增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I spent my holidays take care of plants, as a part of the school project. I chose to grow some tomato and planted the seeds in an unique pot. I examined the pot each day see signs of the plants coming up with. Much to my delight, I noticed green shoots on a warm morning and observed it for an hour. The pleasure of growing plants was simple indescribable. The fact that I was paving the existence for new beings by planting seeds were amazing. Undoubtedly, it was not only the best school project I have ever done and an unforgettable experience.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, mine parents and I climbed Mountain Tai to see the sunrise. At 4:30 on the morning we were already on the top, wait for the sun to rise. At first, a ray of sunshine appeared in the east, and then it became bright and brighter. Sudden, the sun sprang out, looking like a large ball, and the sky in the east became red. Later, the sun was blocking by a piece of cloud. When it appeared again, and the sun changed from red to bright red, and then to golden. As it rose, it became silvery white and shone out. The sun was so bright that we couldn’t looked at it directly. At that time, whole mountain was in the golden sunlights.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mr. Zhang was on his way home from work at midnight when he smells a strong burning smell. He looked around and saw black smoke shoot from a window of a cafe. The situation seemed awfully. Although he was nervous, he whispered himself, “Be calm.” He hurriedly dialed 119, but then he went to knock at the neighbors’ doors to ask for help. Informing of the situation, the majority of the neighbor offered to fight the fire with him. When the firefighters arrived, the fire was almost under the control. The coffee shop owner and the staff expressed his gratitude to Mr. Zhang and the neighbors which bravery was highly thought of.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month my new school had witnessed the First Online Life Skills Show. Here comes a brief account.
The activity, consisting with two parts, began with a talent show where participants demonstrated our practical skills. This was followed by a voted process. Some distinguished teachers acting as judge made comments and gave awards to whomever displayed the best expertise. However, what made this show great success is that not only did it provide a golden opportunity for the participants to sharpen their skills and it also sparked audience’s passion for acquiring various life skills.
Both students and teachers speak high of this activity. I sincerely hoped that more activities of this kind will be held in the future.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear David,
I had something what was unexpected at the last minute. My parent were injured in a car accident. So I have to look after him and can’t meet you and Black Smith in Monday. I am available late Tuesday and Thursday afternoons and I’d like to arrange for our meeting to held later in the week. As a matter of fact, the early morning of Wednesday or Friday would actual be best for me. We could still meet at the Black’s office as we planned. Or we could meet somewhere else whether it’s more convenient for you. I am sorry that I had to cancel the meeting. Please calling me as soon as you can after you read this.
Yours,
Ted
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After long flight, I finally arrived in Sanya. I spent my days explore the beautiful beaches, trying new food, or meeting people from all over the world. I even got to participate in a local dragon dance performance, that was a highlight of my trip. Although I were away from my family, I didn’t feel lonely. I met many friendly locals who welcomed me into his homes and showed me the truly meaning of the Spring Festival. I learned about the customs and tradition of the area, and even have a traditional New Year’s Eve dinner with a local family. My journey to Sanya was a trip that I would always remember about.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Monday, a terrible earthquake struck Turkey and Syria, caused more than 46,000 deaths in the disaster and aftershocks. In Turkey, President Recep Tayyip Erdogan declared a state of emergency in 10 affected provinces for three month. Rescue workers were struggling for difficult conditions and low temperatures. The government planned to open hotels in Antalya, the city popular with foreign visitors, to temporarily shelter people whom were homeless in the quake.
It was feared many remained trapped under collapsed buildings. The United Nations children’s agency said it fears. In the northwest, a rescue group being called the White Helmets said at least 9,000 have died. The leader of the group said they were making greatly efforts to deal with a large number of collapsed buildings.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, students in our school took part in series of activities that was aimed at improving the students’ quality. Get involved in the activities, the students cooperated close with each other. In order to finish which seemed impossible, they encouraged each other. Faced with so many challenges, the students didn’t lose hearts. Instead, they combined our efforts and gifts, working as a strong team. They managed to complete many amused games. The students enjoy themselves very much during the meaningful activities. They have not only been gained a deep friendship with each other, but also pure happiness.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dewey is my pet dog. While water is his favorites, he is also a big fan of snow. One winter day, I take him to a huge snowy field where he could run and play. Before Dewey started to play, I thought would be nice to take a photo of a snowy field. Dewey was such excited to run around in the snow that he couldn’t help ran right through the photo, but ended up helping me create something fantastic. I decided the photo couldn’t be keeping to me alone because of it was just too great. I posted it online to see that anyone else would find it just as wonderfully—and of course, they absolutely did.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
I always had a dream to be a fluency speaker. However, such shy was I that I didn’t dare to utter a word in public. That was just beyond my wildest imagination was that fortune should bless me with a chance to realize my dream. One day, my English teacher asked me to go to her office and told me I was given an unique opportunity to take part in an English speaking competition. Hearing this, I could hardly hide my excitement, hoped to give it a shot immediately. When making preparation for the competition, I wrote my speech heart and soul. After finishing the composition, I discussed it with my teacher and got much advice on how to improve it. Under the help of my English teacher, I didn’t lose my heart and made great progress. Only then I realize that it was great beneficial to turn to teachers for help when confronted with difficulties.