增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In our life there are many valuable experiences. As for me, cook for my mom on her 40th birthday is unforgettable experience. In order to surprise my mom that day, so I decided to cook a bowl of noodles with an egg. Waking up early, I begin to boil the noodles in the kitchen. It were the first time that I had fried an egg by my own. Unfortunately, the eggs always got burnt, though I tried several time. Just then my mom came in. Seeing that I had done, she was moved to tears. He tasted the food joyfully, saying it was the more wonderful birthday gift she had ever received.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, a friend is someone you can share your secrets to. If you tell him a secret, he will never talks about it with anybody else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes him happily too. What’s more, a good friend is willing to offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with them.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandma’s birthday was around the corner and I want to make a special present for her. While I were thinking what to do, sweet memories of the time I spent with my grandma drawing and play the piano all flooded back. It struck me what I could make her an album. I turned on the computer, selected several photos carefully , but did the graphic design. Eventual, an album containing past sweetness was born. At the birthday party, I presented album to my grandma. He hugged me tightly, tears rolling from her eyes. Seeing my grandma so satifying, my parents smiled happily. With genuine love, even a small gift can mean a lot of to our loved ones.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are much respectable people around me. Among they, the person I respect most is my father. He is ordinary middle school teacher who devotes himself to teaching. It is the love for his career that make him achieve a lot in his work. He has win his students’ respect. My father is very busy every day, but he still spares some times to accompany me, sharing many amused things with me about his work. Whenever I come across with problems in my life, he will encourage me to overcome them brave. I love him deeply. What lucky I am to have such a good father!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My twelve birthday was the most unforgettable and special one. On that day, I received a life-changing gift for my grandmother. It was a pair of roller skates. I couldn’t believe my eyes when I opened a box. The shoes were so beautiful. The shoes total changed my life. I was used to be shy and had no friends, because I was scared to talk with others. The moment I learn how to skate, I became confidence and outgoing. I made plenty friends by doing this. I’m thankful to my grandmother. Now I’m a happy girl and believe in me. I smile after I meet new people.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have just receive a letter from my brother, Tim. He is in Australia. She has been there for six months. Tim is an engineer and he is work for a big firm now. He has already visited a greatly number of different place in Australia. He has just bought Australian car and has gone to Alice Springs, a small town in the central of Australia. He will soon visit to Darwin. From there, he will fly to Perth. My brother has never been abroad before, but he is finding this trip very excited.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My friend Mary usually have to do a million things at the same time. Last week, I suggested going out for dinner and saw a movie. We planned to meet on 7:00. I thought she would came on time, and she didn’t show up until 7:30. At first, she said it took her a long time finish getting ready. Then, after the movie, she couldn’t help telling me that what really happened. She was having so a good time playing video games with her brother that she forgot their plan. How busily she was!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下而写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday, the evening fell, but my parents hadn’t come back home yet. I stopped doing my homework but decided to make a meal for my family instead of just wait. It was my first cooking. I went online to find information on how cook home-style dishes. With the step-by-step direction, I managed to make a dish. Then I tried to cook other. When my parents got home, they were amazed at to see the tasty dishes I made. Immediately my mum took pictures for them and my dad gave me a big hug. I real enjoyed a meal that evening.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was in primary school, one day I got up early and cook noodles for my parents. First, I boiled some water. Then I put some noodles into the pot. About five or six minutes later, I placed it in the bowls and added some salt and oil. When my parents got up, they were surprising and praised me for that I did.
It was the first time that I had cooked for them. A little bit tired and happy, I felt proud of myself because of I could take care of my parents. From this unforgettable experience, I’ve also got deeper understanding of my parents.
I think it’s our duty to share some houseworks. Besides, do some house chores is a kind of physically exercise. As teenagers, we should take action to help around the house!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Sandy was one of my good friends at high school. At that time, we often spend time together, sharing happiness but sadness as well. It was with her help that I made a great progress in my study. Last year, she decided study abroad. In other words, we would be separated for a long time. Before she left, I sent a gift to show my best wishes to him. And she gave me an English book what is about the grammar. Since then, we have kept in contact in each other through e-mails. I think high of the friendship between us and look forward to see her again in the near future.
