增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
To better work for the community, our class organized a voluntary activity on last Saturday. They carried out a thorough clean-up of the city square. We set out early in the morning. As soon as we got there, we divided into two groups. One group picked up all the rubbishes on the ground, such as waste paper, cigarette ends and plastic bags throwing everywhere. The other group remove all illegal advertisements from the poles and trees, which was a tough job. We felt tired and happy when the activity was over. How a meaningful day we had! It’s truly to say that we make a living by what we get but we make an life by what we give.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Of the four seasons, I like spring better. One of the most important reasons are that all kinds of flowers are in bloom. The days are full hope in this season. There are fresh blossoming flower on trees. Both sides of the street are lining with trees and grass, that makes us happy and energetic. In the same time, I can play outside too! Whether we like riding, jogging and going on long walks, spring allows us to be enjoy outdoor activities. Of course, there are many other reasons to explain why I’m too excited about spring!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Monday, a terrible earthquake struck Turkey and Syria, caused more than 46,000 deaths in the disaster and aftershocks. In Turkey, President Recep Tayyip Erdogan declared a state of emergency in 10 affected provinces for three month. Rescue workers were struggling for difficult conditions and low temperatures. The government planned to open hotels in Antalya, the city popular with foreign visitors, to temporarily shelter people whom were homeless in the quake.
It was feared many remained trapped under collapsed buildings. The United Nations children’s agency said it fears. In the northwest, a rescue group being called the White Helmets said at least 9,000 have died. The leader of the group said they were making greatly efforts to deal with a large number of collapsed buildings.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Being caught in a flood is incredible dangerous. Like many other natural disaster, floods can occur with little and no warning. Flash floods are known to rip trees out the ground, destroy buildings and cause bridges to collapse. However, the flood itself isn’t an only issue to deal with it. The aftermath(后果)can be deadly, so it may not be possible to deliver essential supplies such as water and food to the disaster areas. So what should we do to save us? Avoid passing through bridges that crosses rapidly-moving water, as flash floods can cause bridges to collapse. If trap within a flooding building, move to the highest floor. Only move to the roof if necessary.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Yesterday morning, I participated on a school activity who theme focused on “Green Travel Starts From Me”. About 100 students and teachers gather at the school gate at 8:00 and we set out ten minute later to cycle around the city. It took us over two hours finish the 20-kilometer ride. Tiring as we were, we felt proud of us.
It was the first time that I had been covered such a long distance by bike. I believe an activity is of great value as it reminds us that everyone can make a difference to the protect of Earth by traveling in a green way.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dewey is my pet dog. While water is his favorites, he is also a big fan of snow. One winter day, I take him to a huge snowy field where he could run and play. Before Dewey started to play, I thought would be nice to take a photo of a snowy field. Dewey was such excited to run around in the snow that he couldn’t help ran right through the photo, but ended up helping me create something fantastic. I decided the photo couldn’t be keeping to me alone because of it was just too great. I posted it online to see that anyone else would find it just as wonderfully—and of course, they absolutely did.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During the summer break, I became a community volunteer to protecting the environment for one week. On the first day, I got up very earlier to kick off my seven day volunteer trip. As soon as I put on my volunteer clothes, I got straightly to work. While I was walking to the entrance of a residential area, I saw a man throw a cup on the ground. I immediately went to talk to her and said, ”Hi, sir. I’m volunteer. Can you throw it into the bin?" To my surprise, he just looked at me, turn around and left, leaving me feeling very embarrassed.
Later on, I had to guide people on how to classify their garbage and put it on the different categories of dustbins. There were some residents which did not have such a strong awareness of garbage classification. Besides, I also handed out leaflets on environmental protection to passer-by. That week’s experience was something I would consider it a highlight in my life, as I have helped to serve society as a whole.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As I was watering the plants in the front of my house, my neighbor was passing by for her walk. She appreciated the plants, so I told him how I had increased the number of plants, and that I would be able to offer her few.
Then I mix some potting soil and sand and put them in a container, and after put the open cut into rooting powder, I put it in the soil with a little water. Usually it take 4-6 weeks for the roots to form and then they are ready about repotting or gifting. My connect with dirt and understanding of plants are also growing in the process. I am gratefully for having these plants and the soil as my teachers and for being able to share the fruits with other.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The tornado warning was sounded just as we were about to leave to school. I looked outside. We have been taught to identify a tornado. I could not see a whirlwind but sky was dark. My family went into our shelter, which emergency food and water had been kept.
We were only there for an hour. My brother and I were scaring. We remembered the last time it was a tornado a few mile away. Even the grass was torn up from the ground. Mother cheered me up by talking about our next holiday.
Once we were told it was safe, and we went up. We were gratefully that the tornado missed us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My book is The Call of the Wild. I bought one in Xinhua book store, which cost me 30 yuan. The book, which cover is black and green, contains 300 pages. Having been read the story three times, I am always touched by the dog experiences. From the dog Bark’s grow, I realize each living being is born to adapt to nature and competition. Since I want to read another work writing by Jack London, I would like to exchange this book another novel called White Fang. If anybody is willingly to exchange the one with me, please contacting me immediately. It’s an pleasure to share books. Looking forward to your reply.
