增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When summer comes, I will be very exciting. Some people don’t like summer because the hot weather, which make them sweat all the time. But summer is my favorite season, during what I can wear fewer clothes. I like to wear short jeans and a T-shirt, for I felt so comfortable. I can also wear all kinds of beautifully dresses. What’s more, in summer, I will travel to other place to enjoy a cooler summer. My family used to taking a trip to avoid the hot summer and see the new scenery. Though summer is hot, but I still find a happy way to spend them.
Our class went mountain-climbing last week. Leading by our teacher, thirty of us started out trip. It was a nice day and the air was fresh, what made the trip more pleasant. We were chatting and laughing as we left our destination. I fall behind twice on the way, but with the encouragement of my classmates, I finally caught up with us and reached the top. Although we felt tiring, we thought it was meaningful. The experience brought us close to the nature and made us free from heavy schoolworks for a while. Additional, it increased the friendship among us. Seen our positive changes, our head teacher was also satisfied.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Julian Melcer is 80-year-old man. He often goes out for walking. Last Friday, when walked in the street, he saw a baby pigeon in the middle of the road. The pigeon were trying to fly away from a cat but she fell to the ground. The pigeon was such afraid as the cat went to her. Julian saved from the pigeon and brought her home. He provides water and food for the pigeon. Soon they became good friends. Julian is happily to go outside with the pigeon on her shoulder every day. He always says every person can had an animal as a friend. In his opinion, that matters most is to respect animals.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the development of society and economy, the number of private cars are increasing at a surprising speed. As we all know it, cars give off poisonous gas, cause global warming, frequent natural disasters, diseases and so on. In order to protecting our environment, it is high time that we should go green.
Firstly, we should raise people’s aware of the importance of going green. Secondly, using public transportation can make great difference to the problem what is caused by private cars. Additional, we shouldn’t waste water, energy or food and so on. At last, on our daily life it is a good idea to classify and recycle rubbishes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
“It’s been raining snakes during the recent heavy rain,” reported the Mumbai edition of the Times of India on July 26th, in a news piece about a snake which refused to forced out of a truck. The same paper contained several report of three other snakes rescued from a shipping container. A lost snake spotted on a city beach make the papers the next day. Later that week a 28-year-old man found a snake in the distant suburbs, wrapping it around his neck and walked through a nearby market area. He died after a snake bit him three times. It is not literally raining snakes. But a week of heavy rain has been had the same effect, driving snakes and other reptiles into the city, that they seek warmth and shelter. There are plenty to be found. Mumbai is high built up and densely populated. And it is also full of rubbish, thus attracting rats. The rats, by turn, attract hungry snakes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Peter,
I am writing to you regarded the problem of global warming. When I watch TV, I was surprised to watch the weather forecast saying that it was going to be warmer. Was it to continue, people would have no place to live in. These years, the earth has became warmer and warmer owing humans’ activities. This phenomena has appealed to many scientists, for who want to find out the cause of it. For example, people use too many energy in order to develop economy without caring about the earth. Meanwhile, factories give off large amounts of carbon dioxide what has a great influence on an increase of temperature of the earth.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Like other natural disaster, hurricanes can strike in many places. Thus, no matter where you live in, you may be at risk. As a matter of fact, whether it’s first time you’ve weathered a storm, or you’ve grown up in a hurricane area, know how to prepare for a hurricane is quite important. It usually mean the difference between major destruction or minor wind damage. To stay safely during hurricanes, you’d better planned ahead. For example, you can sign up for flood insurance, check the roof, putting away the outdoor items and so on. The hurricane-prep tips will give them peace of mind when the disaster strikes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
On a sunny day, the air was thin but we had to rest several time on the short hike from our camp. To our left, snow-covered mountains disappear into clouds that seemed almost closely enough to touch. On the plain in the front of us, we could just make out a herd of graceful animals. This was whether we were here to observe Tibetan antelopes.
Watched them move slowly across the green grass, I was struck their beauty. I was also reminding of the danger they were in. Tibetan antelopes live on the plains of Tibet, Xinjiang and Qinghai. They are being hunted illegally for its valuable fur.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After school, I was about to enter into my apartment when I saw a little dirty dog lie beside the dustbin. He looked extremely weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy. So I decided to take him home. I gave him some food and a bath. After the bath he looked energy and refreshed. What a lovely dog!
When my parents got home, I asked that I could keep the dog. To my surprise and joys, they agreed. Up to now, he has become member of our family and everyone have enjoyed his company. Looked at the cute and happy dog today, I realize that I was right to help him. I offered him a shelter and he brought ourselves great happiness and laughter.
10 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today, the once-in-500-years total solar eclipse (日食) took place. Unfortunate, I was ill and couldn’t observe it myself, so I had to watch it on television. I clearly watched the Diamond Ring, Bailey’s Beads (贝利珠) or solar eclipses in other areas. The sun on TV was originally round, what later became a boat, like a dog taking off a big bite of a biscuit. Gradually, the sun became thin than an eyebrow. Suddenly, Bailey’s Beads and the Diamond Ring jump out naughtily. Then, a large black disk obviously hung in the sky, the sky became as black as night. After the while, the sun slowly recovered. Ah ha, the dog couldn’t swallow the biscuit and spat out.
