增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Friday’s evening, I went to watch the ballet “The White-haired Girl”. Because I think ballet was more or less the same everywhere? I was absolute unprepared for its unique beauty. I was immersing the moment when the curtain rose. The performance brought about a lot from Chinese dance and music, but the Eastern influence on the ballet was clear. The production was full of colors and romantic symbols, and challenged my senses in many way.
So much did I enjoy that it changed my opinion about ballet. I can’t wait to going again!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. However, I couldn’t understanding “real music”. After I graduate from high school, a friend of mine advised us to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on which they went to buy guitars in the guitar store. Here I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my the first guitar teacher. It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful models. Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life but I practise it every day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删减：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When it comes to music, here is what I think: Music is one of the most important part in my life. The beautiful classical music not only helps us deal with stress, but brought me pleasure. Although some songs contain rock-and-roll beats, but they still can make me feel calm and comfort. I believe music is able to passing on all kinds of emotions. While prepared for the coming day, I love listening to music as my regular morning routine. Also, I am planning to learn to play piano. My life with songs and harmonies would be complete empty.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yang Liping is a good dancer, which passion is dancing. After win a national competition in 1986 with her Spirit of the Peacock dance, she has been known to the “Peacock Princess”. The inspiration for her famous dances have come from the time which she spends in Xishuangbanna. As she once said, she felt very gratefully for the years in Xishuangbanna, which gave her chance to go deeper into the lives of various ethnic groups. The Dai people admired the peacock, represents the beauty of nature. His dance came from their traditional belief but aimed to bring out the Dai women's beauty.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are plenty of hero I look up to, but it was Jahseh Onfroy that assists me through the darkest time when I was in high school. His music not only inspired me and it helped countless people as well. Heard his music, I always felt it was about growing and becoming good than what we were. I have really learned many value lessons from him. And I always find me going back and listening his wisdom again because I need it. I felt as if the close relative of mine passed away when he was left. I think he will always be in my mind.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Friday will live in my memory forever. It was the first time when I had performed Latin dance with the classmate on stage.
After I changed into my suit, I stood quiet, waiting for our turn. While standing on stage, I am afraid of looking at the audience. Then the music began, but we started to dance. Concentrating in what I was doing, I began to feel better. Finally, it was over. As we left the stage, I said to my partner: “We did a good job.”
Not only I put on a show for others, I also learned why to deal with a challenge. Now when I face a new situation, I am not as nervous as I was before. I know I may practice and be ready for anything. It is a wonderful, free feeling to be able to perform it for others.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
I went to watch the ballet The Peony Pavilion last Sunday’s evening. Because I think ballet was more or less the same everywhere, I was total unprepared for its unique beauty. I was absorb the moment when the curtain rose. The performance borrowed a lot from Chinese dance and music, but the Eastern influence on the ballet was clear. The production was full with colors and romantic symbols, and challenged my senses in many way. So much did I enjoy that it changed my opinion about ballet. I can’t wait to going again!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I admire a cellist Yo-Yo MA. Born in Paris, France, in 1955, Ma started playing the cello the age of four. When he was seven, he moved with their family to New York. He attended a music school, and then that he studied at Harvard University. Ma performed such professionally while studying that he started to become famously. Ma dreamed of connecting people around the world through music. And in 1998, he found an organization called the Silk Road Project, through what Ma gave cross-cultural music performances with musicians from places like Iran, Mongolia and Italy. Through his work, Ma has helped people all over the world learning to appreciate various type of music.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hello, everyone. I am Emily in China. I feel very lucky to be able to study in this famous university, which has the most prettiest campus I has ever seen.
I enjoyed dance with my parents very much when I was still child. I started studying ballet at the age of six. By the time I was nine, I had to dance three day a week.
Earlier this year, I apply for this training program and I just moved there last week. I hope that I can graduate from this school successful. I will be very happy if I can became a dancer in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Over 27 million Chinese watch the first online concert of Irish band Westlife at Friday night. Hold in London and livestreamed on WeChat, the concert impressed Chinese fans deep with many hit songs, as well as a Chinese song. Besides the good pronunciation in a Chinese song, the band’s interactions also thrilled the audience. For many Chinese, their most favourite English songs were by Westlife. The band left a mark on them during their youth, but the concert allowed them to share their memories with peer across the globe. This was just WeChat’s first move invite more global celebrities, said Zhu Liqun, which leads the marketing department.
