增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school is to organize English essay competition on the theme “Good habits and success”. We welcome students as well as teachers to submit your essay on the giving topic. Here are the requirements.
First, your essay must focus at your understanding of good habits and how they have led to your success, especially your academic success. Then, you were expected to support your views with concrete personal experiences or stories, what will make your essay more readable and convincing. Final, your essay should be no more than 500 word. And please send them to essaycontest@163.com no late than December 1st. Why not to pick up your pen and share your most touching moment with us?
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father always sets example to me. Last Sunday, I see him put some food into a bag and go out with it. To my surprise, I noticed he give the food to some street children. One of my neighbor told me that my father was very kind to these children, but they even regarded him as their own father. Though we returned home, I talked to my father about it. He shared with me some sad stories about those poorer children. For many years, he helped with those children by give them food and care. I was deep moved and was proud of my father.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear David,
It’s sad to know that you’ll have to have class at home.
Owing to the outbreak of the disease, we have to have online courses at home instead of attending school after the winter holiday. Actual it is not that bad. Online courses break across the limitation of time and space, provides us with great convenience to study. But it also has some disadvantages, one of that is its bad influences on your eyesight.
All in all, every coin has two sides, and the key is to use it properly. As far as I am concerned about, if you can make full use of every possible means appropriately study, it won’t matter if you study online or in the classroom.
Best wishes!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线, 并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My eight birthday was the most unforgettable and special one. On that day, I received a life-changing gift from my grandmother. It was a pair of roller skates. I couldn't believe my eye, when I opened the box. The shoes which total changed my life was so beautiful. That I was scared of in the past was to talk with others. I used to have no friends. The moment when I learned how to skate, I became confidence and outgoing. I made plenty friends by doing this. I'm thankful to my grandmother. Now I'm a happy girl but believe in myself. Meet new people, I smile without any fear.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Dear Jack, I am written to tell you my plan for the coming Chinese lesson. I’ve decided to teach you Tang poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 a.m. on Wednesday, that will last two hours. Tang poetry is a symbol of Chinese traditionally literature. It plays important part in Chinese culture, so it’s necessary for you to have a good knowledges of it. Beside, in order to learn Tang poetry well, you’d better got some information about Tang dynasty before class.
Would you to tell me if it’s convenient for you? Furthermore, when I meet with some puzzled questions, don’t hesitate to turn to me.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
My classmates made a plan to go to the seaside last week. I was very excited and ask for my parents’ permission. To my delighted, they agreed. We gathered at 7:30 but set off at once. It took us more than an hour to arrive there by bikes. When we arrived, there had been plenty visitors. Some were playing the volleyball on the beach; some were running happy along the seaside. In the distance, a few people were sitting on their chairs, enjoyed the beautiful sight. It made us happy was that we collected a lot of seashells. We enjoyed us that day and returned home at about three o'clock.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
But hope not lost. Soon after the quakes, the army sent 150,000 soldiers to Tangshan to digging out those who were trapped and to bury a dead. More than 10.000 doctor and nurses came to provide medicine care. Workers built shelters for survivors who home had been destroyed. Hundreds of thousand of people were helped. Water or food were brought into the city on train, truck, and plane. Slow, the city began to breathe again.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Health
Ladies and gentlemen, I’m honor to share the topic “health” with you. As a saying go, health is above wealth. You must feel the same way. Without health, we can’t achieve that we set out to do. With health, how can we catch up with the rapidly changed world? In brief, health is anything.
To keep health, we should have a balanced diet, form good living habits, take on enough exercise and keep a good state of mind. In conclusion, I personal believe a healthy life is the source of happiness. So let’s keep eye on our health and enjoy a healthy life. Thank you.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线, 并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday I went skated on a lake with my best friend, Lily. We were having good time on the ice while I suddenly heard a scream “Help”. I turn around immediately and was surprised to see a boy falling into an ice hole. There was no doubt that the boy’s life was in great dangers. However, neither of them could swim, so we ran to ask for help as soon as possibly. A few minutes late, a policeman came and pulled the boy out of the water. The boy thanked to us again and again for saving his life. We were pleased for giving him a helping hand. How an unusual experience it was!
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I love reading English novels. At twelve, I was able to read a popular novel calling Harry Porter. In the past three years, my vocabulary expanded greatly. Undoubtedly, reading novels play a role in my vocabulary and spelling. So I advise that we English learner should spend some time read English novels every day. When you begin to read English novels, remember that it’s not necessarily to understand each word. Not every word is important in a sentence. After you come into the word several times, you will understand how it means. You can also improve yours grammar after reading many English novels. So why not to open up a whole new world of literature by reading English novels?