增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last night, I watched a TV program, what was about transforming a small old apartment into the modern place. I couldn’t believe my eyes when I see the final image the house. My father, an architect, tells me that changing the structure and even if how the walls look is fairly hardly. I really like the idea that it is irresponsible to knocking down a building to build a new one when you can just improve them. It was also amazed that the program represented a very simple lifestyle. It is no doubt that such a program will inspire people to live well in small places.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, I went a rock climbing in a climbing gym. It had several walls covered with hand and toe holds of differently colors. I tied a rope to myself and my coach held one ending of the rope, guaranteeing his safety. There were many route on the climbing wall. I chose an easy one but reached the top quickly. And then I tried a harder one, what cost me more time and effort. Though my legs kept shaken after the climb, I was very content. I am eager to go here next time and I hope I will be qualified to take part outdoor climbing soon.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently, it was reported that a girl got her feet stick in a waste pipe because she kept looking at her mobile phone. It sounds a kind of ridiculous. However, when we look people around us, we can find that new technologies take up much of people time. They like talking on the Internet, which makes themselves ignore things in real life. No matter what they are done, waiting for the bus or having dinners with some friends, smart phones are always in their hands. It seems that the smart phone had controlled their life total. Life is beautiful if we can fully enjoy it, and we will miss many amazing moments.
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m one of your customer. I ordered a set of books on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t received it until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were too poorly packed up that the cover of one book were torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missed.
I’m sorry to have received such poorly service, and I believe I have every right ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money back or deliver a new set of books to me. Beside, I’d like to be informed of the process of you deal with my complaint.
Looking forward to your reply.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mr. Green，
I'm Li Hua, a student whom you once teach spoken English. Now our school asks me invite you to be a spoken English teacher on the English Summer Camp during the summer holiday. Here is anything about the activity. The camp lasts from July 20 and August 10, 2011. In the morning, you'll give three spoken English classes so you are expecting to prepare different topic to communicate with students. In the afternoon, there're main outside activities such as having some picnics and visit parks and museums, etc. I hope you will accept the invitation even if you have free time.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning, Li Lin and I went to see Mr. Wang, he used to be our English teacher.
On arriving at Mr. Wang’s, we presented our gifts to him, which he liked them very much. He talked about some interested things and persons he remembered. When he began to teach us, I was quite poor with English. Learned about this, Mr. Wang offered lots of help to me. Without his help, I wouldn’t have made so rapid progress. Mr. Wang is retired now. He leads active life and does some voluntary works. Before we leave, he impressed upon us the importance of knowledge and inspired us to study hardly. We wished him a happy life forever.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I still remember that night after my senior high school entrance examination. Even though I was at the top of my class , I was not good in history. At around 10 pm, I tried to sleep ,and my eyes just wouldn’t close. Suddenly , I saw my dad coming into my room, with smile on his face ,asked me to go to sleep. I told him that I couldn’t get to sleep. He called me into my room and put his hand on my head. I didn’t even realize that I had fallen asleep. I took up my exam the next day and the result was satisfied. It’s tough to put into word what parents do for us but times like this reminds me just how wonderful parents truly are.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My friend Li Ming was always upset about some small things and couldn’t keep calm. His classmates were tired for him and often ignored him. Teachers were concerning about him and often talked with him face to face . Therefore , all the effort were in vain.
One day at dusk, he suffered a stomachache. The teachers and students sent him to hospital without delay and take good care of him. After he recovered, he was grateful to his teachers and classmates. From then on , he no longer disturbs his classmates and often joins them in settle some problems .He is getting along good with his classmates now .
As far as I am concerned ,it’s the love and care from the teachers and his classmates which changed him entire.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. One Monday morning, when she entered the classroom, we found that she was a young or beautiful lady. Then she introduced herself and said they shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu. Later, she asked us to go to the blackboard and said something about ourselves with English in turn. When it was my turn, I felt so shyly that I didn’t dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kindly, “Don’t afraid I believe you can do them well” At the last, 1 went to the blackboard. She praised me for which I had done.
