增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( Ʌ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词; .
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Phoebe is from London and studies in our class as exchange student. She has been learning Chinese for the last three years，but she still fails in the final exam last week. Our teacher said she still had to learn a lot in her new language, what made her very upset. See this, I tried to comfort her and gave her some suggestion on how to improve her language skills so she would get a good grade next time. She was so moving and had tears in her eyes. Late, I got a beautiful email from her where she expressed her thanks for my kind. I was not sure exact what to write back but I felt very happy. What a good experience that I won’t forget it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Knowing that you took part in the Mandarin Speech Contest and getting the first prize, I’m writing to congratulate to you! I always remember what you’ve devoted to learn Mandarin. Never did you give up, what happened. And that paid out. Your efforts, especially your determination, is really admirable. I have learned from you that we should make constantly efforts to achieve a goal even if many difficulties are in store for you. I feel so proud of you and it is great honor to have a friend like you. Congratulations again and best wish to you!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In my memory, my grandfather was kind and not good at expressing himself. I never knew that he really thought. He never judged book by its cover and treated people around him equal. When I was in primary school, I sent with him a letter, telling him how much I loved him. He never mentioned that he had received the letter and I never asked. When he passed away, I cleaned out my things. I found the letter hiding in his bedroom. On the back of the letter, he writes: “I’m so glad you love me, my grandson. I love you, either.” At that moment, I was so moved that I burst into tear.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is quite important for parents and children to spend quality time together regular. It helps build a close and health relationship between them. On the one hand, spending time with parents give children the impression that their parents care about them. This can create a sense of security, that is particularly important for our overall development. On the other hand, it allows parents to know better about their children, include their interests and concerns. Besides, parents can also educate their children in case if they make mistakes. All in all, parents’ love and care can't replaced by anything. But no matter how busy parents are, never forgot to set aside some time for children.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Many of you have difficult getting along with your parents. I can fully put myself in your shoes, as I once experienced same problem. Try the followed suggestions, and see if they will help. Be patient with your parents. You must have misunderstood each another. The key to solve the problem is regular communication. Explain their feelings calmly, listen carefully, and address your concerns. Besides, you should try to see things from their points of view. Only in this way can your misunderstandings be clear up. Gradual, you will learn to understand your parents and that your parents will relax their control. With a little bit of patience and communication, much of the problems can be solved.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father already worked in a local factory for years. You will not find anything unusual about him till you learn more.
My father has always been kind and help. He has donated blood much times since 1990. The blood he has donated is enough to save for over 70 lives. He has also donated blood cells to people with blood cancer. To my surprised, he has decided to donate my body for medical research after his death.
When I was a little girl, I could not understand how my father always seemed to be kind to others than to his own family. Now I realize that he is a cared person.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(人)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横钱，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1.每处错误及其修改词均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从11 处起)不记分。
Last Friday, the evening fell, but my paremts hadn't come back home yet. I stopped doing my homework but decided to make a meal for my family instead of just wait. It was my first cooking. I went online to find information on how cook home-style dishes. With the step-by-step direction, I managed to make a dish. Then I tried to cook other. When my parents got home, they were amazed to see the taste dishes I made. Immediately my mum took pictures for them and my dad gave me a big hug. I real enjoyed a meal that evening.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The Moments section of WeChat has become the popular part of the social networking platform. We can share everything about your life on it with our friend. Many teenagers, however, chose to keep their parents out their Moments. They argue that if their parents get involved, and they will feel upset. As far as I am concerning, I feel happily when my parents comment on my posts in my Moments. It shows their love and care for me. What’s more, shut them off may make the generation gap bigger and bigger, while inviting them in would helping us communicate better and feel closer to each other than before.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Many people have given us help as we grow up. Among those have helped me, my mother is the one I am the most thankful to her.
When I was in Grade 7, I had some difficulty learn English. I found it hardly to remember new words. So I have a hard time learning English. I couldn’t finish my English homeworks on time. Saw my problem, my mum always played games with me to help me remember new words. She even watched some English cartoons with me, that made me interested in English.
That is how I improved my English with my mother’s help five years before. I think I should owe my success for my mother’s help.
注意（文中还涉及增词和删词错误各一处未标明，请同学们自行找出需增词、删词处，再做修改，注意增、删格式。）
Dear James,
Thanks for your letter. I’m delight that you’re coming over and we’re all looking forward to see you again. I can understand you are nervous about travelling by your own. Don’t worry! We’ll pick you up at the airport. Telling me your flight number and arrival time, and we can meet you while you arrive. Kate wonders if you could bring him some of that wonderful cheese we eat in your parents’ house last month. She keep talking about it. I don’t think it should be problem bringing it into the country. Let me know as soon as you can book your flight.
Love,
Sandra
