增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The famous environmentalist, Professor Jin, was invited deliver a speech in our school last Friday. He started with an universally accepted theory explaining how the Earth began. We were shocking that there were so many kinds of living thing on the planet long time ago. However, he also showed how the appearance of some species happened later. It was human activities that large changed the global environment. He pointed out we should attach importance to protect the environment. It decided that we were able to continue to live on this planet in the future or not. I was deeply impressed by her speech. I think of it is important to protect our only home.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mother is my the best friend. She loves me and cared for me. When I am in any kind of trouble, I seek help and supports from her. She gives me many of her time, and does all she can to comfort me and make me happily. My mother always wishes her good health, happiness and success. I cannot thanking my mother enough for all that she does to me. I always feel that anyone who have such a wonderful mother as mine should be truly thankful. I love my mother and want make her proud of me.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have practiced any small acts of kindness such as smiling at people or making some small talks with even strangers. Yesterday, I went a step farther. I spent about half an hour think about every single person to which I am grateful. I wish them all the best. I also thought of our beautiful planet and silent expressed my gratitude for the stars, the sun, moon, the water, the plants and animals around us and so on. Because of we are nothing without them, these things made me smile. I wished for peace both in every single person or in the world.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day when we were playing the basketball, I saw Tim wearing a pair sneaker of my style. I thought they were my shoes, so I shouted angry and blamed him for using my personal possessions without permit. Then I went back to the dorm after he could say anything. I opened the door only to find mine own sneakers just under my bed. For a while, I stood there still, shocking and guilty. When realizing my act must have hurt him, immediately I rush to the court to apology to him sincerely. Fortunately, though he was angry and sad, he pardoned me. With my relief, the conflict ended happily.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With society develops fast, many people think that we must have two friends in our life. One is the library and the another is the playground. If we can make friend with the library, which means we can have enough new books to read. As we know it, information changes so fast and reading can make us wise and intelligent. On other hand, if we have the playground, we can take daily exercise to strengthen our body.
Although I am busy with my study, I still tried to spare some time to read some books and to do some sports every day. After I go to bed, I read some books included literature and news for 15 minutes. And if possible, I sometimes get up 30 minutes early than usual to walk to school instead of taking a bus. Then I can be strong, smart and happy forever.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During the past ten years, I suffered from terrible headaches. And it seems to be getting bad. Late last night, I got a sudden headache that was worse than all the others. It was so terrible that I could hardly bear them. Although I took all kinds of painkillers, but I didn’t feel any better. It seemed that there was nothing else I could do, because I called my doctor and asked him to come over. One of our neighbor happened to be with us at the time. He was not a doctor, but he offered his help, “Do you mind if I try a special kind of traditional Chinese treatment for you? These needles might help with your headache.” I agree. He quickly took out a few needles from his bag. Without the moment’s delay, he put a few needles into the skin on my head in several different places. Before long, I felt complete good.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Peter likes experiencing different cultures. Last month, he had a tour Beijing. To make full use of his limited time, he made a list of places of interests he wanted to see. The Forbidden City was her first destination. There were such many palaces that Peter even lost his way. The grand palaces were left a deep impression on Peter. Then he went to the National Museum, where got thousands of objects displaying. The next day, Peter watched Beijing Opera in a traditionally tea-house. What excited he was! He said that he had fallen in love to Chinese culture.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起),不计分。
Last term, I hosted an exchange student calling Jack from the Great Britain to our school. He really cared for Chinese Culture. Jack asked me to show himself around my city on weekends. So I took him to many local place of interest and we also go to the theater to watch a show of Peking Opera. He was so fond of the performance what he decided to learnt it. My father happened to know a master of Peking Opera and introduced Jack to him. Jack was great honored to be one of his students. Putting his heart into it, Jack made a rapid progress. When he returned England, he gave a performance in his school, what helped him win much admiration from his classmates.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last year I went to Canada to study as a international student. At school we did many team sports such as like soccer, baseball and basketball. At that time, my favorite team sport were basketball and I was good for it. I play basketball two days a week on Wednesdays and Fridays. I also went swimming at school. But I didn’t really like swimming what I thought was a little bit bored! I lived in Calgary and it was very coldly in winter, so we did a lot winter sports. It always snowed in winter but I went skiing every weekend. It was great fun!
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出增加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
The famous environmentalist, Professor Jin , was invited deliver a speech in our school last Friday He started with an universally accepted theory explaining how the Earth began. We were shocking that there was so many kinds of living things on the planet a long time ago, Besides, he also showed how the disappear of some species happened later. It was human activities that large changed the global environment. He pointed out we should attach great importance to protect the environment, which decided that we would be able to continue to live on this planet in the future. I was deeply impressed by her speech and I think of it is important to protect our only home.