增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)，不计分。
As far as I’m concern, houses in the future will be like to be built with environment-friendly materials. The materials are wonderful, that can not only produce electricity by take in air and sunshine, but also keep the houses warm in winter and cool in summer. In addition, if there is a accident happening in the house, the host will receive an alarm call immediate. Most importantly, once some disasters such earthquakes or storms happen, the house will fly away to avoid the danger.
In a word, with the develop of science and technology, I believe my dream will be come true. And the houses in the future will became more comfortable to live in.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am an out-going boy. I am write to apply to be a volunteer for the nucleic test campaign(核酸大检测) where will be held in Ruili. I think I am qualified for the job, so I have learned Burmese(缅甸语) since in childhood. Equally importantly, I was fluent in both Chinese and Burmese, so I have no difficulty in communicate with the Burmese. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as volunteer, I can help the Burmese for their tests and answer their question. I would be gratefully if you could offer him the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three months ago, I was walking on campus when I hear two students saying that Mrs. Wu, our English teacher, would retire in next month. I shared the news with all my classmate and we decided to hold a farewell party to thank her for that she had done. After school we began to make fully preparations. I bought lot of flowers from a shop. Beside, Nancy prepared a short video recorded our happy time. When Mrs. Wu came into the classroom, I presented the flowers to him. With tears in the eyes, she was greatly happy but moved by what we did.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am glad to know that a DV competition will be hold next month. All the senior students are welcome to film videos about the colorful school life, will go by soon. Those whom are interested are expected to limit the videos to five minutes and simple upload them to the school website.
Although not a expert in video-making, but I still want to have a try. I would take this chance to record several wonderful moment with my teachers and friends. From my opinion, nothing is more valuable and meaningful than the days with us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was young I did not know much about the harmful effect of smoking. I did not know, for example, that it could do terrible damage your heart and lungs or that it is more difficult for smoke couples to become pregnant. I certain did not know their babies may have a smaller birth weight or even be normal in some way. Neither do I know that my cigarette smoke could affect the healthy of non-smokers. However ,that I did know was that my girlfriend thought I smelt terrible. She said my breath and my clothes smelt, and that the ends of my fingers were turning to yellow.
That we all know, everyone has a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of diseases, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in great need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do however I can to keep everyone healthy. To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I’ll pay more attention on studies. After all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This March, I decide to take part in a speech competition. My speech was about Lei Feng’s story and his spirit. It was too long remember. Under my mother’s help, I spent two weeks recited my speech and poured all my emotions into the speech.
The day finally arrived, and I was the last competitor. I waited nervous. Seeing that some of the audience had already left, I felt a little disappointing. I didn’t win what that I had hoped for. When I returned to the classroom, the whole class stood up and applauded. My teacher said to him, “You are the better in our eyes.” I burst into tear and I felt happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
How time flies! My first term in senior school was coming to an end, but I can remember every day clear. There are many beautiful flowers or tall trees in our school. And at present a new teaching building being built in my school. The school is such attractive that I quite enjoy my study here.
However, I also had some problems. I had difficult in pronouncing English words correctly. As the result, I often made mistakes in class. Luckily, Miss Wang, my English teacher gave me some useful advices on English learning. I also joined in an English club at school, when I made some good friends.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When my sister was young, she likes to talk about her days at school with me. One day, she showed me five stars. She said a new teacher had given it to her. She seemed to really like this new teacher, that was a fresh graduate from one of the most famous university. My sister also mentioned that her new teacher was so good as her class adviser, or even better. In the fact, all her classmates liked the. New teacher because her kindness and friendliness. She also taught them beautifully songs. She sang very good and all the students admired her. Even before her graduation, she often went back to the school to visit her teacher.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As far as I'm concerned, houses in the future will be likely to be built with environment-friendly materials. The materials are wonderful, that can not only produce electricity by take in air and sunshine, and also keep the houses warm in winter and cool in summer. On addition, if there is an accident happen in the house, the host will receive an alarm call immediate. Most importantly, once some disasters such as earthquakes or storm happen, the house will fly away to avoid the danger.
In a word, as the development of science and technology,I believe my dream will be come true.And the houses in the future will become comfortable to live in.
