增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m a Chinese student taking summer courses in London now. Hearing that volunteers are need for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in the local gallery, I can’t waiting to apply for the position. The following is my advantages.
Firstly, I can express myself free in fluent English so there isn’t any trouble in communicating with visitor. Besides, I have participated in several similar activities, that enriched my relevant experience. Last but not least, as Chinese painting lover, I know a lot of about this art form, enabling me to help visitors have a better understanding of the paintings. If accepted, I’ll try your best to introduce those wonderful works seriously and answer questions patiently. I believe I can do the work well.
Thank you for your consideration. I’m looking forward to hear from you.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Network learning has increasingly become a important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve problems. But being smart online learners have its advantages and disadvantages.
First of at all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the educational resources to broaden the horizon. Beside, we can take the initiative(主动)in our study by yourselves without time and space limit.
Of course, these disadvantage are as follows. Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, we can't tell the difference between the true and the false, that may be harmful to our study and life. On the other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, make it difficult for us not be affected.
In conclusion, we should have a well understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In recent years, with the popularity of digital devices, students pay little attention to their handwriting. As the result, their handwriting is not so good as it is in the past.
In order to protecting our Chinese characters and write both nicely but neatly, we’d like to offer some advices. Firstly, spend little time online so that we can have more time read and take notes. Moreover, we’d better form the habit of practicing handwriting and keeping diaries on every day. However, it is better to write to our relatives and friends rather than send e-mails. Which the saying goes,” The style is the man.” Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students. So please attach great importance to our handwriting in future.
Let’s take action now!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm Li Hua from your class and I'm writing to ask that whether you could write a recommendation (推荐)letter with me. I'm applying to take part in an cultural exchange programme to be held in London this summer holiday, which required me to provide a recommendation letter from my English teacher. Could you please comments on my English ability, class perform as well as my personality? I'll appreciate if you can refer to my statement attaching to this letter.
Thank you from the bottom of your heart for sparing time from your tightly schedule to do me a favor.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandparent live in a mountain village. My mother and I often go to visit them. In the front of their house runs a small river, in which the water is very clearly. My mother is fond the river and she often washes clothes in the river. Last week, we visited them again. The arrive of us made my grandpa and grandma very happy. My mother also felt very pleasing, thinking that she could do any washing in the river. I reminded my mother what the water in the river was cold in the morning, and she ignored me. She had her own way. She brings rubber gloves that could keep out the cold. Then I happily joined my mother in washing those clothes.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My speaking English was not standard at first. My English teacher once asked me to read a text, but all my classmates laughed me. I didn’t understand why. Late, my friend told me that my pronunciation was really strange. It was the first time that I have read an English text in class, and failed. I felt very ashamed. Then, I didn’t want to speak English in the front of anyone.
When my English teacher knew it, she began to correct my pronunciation. With his encouragement, I put my heart into read words, phrases and texts. He told me that when there’s a will there’s a way. Thanks to him, I have made great progresses.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(╲)划掉;
修改:在错的词下面画一条横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Some theme parks are not only amusing but also educational. Take the PCC in Hawaii as example. The PCC is setting in 42 acres of beautiful countryside where visitors can see seven different traditional Polynesian island village. Villagers from many island communities come to show visitors its styles of dress and different customs. You can learn how they make clothes from bark(树皮) and what they climb very tall trees with their bare feet. They also tell you about their social customs and showing you their cooking methods and their dances. Their most important skill is boat-building, that allows the islanders to explore all the islands around. We know that their history they were sea travellers moved from island to island. Now they use those boat-building skills to make long boats and show the races and battles that they took part in them long ago.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处,每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Alice,
I have just got a good news to tell you. I win a national prize for painting last week. My father was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying there for half a month, visiting place of interest and practicing my English as well. We’ve been written to each other for nearly a year now. I have often dreamed of talk face to face with you. I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that time. Perhaps you will go out do some sightseeing together.
Best wishes!
Yours
Lily
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉;
修改:在错的词下面画一条横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
As we all know, travelling can be an excited experience. Let me give you some advices that you have to pay attention. You can find out more about your destination by surf the Internet before you set out. You needn’t take too many cash. Since it can be very convenient to pay in cash, using cheques is much more reliable. In additional, it will be wise of you to take an umbrella in case of it should rain. And if you are to travel abroad, you’d better understand the culture and diversity. Keep this in mind that being polite in foreign countries can help you had a wonderful trip.