增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误仅限1词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
I went on a trip during the winter vacation, that was wonderful because I tried something I have never experienced before. One morning when we were walking along the beach, enjoyed sunshine, someone strongly advised that we went water skiing. However, we didn’t dare to face the challenge because that seemed dangerous to do it. My friends all encouraged me, so I finally joined in them. At last, I couldn’t stop screaming in fright. Later I felt that it was an amazement filling with fun. From an experience I learned that we should be brave enough to try something new. Only in this way we find a better self to meet any challenge.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.
Dear Calvin,
Knowing that you would like to travel to a place of interests in China, I’m writing to recommend Qingming Reverside Landscape Garden with you.
Locating in Kaifeng, Henan Province, Qingming Reverside Landscape Garden have a good reputation among tourists. Based on an appealed painting by Zhang Zeduan, Qingming Reverside Landscape Garden naturally which got its name. It offers you a chance go back to the Song Dynasty, but you can enjoy the unique culture and experience the special lifestyle of the local people then. It's well worth visiting.
Wish you a extremely happy journey and enjoy ourselves.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In my last piano class, each student was required play two tunes on the piano, according to that the teacher, a pretty lady, was going to give us marks. Soon it was my turn. In spite of all the prepare I had done, I was still very nervous. I say at the beginning, “Although as a new learner I don’t play well, but I want to express my love to my parents through the two tunes.” Lucky, everything went all right. But a teacher commented, “Actually, Julie, you did great! Therefore, I will just give you 9.5, hopes that you will always remember to believe in yourself.” His words are still reminding me to be self-confident.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My classmate Liu Ming succeeded in rescue a child from a burning house last Wednesday's morning. He was about to go to school while he heard a child crying. Looking around, he noticed a house burning fierce. Realizing a big fire had been broken out and a child was in danger, he called the police immediately. But he rushed into the burning house - searching for the crying child. The moment Liu Ming rushed out for the burning house with the trapped child, the house falls down. Liu Ming has set good example for us and we should learn from her heroic deeds.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, I met a foreigner whom asked me the way to the hospital. At the first, I didn't understand him very well. And then he repeated and tried to make him understood. Finally, I knew where he wanted to go but told him the way patient. As a poor English learner, I managed to let him know how get to the hospital. The foreigner thanks me for my help and I felt glad that I got a chance to communicate with others by English. At that time, I realized the importance of learn English well. From now on, I decided to study English well.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A woman which has recently had plastic surgery on her face now regrets the decision. The surgery takes place more than a month ago, but Ella Edwards still suffers from daily pain. This is stopping him from returning to a normal life. She has been to several hospitals and all the doctor say that the pain is unlikely stop any time soon. She may need to take painkillers for a long time. In an addition, Miss Edwards says the surgery makes her look unnaturally and that she is unable to make certain facial expressions.
Miss Edwards is unhappy with the results of the surgery. “I wanted to become more beautiful, and it hasn’t turned out well at all. I really regret have the surgery,” she said. “I’m very anxious for it.”
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Many years ago, it was a Sunday morning on my sixth birthday. My father bought me a new bike. I could not wait get on it and learn how to ride, so I begged my father to teach me in the garden.
Before I sat on the new bike, my father helped me put my two hands on the handlebars and my feet on the pedals. Then, he pushed the bike so that the pedals started to move. He was scared! But my father kept encouraging me. I could cycle around the garden shortly after my first try. It was amazed. But unluckily, I was such busy waving at him that I didn’t see a small tree in the front of me. I hit it and fell off the bike. It hurt a lot and I start to cry. My father encouraged me to stand up be brave and try again. Gradually, I was able to ride the bike more skillful.
I kept riding the bike until it was too small for me. It is still one of my most precious possession, for not only was it my first bike, and a symbol of my courage as well as my father’s love.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last summer vacation, I had a chance visit Cambridge University, what is located in a small town northeast of London. It is a bright and clear day in early July. Neatly-cut grass and soft willows gave me a burst of life and strong. Looking down from the bridge, I could see tourists admired the view at ease in rented boats. With shining waters in the sunlight, my heart was filled with tenderness. Sometimes, we all need so a beautiful view to get rid of anxiety but develop hope for a brighter future. Seeing the wonderfully sights, I knew there would always be something good in the store for me.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday afternoon I was chatting on the phone while something made me look up. On the other sides of the street, I saw my very elderly neighbor kneeling in the grass. I hang up the phone and ran out of the house. He was taking walk, and he tripped (绊倒) on the pavement. My neighbor was very large a man that I couldn't lift her on my own, so I ran back to call my husband! Together we got him standing, and he was unable to walk. Luckily, a woman, which bicycled by, came to help. She got on a lawn chair from my front yard and we got my neighbor seating. After a few minutes' rest, we sent him home.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词，
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today, I bought a cup of coffee for the old lady which was selling fruits and vegetables in the market near our school. At first, she was surprising and had a question mark on her face. She asked myself, "What is this for?" I replied, "This is appreciation for all your hard works in this cold weather." Then, she had bright smile on her face and was very happy. The look on her face made me proudly. Now, I realize in that every part of the world had a connection. The biggest thing I need to learn is what to connect and I believe that kind is the master key.
