增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Thursday, we have had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our autumn trip. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing. The next day, we left to the mountain early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful sceneries. However, when we reached the top, we were shocking to see rubbish here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. We felt sadly that many tourists didn’t take good care of nature. Soon, they started to pick them up. With all the rubbish putting in the rubbish bin, the place looked many more beautiful than before. When we came back, it was 5:30 in the afternoon. We were tired and happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
An old woman had a cat. The cat was very old; she could not run quick, and she could not bite, because of she was so old. One day an old cat saw a mouse; she jumped to caught the mouse. But she could not bite it; so the mouse got out of his mouth and ran away, because the cat could not bite it.
Then the old woman became very angry because the cat had not killed the mouse. She began hit the cat. The cat said, “Do not hit your older servant. I have worked for you for many year, and I would work for you still, because I am too old. Do not be unkind to the old, but remember what good work the old did when they are young.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m writing to tell you something about Edinburgh which you ask about in the last e-mail.
Edinburgh, located in the southeast of Scotland, was the capital city of Scotland as well as their political and cultural center. It covers a area of 264 square kilometers with only a small population 1. 33 million. With the airport lain in the center of the city, it is convenient for people to go around. Close to the seaside, Edinburgh has a mild climate, that makes it one of the most popular tourism city in the UK. It also has absolute splendid ancient architecture, like the Edinburgh Castle.
I will be happy to guide you around our city if you will come here.
Yours,
Harry
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’d love to share with you my personally opinions on city life and life in small towns. I grow up in a small town and then moved to a big city at 18, so I have experienced the good and bad side of both. I never thought that I would enjoy live in a big city, but I was wrong. After ten years of living on one, I can’t imagine ever living in a small town again. Surely small towns and big cities all have some problems in terms of transport. In a small town, you have to own a car make life comfortable. Big cities generally have heavy traffic and expensive parking, but there you have a choice of taking public transport, which is cheap than driving. I can always enjoy a lot of films, concerts, and another wonderful shows. However, these things are not rare in small towns.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, the Environmental Protection Club of our school hold a clean-up project in the People’s Park so as to raise the environmental aware of the public. A number of volunteer gathered at the school gate, but went to the park by bike. Some of them picked up the litter, and some were put the rubbish into the dustbins. Many visitors came to our help, showing considerable appreciation and support. That they did made the park much clean and more attractive. The project was great success and the club decided to organized such activities regularly.
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mother earth is a place that various species can coexist. Unfortunately, wild animals had no place in the 21st century. Some people think that protecting these wild animals are a waste of resources. But an increased number of people come to realize that the disappearance of animals will result from a serious threat to ecosystem. It is hard imagine what our world would be like without animals. There are enough farm animals providing us with sufficient and nutritious meat. However, we don’t need to make a use of wild animals, especially the endangered ones. To protect animals is to protect ours living environment. So great efforts should be made by every individual to keep the diversity of animal.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
After school, I was about to enter into my apartment then I saw a little dirty dog lying beside the dustbin. He looked extremely weak. Immediate the homeless dog filled me with mercy. So I decided to take him home. I gave him some food and bath. After the bath he looked energy and refreshed. What a lovely dog!
When my parents got home, I asked that I could keep the dog. To my surprised and joy, they agreed. Up to now, he has become a member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company. Looked at the cute and happy dog today, I realize that I was right to help him. We offered him a shelter and he has brought ourselves great happiness and laughter.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandparents keep the lovely dog. It will run out to give me a warm welcome wherever I pay a visit to my grandparents. But last weekend I didn't see them when I arrived. I felt very strangely and asked Grandma about it. Learned that it was sick and that it hadn't eaten anything for two days, I hurried to examine it, but sure enough, I saw it lying in its house. I called its name and it only opened its eyes slowly and stared me without moving its body. I begged Grandpa to have it examine by the doctor. It turned out that it had been eaten poisonous food. After some treatment, it looked a lot good on the way home.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Zhang Jie, a 45-year-old volunteer, had picked up rubbish on the Great Wall since 2014. It is his eight year protecting the historic wall. For Zhang, born and was raised in a village near the Great Wall, the Wall is not just a treasure left by the ancestors, and a childhood paradise (乐园). However, with more tourists coming, more rubbish needs collected. Sometimes, rubbish bags are piled up to one meter higher. Zhang came up with an idea and formed a group 20 volunteers. Zhang’s story has inspired million of Weibo users, many of who express their appreciation to him. Today, Zhang is still protecting the Great Wall in her own way.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The other day, our class had made an interesting outing. Though we enjoyed the charming scenery and fresh air all the way, we were astonishing to see some bad behavior. Some people threw rubbish here and there, turn the public place into a large dustbin. Others carved word on famous buildings or picked flowers casually.
An eco-friendly journey not only allows us express our love for nature but need our responsibility. As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we can’t damage them. Only when we improve our aware of eco-friendly travel can the earth become more beautiful. After all, which matters most for us is the earth because it is the only place for us to live.
