增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, I went a rock climbing in a climbing gym. It had several walls covered with hand and toe holds of differently colors. I tied a rope to myself and my coach held one ending of the rope, guaranteeing his safety. There were many route on the climbing wall. I chose an easy one but reached the top quickly. And then I tried a harder one, what cost me more time and effort. Though my legs kept shaken after the climb, I was very content. I am eager to go here next time and I hope I will be qualified to take part outdoor climbing soon.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
One day when I was on my way to home from school, I found a building on fire. Immediately I called the firefighters.
Several minutes lately, the firefighters arrived and tried their best control the fire. With the help of the firefighters, a lot of peoples left the building safely. Sudden a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters everything. But they couldn’t understand what she says. I went to the woman and asked her that was happening. She told me that his daughter was still in the building. I told the firefighters about it at once. They immediately ran into the building and rescued a little girl.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mr. Green，
I'm Li Hua, a student whom you once teach spoken English. Now our school asks me invite you to be a spoken English teacher on the English Summer Camp during the summer holiday. Here is anything about the activity. The camp lasts from July 20 and August 10, 2011. In the morning, you'll give three spoken English classes so you are expecting to prepare different topic to communicate with students. In the afternoon, there're main outside activities such as having some picnics and visit parks and museums, etc. I hope you will accept the invitation even if you have free time.
增加:在缺词处加一一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限1词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Stacy,
I happened to have read your advertisement and have decided to apply to the job. The following are my self introduction.
As a high school student, I had been learning English for many years. I have a good command of English. I am always willing to help other because of my warm-heartedness and outgoing personality. In the addition, I am in good condition by taking exercise every day. Therefore, I am firmly convinced what 1 am qualified for the job.
By acting as a translator for you, unpaying as it is, not only it enrich my life, but it will be of great benefit to me in the long run. I believe I can accumulate some value job experience.
I would appreciate it if you could take my applications into consideration. I am looking forward to your reply.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改；在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Sometimes 1 feel that living in a city makes people lonely than before. People always feel strangers cannot trusted. They think this is not normal to start talking to anyone or even smile at anyone. I desire to change that. Last week, while I was skate, a man ran by, smiling at me. He said something to me about doing sports or he hoped to be able to finishing his run. I smiled back and said that he certain would. And then a family cycles by when I was in the park. One of the girl waved at me with a big smile, and I waved back enthusiastically. I do believe such small gestures can change into the world we live in.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限1词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One June, I helped my grandma water the freshly planted flowers around the house. She was so gentle with them they grew so fast. When all the work were finished, I ran to get my bike to ride for a while. As I was getting on it, however, I noticed there was anything new. I got off and kneel down on the walkway leading to our house. I found a single wild flower coming out of a crack by the walkway, without the water, soil or love.
The surprised new life hit me a lot. Sometimes in my own life, I felt my grow looked like grandma’s flowers, that were loved and cared for. At other times I felt as if I were that wild flower, growing by the walkway quiet and having to grow through the solid concrete. I realized that it doesn’t matter where you grow and it matters that you keep growing.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分 。
On the first day of my part-time job, I woke up early than usual, excited but nervous. I said to me, with a mixture of these feelings, that it would be a easy job. However, things didn’t happen as I had expected. I entered the shop that I would spend the next couple of weeks serve coffee and food. After training, my first customer finally appeared. He ordered for a cup of coffee and two dish. Ignoring the shop’s rule, I carried the food without a tray. I was about to reach the table when one of the plates fall noisily to the floor. I stood there embarrassed. From now on, I always obeyed the rule and could never more careful.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分 。
What qualities do you think heroes should have? To me, heroes are brave and helpful. They’re people you respect of. My heroes are the volunteers who go to the earthquake-hit areas last week. The disaster caused great damages to the areas. Therefore, the volunteers’ efforts relieved the victims’ suffering. They helped the victims by giving themselves food, water and shelter. They were also many doctors and nurses who volunteered help the wounded. The rescue work turned out dangerously, but no one showed fear nor gave up rescue the unfortunate people. I think nothing is equal to which the brave people did in the earthquake.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday I went to see a film with my best friend Kate. We set off at 1:30 in the afternoon and plan to arrive at the cinema before 2:30 so that we could watch the 3:15 show. The traffic was terrible bad. That made it even worse was that our bus broke up on the way. They stopped a taxi but rushed to the show. “Two ticket for 3:15,” Kate said, put the money on the counter. The film started at the moment we sat down in the cinema. It was an exciting film and we had great time yesterday afternoon.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Friday evening, I talked about my grandpa. He told me that he wanted to visit to Chengdu . He would like to see the variously changes in his hometown. Heard this, I began to book tickets for her on the Internet. I also checked weather in Chengdu. After that, I helped my grandpa prepare his cloth and something he might need during the trip. The next day, I go to the airport to see off my grandpa. As it was a busy weekend, I felt proud because I could do everything for my grandpa.
