增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Do you often talk with your parents? A recently survey shows that nearly half of the high school students doesn’t like to talk with their parents. 43. 3% of them have trouble communicate with their parents. What was worse, 82. 8% of them don’t want to share their secrets their parents. Actually, it is important for us to communicate with our parents though they are the dearest people in our life, whom care for us all the time. By letting them know that what we think, we can get practical advice from them, which can help us to deal with many problem in life.
In this way, we can feel more confident about us and live happily.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mary is one of my classmate, who I admire very much. She is cheerful but friendly, keeping smiling at others. That impresses me most is her sweet voice. The sound of her singing is as a waterfall on a mountain, flowed effortlessly and leaving a sense of calm. She is very focused when singing. Much of us usually hear her to sing songs after class. She always active participates in local music contests. So far, she won two prizes in our city. She also teaches us to sing. As a result, influencing by her, more and more students in our class like to sing.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last night, I have a strange but interesting dream. On the way back home, I came across child from another planet. His clothes seemed to be shining and looked beautifully. As I got close to him, he looked frightening and turned his back to me. Though I couldn’t speak his language, I used hand gestures to talk about him. A while later, he told me lots of amazing thing on his planet, which made me laughing. But suddenly, he began to cry, and then he explained he had lost his way but couldn’t find his home. His home had a telephone number like ours, so I asked him to call on his parents using my phone. Soon before making the call he disappeared.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处.多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mrs Jones,
How is everything going?
Knowing your sixty birthday is coming, I’d like to say ”Happy birthday" to you! I go to London and lived in your family one year ago. As a exchange student, I couldn’t adapt(适应) ourselves to the new living environment and lifestyle there at first. It was you which told me not to be nervous and helped me get used them. Stay with you has become the most unforgettably experience for me now. Would you like to come to China to have visit me? If so, I’ll show you around my city but take you to taste local delicious food. I m sure you will like it.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
(2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In the evening of Feb.4th, my brother suddenly became unconscious. He sent to hospital and it turned out that she had a severe brain disease. When he finally came back home, we did that most families would do. We tried to help him as many as we could. One afternoon, he was at home alone for a few hours. When we returned, all the furnitures in his bedroom had been rearranged. My mom asks in surprise,“Who did that?” My brother replied delighted, “Me.” At that moment, we were all greatly amazed that he recovered a lot of and had the strength to moving things.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There is an old man who live alone next to my door. When asking why he didn’t live with his children, he said he didn’t want interrupt them due to their different lifestyles. Every day, she likes sitting in front of the shop, there people communicate. He is very talkative but likes to offer help. Beside, if people ask him for information, he almost knows everything. People like him and get used to see him because of he is smart and can give us useful ideas. He is a good person and we are willingly to ask him to have dinner with us.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I went to visit my beloved grandmother, that is already in her seventy. She took care of myself when I was in primary school. Delighted to see me, she held my hands and hurry to bring me something delicious. Heard that I would be a senior three student soon, she told me not be nervous and that everything would be OK. Then she also stressed that study and healthy were equally important. Feeling so warmly, I promised her that I would make full preparations for the coming entrance examination both physical and mentally. I firmly believe that I will get satisfying results the next year.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mother is always my role model. Last Sunday, I find that she put some food into the bag and went out with it. I followed her and saw she gave the food to the street children generous. One of my neighbor told me that my mother was very kind to these children, but they even regarded her as their own mother. When we returned to home, I talked to my mother about it. She shared me some sad stories about those poor children. For many years, she helped those children by giving their food and care. I was deeply moving and took proud in my mother.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, my parents encouraged me help my grandparents harvest rice. Honest, I had never done it before. But guessing it might to be fun, I agreed. I went to cut down rice in one of his grandparents’ rice fields. In the beginning, I were excited, but soon I found the job tired. Besides, my arms were covered in small painful cuts caused by the rice’s leaves. However, I didn’t give up. Together, we spent four days gather the crops, during which we chatted but laughed joyfully. An experience left a deep impression on me.
10 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This is a true story what happened last year. One day, my uncle invited a old professor to supper. During the evening, it rained very hardly. Because of the professor walked to my uncle’s, my uncle advised him stay overnight. The professor agreed and thanks my uncle politely, and while my uncle was washing the dishes, the professor disappeared. My uncle couldn’t found him anywhere. However, the front door bell rang after 40 minute. It was the professor. Her clothes were wet through. He said that he had gone home to get his toothbrush.