增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father always sets example to me. Last Sunday, I see him put some food into a bag and go out with it. To my surprise, I noticed he give the food to some street children. One of my neighbor told me that my father was very kind to these children, but they even regarded him as their own father. Though we returned home, I talked to my father about it. He shared with me some sad stories about those poorer children. For many years, he helped with those children by give them food and care. I was deep moved and was proud of my father.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线, 并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My eight birthday was the most unforgettable and special one. On that day, I received a life-changing gift from my grandmother. It was a pair of roller skates. I couldn't believe my eye, when I opened the box. The shoes which total changed my life was so beautiful. That I was scared of in the past was to talk with others. I used to have no friends. The moment when I learned how to skate, I became confidence and outgoing. I made plenty friends by doing this. I'm thankful to my grandmother. Now I'm a happy girl but believe in myself. Meet new people, I smile without any fear.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线, 并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday I went skated on a lake with my best friend, Lily. We were having good time on the ice while I suddenly heard a scream “Help”. I turn around immediately and was surprised to see a boy falling into an ice hole. There was no doubt that the boy’s life was in great dangers. However, neither of them could swim, so we ran to ask for help as soon as possibly. A few minutes late, a policeman came and pulled the boy out of the water. The boy thanked to us again and again for saving his life. We were pleased for giving him a helping hand. How an unusual experience it was!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My daughter and I went to a supermarket where was two blocks away to buy some fruits. While she was queuing at the check-out，my daughter waited on a benches nearby. When finished, my daughter was seated next to elderly woman. I had a talk with her and find out that she was waiting for a bus to go home. I offered to take her home. She glad agreed. It was a nice chance to give up someone a ride when needing. The nice thing was what my daughter and I gained a new friendship. And we promised to visited and have lunch with the elderly woman.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day, my roommate and I have our appointments for vaccine（疫苗）. I was OK that day, but next morning I had some reactions—I started to feel uncomfortably. Every part of my body ached and I had difficult sleeping. I live far from my hometown, because there was no one to take care of me except my roommate. But he was also going through the same problems with me.
However, he forgot that all his own pains. He tried his best to look after me, which moved us a lot. What fortunate I am to have such a loved roommate!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stand in front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents. I had a hard time looking for him, and I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covering as much as 5 kilometer.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线, 并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On the Monday morning, I was on my way to school when suddenly I saw a boy knock down by a car. In a hurry, I ran over and found the boy was serious hurt with much blood on his face. Immediately, I called an ambulance and the boy is taken to the nearest hospital. For my relief, the boy was fine and would recover in a few day. I went away without giving my name. I was late for class, and I felt happy for all which I had done. As a proverb says, “ Help others is the source of happiness.” I think our duty to make the world a better place to live in.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Now I still remember my working experiences in a cafe last summer. One day, I entered into it to get a drink. However, that attracted my attention was not the menu, but a notice it said, “NOW HIRING”. I took look at the requirements but thought maybe I could have a try. On arriving home, I talk to my parents about getting a part-time job in the cafe during the summer vacation and they strong supported me. Determing to challenge myself, I went to the interview. Fortunately, I passed it and I was really proud of me!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.每句只允许修改1处，多者（从第2处起）不计分。
Although he is one of China's most famous scientist across the world, but Yuan Longping considers himself as a farmer, for he works the land to do his research. Indeed, his sunburnt face and arms and his slim but strong body are just like those of millions of Chinese farmers, for which he has struggled for the past five decades. She grows which is called super hybrid rice. In 1973, he become the first agriculturally pioneer in the world to grow rice that has a high output. This special strain of rice makes possible to produce 20% more of the crop in the same fields. Now more than 60% of the rice producing in China each year are from this hybrid strain.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning, I found it was snowing heavily. Attracting by the beautiful sight, I decided to go out to take some photo. The snow finally stopped at noon, and I couldn't wait go outside with my camera. As I walked on the path in the front of our building, I saw a boy suddenly slip in the ground. It was at the moment when I realized what I should do. Immediately, I returned home to get a broom but started to sweep the path. It was so a hard job that I sweated a lot. An hour late, the thick snow was cleared away. My neighbors all smiled and give me thumbs-up. I felt very happy that I had done something for my neighborhood.
