增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I adopted the baby dog from an animal shelter. I was impressed by its lovely appearance for the first time I saw it. I brought it home but decided to build a warm home for it. Due to my tight budget, I had to make a cage for it by me. First, I watched various video relevant to making cages. Then I reach the market to buy the materials. After that, I had the materials tying together with strings. About three hours later, the cage set up. I put the dog into the cage. It wagged its tail happy. Although the cage looked strange, I felt satisfying with what I had done.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(⋀ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
The other day my parents and I took trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As is known, it’s a famous mountain with different kind of plants and animals. The weather was fine and we were on high spirits. It was about noon while we arrived at the foot of the mountain. We were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we feed monkeys, visited temples and told stories. On the way up, I was busy took photos since the scenery was beautiful and attractively. Time passed quickly, and night has fallen before we knew it. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep the moment when my head touched the pillow.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, I tried to take a book from the top shelf in my room. It was such tall that I couldn't reach the book on it. So I took an old chair placing beside a window and stepped on it. Which shocked me was that the chair breaks immediately. I had a fall down and was badly injured. Luckily, my sister noticed the accident and took her to hospital at once. I required to stay there for two weeks. I regretted not check the chair's condition before using it. After that accident, I did things careful in daily life and paid more attention to my safe.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改l0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandparents live in a small mountain village, in that there are many trees grew well, including several walnut trees. Every year my grandparents gave me walnuts and last year Grandpa told me with a sadly look on his face that he had no walnuts. I asked why. He said the squirrels lad eaten both the walnuts. I was very surprised, because we had never had squirrels there ago. Grandpa sad probably the squirrels had brought from the south. He said he wouldn’t let them get away with then bad deeds. I try to persuade Grandpa not to hurt the lovely squirrels, promising I would rather not to eat walnuts. Grandpa agreed to his request.
增加: 在缺词处加—个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
Mom was cooking while I was playing in my bedroom. All of the sudden, I heard my mom calling me. It was turned out that she asked me to buy some salts at the grocery store. I hesitated for a while. But see there was no one to depend, I had to do it by myself. I put on my shoes, took out an umbrella and walked out. When I went downstairs, I met a neighbor, whom asked me why I was going out on such hot a day. After I explained the reason, she said that I had several bags at home and offer to give me one. She was a true kind woman.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mother is outgoing and optimistic woman. All what she does influences me greatly. Last Sunday, when the rain was just over, she persuaded me to travel around the city by bikes together with her to enjoying the fresh air. During the trip, her bike suddenly slip and she lost her balance, fallen to the ground. Although covered in mud, but she laughed and said it was lucky for herself not to be injured. I was deep touched by her optimism. Now, whenever I am faced by challenges, I tend to view them in a positive way.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jack,
Heard that you have been addicted to Tiktok recently, I feel terrible sorry and can’t wait to write this email in reply to your problem. Actually, this is commonly seen that the growing number of teenagers get crazy about Tiktok. They spend plenty of time watching and sharing videos online, what makes it hard for them to focus on study. As a result, action must taken before things get worse.
In my opinion, you’ d better try and develop a few other hobby. Besides, communicating with friends face to face will do the trick. That’s why this can help you shift your attention and formed good habits. I do hope my suggestions will be of greatly helpful to you. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
After a plane crashed in South China on March 21st, rescued workers managed to find two black boxes. The black boxes may provide the key to understand why the plane crashed. When black boxes are recovered in well condition, investigators (调查员) can analyze and produce a report on their content for about three months, but it can take much longer when they are damaged, said Li Xiaojin, a professor from the Civil Aviation University of China. One of the black box from the crashed Flight MU5735 was found on March 23rd. The second black box is recovered on March 27th. The black boxes are not black. Therefore, they are painted bright orange to aid in their recovery after accidents. They are usually placed in the tail of a plane, which they are more likely to survive a crash. It can work for 30 days without any electricity.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday morning, it was early and I hadn’t went to school. I stood in front of my home, seen my parents off to work. My neighbor started driving to her job, too. Out of polite, I waved to her. At same time, I called out to my parents, “Bye! I love you!” I smiled as my neighbor turned around. And then he waved back at me. My heart sank down. My face grew hot with embarrassments. But soon it turns into a good laugh. I learnt a lesson that day which one should always be friendly, but be more carefully with multi-person goodbyes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all know, walking is a good way of exercising and is benefit to our health. It can not only reduce the risk of many kinds of diseases and also build up the bones. It’s safe than many other ways of exercising, especially for the old and it’s easy to do without considering rule. Besides, walking can also help we lose weight. What should we pay attention during the walk? First, we should wear which are comfortable in order that we can relax. Second, we should walk fast enough to let us for breathe with difficulty but still be able to talk. Third, it’s quite important to walk with our arms move freely. Most important, we should do it every day.
