增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除;.把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I strongly call on everyone to stop feed animals improperly in natural scenic areas. My family and he just went on a trip to the city park which there are beautiful lakes, streams and plants. Therefore, I found that many tourists fed the ducks, fish and other animals in the park with snacks they bring. In my an opinion, such behaviour will have a negative effect with both the animals and the environment.
Food made for human-beings may contain too many salt and fat, which can cause seriously health problems if animals eat too much. Also, food thrown into the lakes or left on the ground could regarded as pollutants and it will further destroy the living condition of animals.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday evening, my friend and I went out to eat in the restaurant. While eat there, we happened to notice an elderly woman sitting alone. Before thinking about it for a while, I walked over to her and asked that if I could sit with her. She said yes and we began talking. Later I learned the woman has lost her husband and that that day would have been their 60 wedding anniversary. Hearing this, I asked her join me and my friend and she was exciting to do so. We shared a meal together and exchanged story. On our way back, I told my friend, “Always be kind to people. You never know what we are going through.”
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
To enrich the school life, a activity named the Youth Art Competition will held by the Students’ Union next Friday. All the students were welcome to participate in the activity. Thought of the convenience, we require you to submit your basic informations online. You must include your name and phone number, what can help us get in touch with you timely. Because of there are many styles of traditional arts in the activity, remember to chose a group when you sign up. Prizes of the competition are very attractively, including twelve finalists and one special prize winner. So what are we waiting for?
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
If you ask me what was the great challenge for me in 2021, I would put physics on the top of the list. Before the new term begin, I thought learn physics would be a piece of cake. Therefore, when the course began, keeping up the teacher in class became difficult for me. Seeing the other classmate doing quite well in the class, I felt really worried. Gradually I lost my interest in it.
My teacher felt my worries. He often came to talk to me after class, asking that I had any questions with the course. With your help, I began to make a progress, little by little.
I learned a lot from this experience. That is, face my weaknesses bravely, and never gave up.
增加:在漏字符号(∧)下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在划横线的词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一个;2.不得改变原文意思。
Last weekend, my family and I paid∧visit to my grandma in the countryside. I like to visit my grandma because she always has so much interesting stories to share. She often tells me a lot about the little wooden house which she was born. For me, her amazed stories seem to be endless. Sometimes he will even show me an old newspaper article about her bravery in rescuing nine villager in a fire. Talking about history and culture is her favorite. She is good at gardening as well as. The vegetables that are grew in her garden taste delicious. Much to my delight, she leads a happily life.
On the way home, I said to my mother, “Grandma may be old, and she sure is a cool person to get along with.”
增加:在漏字符号(Ʌ)下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在划横线的词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及 其修改均仅限一词;
2.不得改变原文意思。
Dear myself,
Today, you might be 29 years old. You probably already Ʌ achieved my dream. You chose to work in your hometown as the doctor.
When you were young, you see some of your relatives die young because of lacking good medical resources. The idea of become a good doctor or helping more people in poor areas rooted (根植于) in your heart at that time.
I know it’s hardly being a medical major student. While seeing the smile face of your patients, you definitely will be satisfying. Try your best to save the more people! I am working hard for our dream right now and looking forward Ʌ meeting you in the future.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was on my way to school on last Saturday afternoon, I saw a mother and her son preparing go across the street. A mother was going to run the red light while her son prevented her. The mother felt embarrassed and stops. With more and more cars coming into our families, it had greatly improved our lives. But unlucky, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accident. Traffic safety is everybody’s business and we must obey the rules and we can tell our parents not to drink before we drive, not to run red lights, not to talk and laugh while drive etc.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The first day I came to high school, I meet my deskmate. She was a very nice person but took me to look around the new environment. She had one thing that impressed with me so much, which was his tough spirit. When work in a group, sometimes I wanted to give up the task, because it was difficult, but my deskmate would encourage me not give up. Now I won’t give up easy, because I well remember that my deskmate has taught me. I am so lucky to make friend with her, and I believe the things learning from her will be very useful in my life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, I shop for books in a bookstore. While choosing a book, I suddenly found that my cellphone was almost dead. I was anxiously because I had to use my cellphone pay for a taxi home. I looked for around but couldn’t find any outlets in the bookstore. I asked a salesgirl that there was a charging service. To her joy, there was a wireless charging device. She helped me operate it, and the cellphone ran out of power, failing to charge. Just then the bookstore owners passed by and told me to charge it in his office. I was very grateful. Twenty minutes late, he brought my cellphone back. How a good gentleman!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With summer vacation around the corner, some students just can’t contain our excitement, because it is the best season to go swimming. Although swimming is a good kind of exercise that help us keep healthy, but it can also be very dangerous sometimes. Here is some advices for you. Firstly, you are not allowed swim alone in the river. It would be better to go with your parents. Next, you should do some warm-up exercises after getting into the water, that will reduce the risk of getting into trouble. Lastly, you’d better not swim for too long, or you will feel too tiring. Kept this in mind, you will have a safely holiday.