增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My friend Li Ming was always upset about some small things and couldn’t keep calm. His classmates were tired for him and often ignored him. Teachers were concerning about him and often talked with him face to face . Therefore , all the effort were in vain.
One day at dusk, he suffered a stomachache. The teachers and students sent him to hospital without delay and take good care of him. After he recovered, he was grateful to his teachers and classmates. From then on , he no longer disturbs his classmates and often joins them in settle some problems .He is getting along good with his classmates now .
As far as I am concerned ,it’s the love and care from the teachers and his classmates which changed him entire.