增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today we experienced enjoyable period of English class as usually. As soon as the bell rang, our teacher began to divide us from several groups to do the writing. After we knew when to do next, we set out to held a discussion immediately. Some students shared their ideas about the main point s while others added the detailed informations. Then we finished it quickly. Comparing to the compositions of the other groups, our is better. Whenever I passed by the Learning Garden on the back wall of our classroom in this week, our composition catch my eyes, reminding me of the excellent team work of our group.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday evening Alice was busy prepare for her tomorrow’s test when suddenly loud noises came into her room. Her neighbor was watching football match on TV in his room.The noises were so loudly that she couldn’t go on studying. She covered her ear with her hands, try to keep the noises out, and it was no use. Alice got impatient.
So she has to go to explain his difficulty. After hearing that she said, her neighbor apologized and turned down the TV immediately. Alice thanked to him and went back to continue her study.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Nov 4th, we took a bus to Flower Planet and take part in some group activities. At noon, we began to make wontons (馄饨) together. After a while, the plate was filling with wontons of different sizes and styles that we had made. One of my classmate brought the wonton plate to a kitchen and began cooking. When she carried the plate back, we were so eager see the fruits of our labor that we all gathered around him and instantly felt hungry. We could hardly wait for to put the wontons into our mouths. I ate them in such a hurry which I couldn’t even taste anything, and I still ate with great delight.
It was real a meaningful trip.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除;.把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I strongly call on everyone to stop feed animals improperly in natural scenic areas. My family and he just went on a trip to the city park which there are beautiful lakes, streams and plants. Therefore, I found that many tourists fed the ducks, fish and other animals in the park with snacks they bring. In my an opinion, such behaviour will have a negative effect with both the animals and the environment.
Food made for human-beings may contain too many salt and fat, which can cause seriously health problems if animals eat too much. Also, food thrown into the lakes or left on the ground could regarded as pollutants and it will further destroy the living condition of animals.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One morning, I was cleaning the storage room but saw my skateboard. I took it out and wiped away the dust. Unconscious, I put my foot on it and tried to get back that feeling I had for the first time I rode it. But since so much time had passed, it didn’t come easily. I was so disappointing that I couldn’t find a point of balance. I grew frustrated. It took me several years to learn how to skateboard, but it took so few years forget all of these skills.
I start with the basics and tried over and over again. As you concentrated on the board,I found it quite magically that all I was thinking was about how to skateboard well, instead of comparing my skills now and before. Hour later. I found that my ability had returned.
增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I know that a Chinese painting exhibition hold by the local government is about to kick off in the art gallery. Now I want to apply to the voluntary job. Firstly, I’m proficient in English, but I can communicate with foreigners fluently. Secondly, I am so responsible and outgoing that I can get along well with other. What’s more, I am a lot of more experienced because I work as a volunteer in our local museum 3 months ago. Most importantly, I have good knowledge of Chinese art, which enables me to introduce Chinese paintings to visitor clearly and expertly. I think I am suit for this job. I would appreciate it whether you could give me a chance.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I still remember my first day of school when I am introduced to the concept of labor education. At the first, I didn’t understand what it was necessary for us to learn how to plant trees and fix things around the school. However, as I participated in these activities, I gradual appreciated the value of learning practical skills. Not only did it teach me the importance of team works and responsibility, but it also allowed me gain a sense of satisfaction. I am grateful with the opportunities that school labor education provided to me, but the lessons I learned will always stay with me. Overall, I believe that experience labor activities is beneficial for myself.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(1)画掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Young children learn new words by imitating the speakers around of them. When a 3-year-old kid hears a new word that catches her interest, she may use it repeated for a day or two until she feels comfortably with it. She established its meaning from context, often by trial and error. She adds new words to her vocabulary so she needs them to make herself understand. Young children don’t learn the meanings of new words by looking it up. Sometimes they ask adult directly, but more often they simply infer meanings from context. They figure out that new words mean by paying attention to how they are used. Adults need to do same.
增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Like million of other people, Mr. Griffin who is a head of IT for marketing agency Rise at Seven, kept a dog during the pandemic. With most of us working home during lock downs, many people wanted pets’ companionship.
When bosses require staff to return to the office at least a few days a week, have a pet dog can become a problem. You have to see if a friend or relative can look after it, and pay for expensive doggier day care, or even potentially try to get a new job that allow you to continue to work from home all the time. It was to help employees such as Mr. Griffin more easily return to the office after the pandemic which Rise’s bosses decided to let everyone bring their dogs to the office.
Mia King, one of the firm’s executive says that rather than being a distraction, having dogs at work has actually made staff work hard. Because they make everyone happy, and cheery staff are more product.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除;把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。
With the homeworks finished last Saturday, I went to countryside to visit my uncle. At about 8, I set out and arrived at my uncle’s after an hour. Seeing me, he felt very exciting and welcomed me warmly. I handed him the fresh fruit and flowers bought in the supermarket but he gave me some snacks. Then we went to catch fish. It was not long since we caught a lot of fish. Have brought them home, my uncle cooked some for me. After lunch, I helped him bathing the dog and he praised me with a big smile in his face. When it was time for me to leave, my uncle gave me some gifts that I liked very much, and hugging me. It was an amazing day which I will never forget it forever.
