增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is perhaps the most performed songs in the world. A birthday party wouldn’t be complete with participants joyously sing out the song around a big birthday cake. Yet “Happy Birthday to You” is privately property and protected by copyright.
It is fine when you sing it by yourself. But if someone wants to do them in movies or TV shows or in any other commercial activities, they need pay the Warner Music Group for the right. According to a forbes.com report, “Happy Birthday to You” is believing to be netting the company $2 million a year in the fees, this could soon be changed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I enjoy listen to music. It helps me calm down after an busy day. I like many different types of music, such for rock, R&B and so on. Last year I went to a pop festival with some friends. It lasted for three days. So we decided camp on a field. The weather was awful and it rain all day. We were totally wet! Although the weather was bad, but the concert continued and the music was great. I particular enjoyed some of the supporting band. I found them performing better than the main stars. It was probably because the concert was their great opportunity to have their music hear. And that was great for them to get cheered by music fans.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Erhu is a very tradition Chinese instrument with a very long history, and it consists of three parts. Firstly, it have a long neck made of hardwood, at the top of whom are two large turning pegs (钉). Secondly, two large strings are attach from the pegs to the base. At the bottom, there is a small resonator (谐振器) body which is covered to the skin of snake on the front end. In addition to, there was a bow (弓) made of horse hair and tied to a bamboo stick.
When playing it, you should use my left hand holding the long thin neck with four finger pressing on the strings. You also have to pass the bow between the two strings at same time.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When it comes to music, here is how I want to say: Music is one of the important part in my life. The beautiful classical music not only helps us deal with stress, but bring me pleasure. Although some songs contain rock-and-roll beats, but they still can make me feel calm and comfortable. I believe music is able to passing on all kinds of emotions. While prepared for the coming day, I love listening to music as my regularly morning routine. Also, I am planning to learn to play piano. Without songs and harmonies, my life will be completely empty.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is perhaps the most performed song in the world. A birthday party wouldn’t be complete with participants joyously sing out the song around a big birthday cake. Yet “Happy Birthday to You” is privately property and protected under copyright.
It is fine when you sing it by yourself. But if someone wants to do them in movies or TV shows or in any other commercial activities, they need to pay the Warner Music Group for a right. According with a forbes.com report, “Happy Birthday to You” is believing to be netting the company $2 million a year in fees, this could soon be changed.
I started playing the piano at the age of six. However, when I go to high school I had to leave my family, my home but my piano behind. I missed playing the piano very so much that I spent all the money I got for my eighteen birthday on a brand new guitar. It was portable. I was able to play it whenever I went. When I was tiring, playing music relaxed me. It was perfect way to cheer you up when I was feeling down. I also made some good friend by joining a band. In a word, I benefited great from playing musical instruments.
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号（/\）， 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I started playing the piano at the age of six. However, when I go to high school I had to leave my family, my home but my piano behind. I missed playing the piano very so much that I spent all the money I got for my eighteen birthday on a brand new guitar. It was portable. I was able to play it whenever I went. When I was tiring, playing music relaxed me. It was perfect way to cheer you up when I was feeling down. I also made some good friend by joining a band. In a word, I benefited great from playing musical instruments.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hours after a dance performance, some netizens began posting our own videos of copy the show’s specific move - bending backward at a 90-degree angle. The program, what aired on Jan 31 during the annual Chinese New Year gala(春晚), was inspired by one of the best-known classical Chinese painting ——A Panorama of Rivers and Mountains. It was painted by Wang Ximeng, young artist who lived during the Song Dynasty. The bend was meaning to copy the shape of blue and green mountains in the painting. Netizens soon create a term for the move - “blue-green waist”. Though the pose is graceful, but it is skillful and challenging. Experts has warned that without years of training, the move may cause severely injuries.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I admire the cellist Yo-Yo Ma. Born in Paris, France, in 1955, Ma started playing the cello the age of four. When he was seven, he moves with his family to New York City. They attended the Juilliard School, but then he studied at Harvard University. Ma performed very professionally that he started to become famously. Ma dreamed of connect people around the world through music. And in 1998, he set up a organization called the Silk Road Project, through which Ma gives cross-cultural music performances with musicians from places like Iran, Mongolia, and Italy. Through his work, Ma has been helped people all over the world appreciate various type of music.
Dear David,
I was excited to know you like music from your letter, and neither do I. As we all know, music is an important part of our life today. No one will say no to music and everybody has their taste in the music. When I was very young, my parents would encourage me listen to classical music. They wanted to develop their interest and good taste. So as I grow up, I fall in love for rock music, which makes me feel cool. It is said that music can heal people’s souls. While listening to some peaceful music, I am surprising calm. When I am not happy, I will listen to music and then dance to it in my bedroom. Music can help me forget something annoyed.
It’s great that we share the same hobbies. Music is full of charm. Could you introduce some nice English songs in your next letter?
Yours,
Li Ming
