The environment pollution was more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink it because of water pollution. And when trees cut down, some animals disappear. There is more and more dirty smoke in the air. People’s health has been great affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people have died of diseases causing by pollution. In order to live the better life, it’s time for us to protect our world.
Firstly, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, that saves money and reduces pollution. Use things so long as possible. Don’t use plastic bag. Besides, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting it down. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful.
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注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
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When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more seriously. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aiming at raising people’s awareness of ocean conservation.
Not only ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. However, it is important to protect ocean. First of all, how we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbages shouldn’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, you can also call on more people to protect ocean. The more people are involved, and the better our ocean environment will be.
All in all, it was high time that we devoted ourselves to protect ocean.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear editor,
I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, and I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reasons. First of all, as it is known to people, pets make so much noise that trouble residents a lot. What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollute the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking his pets to public places where they may frighten children or even bite people. The mostly important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted many attention. Take all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media do something for this.
Yours truly,
Wang Lin
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修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When it come to the ocean, we are worried that its pollution is becoming more and more seriously. World Ocean Day, fallen on June 8th, is aimed at raising people’s awareness of ocean conservation. The ocean plays an important part in the world. It offers us sufficient food but maintains the balance of the nature. Therefore, it is time of us to devote ourselves to protecting the ocean. First of all, we should stop their own bad behavior, throwing rubbish into the ocean, for example. What’s more, we can hand out various brochure to call on more people protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the good the ocean environment is.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One morning, I was walking toward the garage, yawning sleepy. There was an animal that fur was as white as snow climbed up and down the fence. I woke up right away. To my surprise, there were two cats. I found out cats were from two cat families. Sometime, the cat parents fought for the living space while the cats from both families chase after each other and sunbathed. Thanks for a group of enthusiasts who provide food and shelter for those cats, so they can live happily and bring people happiness. I still like to see it around, especially when I’m tiring with a lot of schoolwork.
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修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When it comes to the ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more seriously. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aiming at raising awareness of ocean conservation. The ocean plays the key role in our world. Not only does the ocean offer me sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is vital to protect the ocean. First of all, that we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into the ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the good the ocean environment will become. In addition to, oil tankers (油轮) must spare no effort to avoid oil spills.
All in all, it is high time that we devote ourselves to protecting the ocean. To protect the ocean are to protect ourselves for sure.
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I really like animals. When I grow up, I’ll work with animals. Though I don’t know exact what I can do for the animals yet, but I can at least follow my brother. He is a excellent vet. He looks after frightened snakes. He says that snakes are easy to deal as they don’t have any legs. My father, a scientist, works to save rare bird, some of that are really clever and can even say some words. My mother trains dolphins every workday. They practise in the pool. She hears the dolphins talk and sang. That sounds really cool! There are so many animal jobs to choosing from, but which one is right for them? I’ll have to wait and see!
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删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。句意:
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear David,
How are you doing these days? Yesterday, my class has had a discussion about how to lead a low-carbon life. I was impressing by some of the ideas and would like to share them to you.
In the meeting, we shared various tip for leading a low-carbon life. It turns out that adopting a greener lifestyle is not difficult at all. For example, we can get into the habit of turning on lights and taps when not use them. You can also use reusable cloth bags when we shop. In additional, we can make fashionable to use handkerchiefs instead of tissues.
How does your country promote low-carbon lifestyles and encourage people to protect an environment? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We spend much time at school. Our school is like beautiful garden. We students are like flowers planting in it and our teachers are like gardeners, that take good care of us and water us with love and knowledge. In my opinion, it’ s their duty to do something for our school. First, we should protect the school environment so dropping litter careless should be forbidden. Meanwhile, we can plant more tree. Next, we shouldn’t waste water, food, electricity and so on. However, we should remember to turn on the taps and reuse water. Last, it was necessary to get on well with others. W hen someone is in trouble, we had better to give him a hand and help him out.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday I witnessed a worst storm in years. It came suddenly and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hot, but all was quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew highly into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch it, big drop of rain began to fall. When I returned back into the house, it was raining harder and harder. Then I hear a loud crashing sound from the back of the house. When I ran out to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.