout partner can help you to stick to your exercise. |
F.The road or sidewalk challenges your body in ways that gyms can’t do. |
G.Experts recommend that you should be active for at least 30 minutes per day. |
4 . For eight years, American Alex Honnold dreamed about climbing El Capitan in Yosemite National Park without any safety equipment. But whenever Honnold went to the park and looked up at El Capitan, he became frightened.
That changed last Saturday. Honnold, a world-class rock climber, reached the top of the great rock wall in about four hours. He used only his hands and feet. He is the first person ever to climb the 914-meter high granite wall alone and without ropes or safety equipment to catch him if he fell.
Honnold began preparing for his historic climb two years ago. He climbed El Capitan while wearing safety equipment countless times. He tried to memorize every hole he had to hold and the positions of his body. He repeated the climb again and again, until he felt sure enough to try the so-called “free solo” climb.
The most difficult part of the trip is about 700 meters off the ground. At that point, the very small holds in the rock are only big enough for a thumb to fit. But Honnold said the climb was more mentally difficult than physically difficult. “Each year I would show up and it would seem just much too daunting,” he said.
Observers say Honnold’s climb has pushed the limits in a sport that requires a high level of physical ability, risk-taking and mental strength.
The climb up El Capitan once took climbers several days to complete with the aid of ropes, safety equipment and a partner. But in the past 20 years, speed climbers working with a partner and using ropes have set records in reaching the top.
In January 2015, Tommy Caldwell and Kevin Jorgeson became the first to “free climb” the Dawn Wall, a very steep climb to the top of El Capitan, They used ropes only to catch them if they fell. They reached the top in 19 days.
Honnold has an extreme ability to control fear and his body for a long period of time.
1. What’s the most difficult part of Honnold’s free-solo climb according to himself?A.Mental difficulty. |
B.Physical difficulty. |
C.No safety equipment and no partner. |
D.The very small holds about 700 meters off the ground. |
A.impressive | B.attractive |
C.high | D.frightening |
A.They sang high praise of it. |
B.They thought it was meaningless. |
C.They criticized him for its danger. |
D.They thought it took too much time. |
A.El Capitan is Conquered by Humanbeing |
B.Climber Reaches the Top of El Capitan Without Ropes |
C.Climber Overcomes His Fear to Land on El Capitan |
D.No One Dares the Bare-handed Climbing Except Honnold |