增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, I accompanied my little brother to swimming pool. There, he soon got along with a boy possess a water gun and they played with the toy together. When my brother ran excitedly with the water gun, he scratch the boy’s neck by accident. Shallowly as the scratch was, it was clear. I hurried to comfort the boy, but called the boy’s father. I feared he’d blame for my brother and me. Which was quite unexpected was that I just said it was no big deal. Seeing my brother hang his head in shames, the father comforted my brother, which made me quite touching.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dewey is my pet dog. While water is his favorites, he is also a big fan of snow. One winter day, I take him to a huge snowy field where he could run and play. Before Dewey started to play, I thought would be nice to take a photo of a snowy field. Dewey was such excited to run around in the snow that he couldn’t help ran right through the photo, but ended up helping me create something fantastic. I decided the photo couldn’t be keeping to me alone because of it was just too great. I posted it online to see that anyone else would find it just as wonderfully—and of course, they absolutely did.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend has witnessed my active participation in the community service with my classmates, the theme of it was “Caring for the Elderly”. As scheduled, we arrived at the nursing home on the morning, where we helped mop the floor, dust the furniture and clean all the window there. After that, we made dumplings with them, chat together happily.
Tired although I was, it was rewarding and meaning to see smiles on their faces. Not only did I bring joy to them, but I also found confidence in keeping themselves company. It is the voluntary labour which enables me to understand what Chinese traditional virtues are. To be frank, I have benefited it greatly.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Not only do our parents give us life, they give us endless love and support, always share our happiness and sorrow. I’m very grateful for my parents. They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support myself. I still remember once I was serious ill, they were so worried and keep me company the whole night. Now, I’m the senior 3 student. Luckily, my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging word. Furthermore, they give me enough personal space, what I appreciate so much. When I grow up, I’ll try my best to make my parents to live a happy life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month, our school hold an activity themed “Forbid Littering in School”. It was a true unforgettable experience and has left a deep impression on myself. Aiming to solve the problems causing by littering in our school, and the activity called on us to pick up rubbish. Some student used to ignore our school rules and litter everywhere, what made it annoying to walk around the school. By taking an active part, we have come to realize the importance of protecting the living environment and many of us volunteer to help those who often breaks the school rules get rid from their bad habit of littering. We believe that by working together we can make big difference.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Xi’an Forest of Stone Tablets, initially set up in the 1087, was official named in the Qing Dynasty. It is an art treasure house where is composed of more than 3,000 stone tablets from the Han Dynasty through the Qing Dynasty. The museum is naming “Forest of Stone Tablets” because the numerous stone tablets housing in the museum look like a dense forest. The museum was a treasure house of ancient Chinese calligraphy as well as a good collection of historical documents and stone carvings in various styles. Moreover, the tablets bear evidences to the cultural exchanges in ancient China and show the great achievements of that period. However, for the visitors to Xi’an, the Forest of Stone Tablets is of great attraction in addition terracotta warriors. We will surely be impressed by its rich culture.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The first few days after get home from college were OK, but then I began to feel rather boring and lonely. Most of my friends was either away on holiday or had holiday jobs. I tried to get a job myself and without success. I was beginning to wish I had not come home while I saw an advertisement for holiday courses on the local newspaper. For a small fee I could try lots of different activity organized by the town's youth club. Each activity lasts half a day. I met some students from Bulgaria who invited me visit Bulgaria next year. In a fact, it was one of the best summer holidays I've ever had!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I would like to talk about my favorite sport, running. I only take it up a few months ago thanks to my colleagues whom are professional runners. I spend more than two hours run every afternoon. There are several reasons why I am fond this sport. First, it is the pretty cheap and easy sport to try. All I need is a pair of running shoes. Second, this is a sport that can bring us some new friends. Third, since I started this sport I have hardly caught any more common health issue like fever, flu, or cold. What’s more, I can show higher productivity than before and work for longer hours without feeling tiring. All in all, I recommend that everyone tries this sport.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mom is an excellent cook in the neighborhood. All my friend love to have supper at my house because of they love my mom’s cooking. I especial like my mom’s dumplings, what have various kinds of fillings. And all of them are delicious. When we had a neighborhood gathering every one insists that his mom should do all the cooking. Though sometimes tiring, she is willing to cooking things for others. Seeing people enjoy what she cooks are her happiest time. I’ve decided to be good a cook as my mom so I’m learning how to cook now.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Moved stories happen around us every day. Emma, who is the best friend I’ve made in the class, is always there for me when I am in the need of help. Recently, I found myself getting upset easy. I often complains about the stress and even couldn’t concentrate studies. Emma noticed my problem but spent two hours with me one day, talking about her own stress and what she was dealing with difficulties. From him, I learned that the only approach to beat difficulties is keeping trying instead of complaining. And I felt many more confident to fight against them together with Emma.
