注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I think You Raise Me Up would be an nice song. This song is sang by Secret Garden. Many people like it for year .I also like this song because it can often make I full of courage and energy. When I listen it, I feel me standing on mountains. It’s possible for us to meet with problems and fail in life. When that happen, you can listen to the song. It can cheer you up and encourage you to face the trouble brave. Just as Secret Garden sings, you can be very more than you can be.
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注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays in China, either in the morning nor after dinner, people, especial elderly women, gather in squares to dance to popular music. More and more young people are also participating the square dance now.
There are many reasons for their popularity. First of all, China has made a great progress in the social and economic development in the past decades, and people had more time and energy to enjoy their lives. Besides, do the square dance is a good way for people to get fit.
However, dancers play loud music and occupy lots of public places, where makes many people annoying. Maybe square dancers need to make some change.
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注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays in China, either in the morning or after dinner, people, especially elderly woman, will gather in squares to dance with popular music. More and more young people are also participating the square dance now.
There are many reasons for their popularity. First of all, China has made a great progress in the social and economic development in the past decades, and people had more time and energy to enjoy their life. Therefore, doing the square dance is a good way for people to get fit.
However, dancers play loud music and take up lots of public places, where makes many people annoying. It is time that square dancers make some change.
Music is the universal language to all human beings, what plays an important part in their life. It can make our life more wonderfully and help us to relax. Without music, our world will be like a wild desert.
There are different variety of music, such as pop music, classical music, country music, jazz, rap but rock music. Of all music, I like pop music best. For the one thing, with beautiful tunes, it is pleasant to hearing. For another, most pop music deals the topics of love and friendship which appeals to us young people.
The Yangko Dance is a tradition Chinese folk dance creating by the farmers hundreds of years ago. Many Chinese people took it as an important method of relaxing, no matter when there is a spring festival and when there are some special celebrations.
Before the Yangko Dance starts, the music performed to build the dancers a festival atmosphere. As the dance’s content comes from special folk legends, men and women whom perform the dance are dressed in colorfully clothes.
During the dance, the dancers are wagging to present old story to the audience in the new style. The dance also shows our happy mood and life.
While the dancers are dancing on the ground, there is usually a big crowd around them, appreciating and sharing with the feelings of the dancers there.
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注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改5处,多者(从第6处起)不计分。
Johann Sebastian Bach was born in Germany. Be a member of a large family of musicians, he naturally grew up loving music. His father played violin and his brothers played other musical instruments. When he was 10, all of his parents died and he went to live with his brother. At 22 he married with his cousin and they had seven children. By the time he was 32, he has composed much of his best music.
The American TV show The Voice is one of my most favorite amusement shows. In one hand, I can listen to different styles of music. On the other hand, I can read the singers’ stories, who are so inspiring. I was so impressed by a musical boy who was from the country. If he was very young, he loved to sing while doing the farm work. After work, he learned to play guitar. He liked living on the farm, for the life was simple. The boy brought his guitar to the stage, worn a fashionable hat which made him seem so mysteriously. When the boy sing a song with his guitar, all the judge were astonished by his talent. As a result, he won the game but finally became famous throughout the country.
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修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Everyone has something that make them happy. For me, happiness is sitting in front of a piano but losing myself in the world of music.
I still remember to playing the piano one Sunday afternoon. I felt so tiring after studying for a whole week. After thinking for a moment, I sat in front my piano. Gently pressing the keys with my fingers, I made a few simple but pleasant sound. Slowly, I closed my eyes and enjoyed the music. They reduced my stress and made me happily.
Happiness should be everything that accompanies us all the time. It’s like the butter to our bread --- we can’t do with it.
Dear students,
The Student Union had decided to have a music party. It will be held in the first week of the May. The activities include singing pop songs and play classical and folk music. Bring your own musical instruments, please. A music contest will be including, too. The students taking part in the contest will listen part of a song or a piece of music, and then guess what it comes from. As you'd like to take part in the music party, please come and sign up for them before April 20th. The place of the activities will be told late. Come to have greatly fun!
The Student Union
Every morning and evening, many people gather to dance in our community square, where is designed to improve living quality. Although dancing could do good to their health, but the long-time dancing and loud noise causing by the loudspeaker really brought the neighbors inconvenience. I couldn’t rest or sleep well, which made me terrible upset. I felt so sleep in class that I performed badly in study. To solve a problem, I communicated with the organizers and suggested that they should shorten the dance time and reduced the music noise. Only doing so can they have fun and let others enjoy life. To their delight, they adopted my advices.