增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mark Twain, like you know, was famous in his days as the public speaker. He always liked to play joke on his friends. One day, the one of his friends lost their wallet and asked him to buy a train ticket for him. “But I don’t have enough money to pay both your ticket and mine,” Mark Twain said. The friend didn’t know what to do. “Let’s do this,” Mark Twain saying, “You can get off the train and when the conductor comes to check the ticket you can hide under my seat.” Later, however, when the conductor comes to check the ticket, Mark Twain gave him two tickets— one for him and the other for his friend.
2 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. As for me, Marie Curie was the person I respect most. It is general acknowledged that Marie Curie is one of the greatest scientist in the world. Her discoveries are crucial to the later scientific research.
Marie Curie was interesting in science when she was young. After she graduated from university, she committed himself to her work with the objective of serve the whole society. Marie and her husband found the element radium, for that they were awarded the Nobel Prize. Not only was Marie the first female professor at the University of Paris, but she was also the first scientist win two Nobel Prizes in the world.
Madam Curie was intelligent, brave, strong-willed but never gave up. To sum up, she is a person I respect her most.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There is no doubt that cell phones play a important part in our daily life. However, be addicted to cell phones does a lot of harms to the users. First, staring at a cell phone screen for hours can lead to dry eyes or other eye diseases. Second, if you always overuse your cellphone, your head as well as your neck ache, which will have a bad effect to your daily life. Beside, on your way home or to school, with your attention fully focus on the cell phone, you may fail to notice the traffic around you, which will be a great danger to you. Therefore, I strong suggest that everyone would use our cell phone wisely.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2. 只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday my mom decided to color his hair. She studied with all the hair products at the drugstore. The color she choose came in a box which had a picture of a woman that hair color looked just perfect. Mom was sure same color would look great on her. She put the new color on her hair or sat still for 30 minutes, just as the directions saying. However, instead of the brownish red hair she had hoped for, she final got purple hair. She went right into the shower to washing it, but it was no use. At least one thing proved truth: the color wouldn’t wash out.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下而写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下而写出修改的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in the website creating by our school. It’s called chinaculture.com. Let me tell you something about them.
It aims spread Chinese traditional culture. You can find various interested things on it, including great thoughts, traditional festival and music. There were also many excellent pictures on it, which can help you get the better understanding of Chinese traditional culture. However, we will update the contents on every two weeks to ensure visitors to appreciate it more. We strong believe this website can benefit visitors a lot and that it will gain huge popularity.
Welcome to visit the website.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线( ),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
Do you like traveling? It is thrilled to visit different spots. As you travel, you will see beautiful scenery and you can encounter and make friends with people of different races and colors. Besides, you can be familiar with the living habits and customs of the local people. Nowadays people are very keen on traveling that tourism has become one of the fastest growing industries in most countries. The main reason that people travel is, perhaps, for pleasure. For instance, having worked hardly throughout the weekdays, people will choose to go on a trip to the nearby mountains or beaches to have a good rest.
For another example, spending a holiday travel abroad is especially satisfying experience for those who do not have opportunities to be away from their hometowns. When people return back from their journeys, they will certainly feel refreshed and energetic, ready to work harder. Travelling is also the best mean of learning. You may have read or hear about something, and you can never obtain an accurate picture of it until you witness it by yourself.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is quite important for parents and children to spend quality time together regular. It helps build a close and health relationship between them. On the one hand, spending time with parents give children the impression that their parents care about them. This can create a sense of security, that is particularly important for our overall development. On the other hand, it allows parents to know better about their children, include their interests and concerns. Besides, parents can also educate their children in case if they make mistakes. All in all, parents’ love and care can't replaced by anything. But no matter how busy parents are, never forgot to set aside some time for children.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As I left a party, I got on the wrong freeway and was immediate lost. I stopped my car and call my roadside-assistance provider. She tried to connected me to the California Highway Patrol, but that call never went through. Heard the panic in my voice, she came up for a plan B: “You’re near this office,” she said. “I’m about go off shift. Stay put, and I’ll find you.” Ten minute later, she rolled up. She guided her not only to the right freeway and but also all the way to the correct freeway exit. And then, with the wave goodbye, she drove back into the night.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Lack of motivation is one of top exercise killers, but joining a sports club can help. Most of us associate value with money. When something is free of, it is easy to dismiss them as an unimportant thing. And when we pay for classes at a sports club, we are easily motivating to get the most value out of the investment. If anything can get you out of bed at 6 am, it is the thought that you were wasting some dollars by stay at home. Classes give you a period of scheduled times each week to go to the club and work out. If they are instructors or a group of classmates, they can provide encouragement for you and motivate you to work hardly.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( Ʌ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划- -横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限- -词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last year, I went to Hainan Island with my friends and stay there for two days. Hainan Island, a beautiful tourist attraction, located on the south of China, is well know for its beautiful blue sea and pleasant beaches with golden sands. On the first day, they went to the seaside and hiked here. It was so exciting for me to walking on the sands, leaving me some unforgettable memory. On the second day, we had some local food but sweet fresh juice. We spent that night in a tent, which was made us happy. In a word, we had good holiday on Hainan Island.