增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第 11处起)不计分。
Although it was autumn, it was snowing in Tibet. It was such cold that our legs felt like blocks of ice. On the afternoon, we found that our water bottles froze because cold weather. But we still enjoyed us during the journey. At one point, we were surprising to find ourselves cycling through clouds. In the valleys colorful butterflies fly around us. It was a great fun to cycle down the hills as it gradual became much warmer. But we had to change our warm coats for T–shirt and shorts.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, we have no lessons. My friends and I decided to help the farmers pick apples because they were very busily. Li Hong and I climbed up a big apple tree. There were a quantity apples on it. She couldn’t get the apple because they were too high. I carried the ladder for her. Soon they picked many baskets of apples or the trucks arrived. We all got down and help to load the apples onto the trucks. These trucks would carry out the apples to the cities and the hardworking and simply farmers could get their money back. The farmers had a harvest time!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I loved eating fish when I was a child, but once I accidental got a fish bone stuck in my throat, what has prevented me from eating fish ever since.
Recently, my mom made fish soup and I was such attracted to smell that I couldn’t wait to have a bowl of fish soup. I was about to eating it when suddenly I remembered how it felt to have the bone is stuck in my mouth. So I had to put the bowl down.
My mother felt very confusing and asked, “Didn’t you say you wanted to have fish soup today?” I shake my head violently, not admitting that she had said so.
Mum looked at me over a strange look, and then handed me the bowl of soup. She said, “Eat it while it’s hot.”
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其正下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词正下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词,请严格按照要求格式修改。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Everyone needs help. Often there are some cases that we help ourselves indirect in helping others. Last month, Tom asked for me to help with his math. In order to help him, I go over the textbook again and again, and did lots of exercises. To his surprise, some difficult problems that I could not understand before worked out by myself. After a month, with my help, Tom made great progresses in math, too. Such a experience enabled me to realize that help others also does good to ourselves. So when others is in trouble, never hesitate to help them.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In order to learn more about Chinese history and raise their cultural awareness, we were organized to have a trip to our local history museum on last Sunday.
Locating in the southern part of our city, the museum is one of most frequently visited attractions for its various ancient exhibits. We see items from different times, that showed us the history behind. Beside, we not only heard a lot of interesting stories and learned about the lifestyle of ancient people.
Surrounded by these historic object, we were proud of our nation’s civilization achievements. This was an unforgettably experience.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1. To my surprised, the door of the library was locked when I got there.
2. We spent two hours sing songs in the karaoke bar yesterday.
3. If it rains tomorrow, I stay at home to do my homework.
4. We don’t have too many homework to do today.
5. He liked the book so very much that he wanted to buy one immediately.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In order to offer a chance to show our artistic talent, our school will held a Culture Festival next Wednesday, that will be great fun.
The Calligraphy Exhibition is aimed at students who have a burnt passion for calligraphy. And there will have a singing competition in the dining hall. In addition to, a hands-on pottery (陶器) workshop would be open for the whole day. We can create the art works of your own with the help of some skilled workers. It is obvious that it will be good opportunity for us to meet and exchange idea with the people who have interest in common.
Expecting your present.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dad’s car is in the garage for repair so he has to travel to and from work on subway these days. But as his company is about one kilometer from the subway station, he uses the shared bike to cover the distances. Yesterday evening, after dinner, Mom checked messages on WeChat and told us that a message was quick spreading in WeChat communities, that said a laptop computer was found in a bike basket near Xinhua subway station by a Mr. Zhou. That was when Dad realized he has left his laptop computer in the bike basket. Mom and Dad managed to get in touch with Mr. Zhou but in twenty minutes he was appeared at our door with the laptop computer. We were deeply moving by the stranger, who went out of his way return Dad’s laptop computer.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Ever since I was little, art had been the most important thing in my life. It speaks to me, makes me to feel special, but opens my eyes to a world beyond reality. I try to explore art by myself. I put my own creatively ideas and imagination down on paper as I work hard to improving my skills. Though I haven’t been to any art training centers, I’ve been learning from other artist and taking every chance that comes mine way. I have realized this is what I want to do for rest of my life. And it is this realization what has brought me to work even hard than ever before.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Years ago when I was a child, that my friends and I liked most was to go to the movie theatre. Before coming there, we saved up the money for the tickets. One day, six of us went to the movie theatre. But when we arrive there, one of my friend, Mike, found he didn’t have enough to get in. Looked really sad, he told us to get in. He would wander in the supermarket nearby, waiting us. Of course, we didn’t let our friend stand outside, so we all paid for her. None of us had any money leaves and had to walk home, so we were quite happy.