增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today we experienced enjoyable period of English class as usually. As soon as the bell rang, our teacher began to divide us from several groups to do the writing. After we knew when to do next, we set out to held a discussion immediately. Some students shared their ideas about the main point s while others added the detailed informations. Then we finished it quickly. Comparing to the compositions of the other groups, our is better. Whenever I passed by the Learning Garden on the back wall of our classroom in this week, our composition catch my eyes, reminding me of the excellent team work of our group.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I experienced something amazing last Spring Festival. On the second day of the holiday, it was snowing heavy but we had a very important relative to visit, who lived in a distant mountain village. They had to take risks to drive on our journey. The road was bad, and we arrived safely. A family welcomed us warmly. We treated with a good dinner. Later in the afternoon, after say goodbye, we start to return home. Sadly, our car was stuck in the snow halfway and couldn’t move. Just now, my father saw two villager walking by. They offered to push our car. Their helping us out of made our trip unforgettable.
该行多一个词:多词处已经划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并用斜线(\)划掉。
该行缺一个词:缺词处已经加一个漏字符号(︿ ),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:错词处已经划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
The Students’ Union will holding a special activity
in order ︿ enrich the life of the students in our school.
Next Sunday, we will go to a farm to pick apple
from 8:00 to 11:00 on the morning. If you want to
enjoy worked in the countryside and really have the
fun of farm work, you will be have to come to the office
but sign up before 5:00 pm next Thursday.
Everyone are welcome to join in this activity.
Don’t forget to bring an hat and a pair of gloves. They
will protect you from sunlight and help you pick apples quick.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday evening Alice was busy prepare for her tomorrow’s test when suddenly loud noises came into her room. Her neighbor was watching football match on TV in his room.The noises were so loudly that she couldn’t go on studying. She covered her ear with her hands, try to keep the noises out, and it was no use. Alice got impatient.
So she has to go to explain his difficulty. After hearing that she said, her neighbor apologized and turned down the TV immediately. Alice thanked to him and went back to continue her study.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除;.把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I strongly call on everyone to stop feed animals improperly in natural scenic areas. My family and he just went on a trip to the city park which there are beautiful lakes, streams and plants. Therefore, I found that many tourists fed the ducks, fish and other animals in the park with snacks they bring. In my an opinion, such behaviour will have a negative effect with both the animals and the environment.
Food made for human-beings may contain too many salt and fat, which can cause seriously health problems if animals eat too much. Also, food thrown into the lakes or left on the ground could regarded as pollutants and it will further destroy the living condition of animals.
增加:把缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I know that a Chinese painting exhibition hold by the local government is about to kick off in the art gallery. Now I want to apply to the voluntary job. Firstly, I’m proficient in English, but I can communicate with foreigners fluently. Secondly, I am so responsible and outgoing that I can get along well with other. What’s more, I am a lot of more experienced because I work as a volunteer in our local museum 3 months ago. Most importantly, I have good knowledge of Chinese art, which enables me to introduce Chinese paintings to visitor clearly and expertly. I think I am suit for this job. I would appreciate it whether you could give me a chance.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My book is The Call of the Wild. I bought one in Xinhua book store, which cost me 30 yuan. The book, which cover is black and green, contains 300 pages. Having been read the story three times, I am always touched by the dog experiences. From the dog Bark’s grow, I realize each living being is born to adapt to nature and competition. Since I want to read another work writing by Jack London, I would like to exchange this book another novel called White Fang. If anybody is willingly to exchange the one with me, please contacting me immediately. It’s an pleasure to share books. Looking forward to your reply.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, my classmates and I did an tree planting activity for our coming-of-age ceremony. In the morning, we meet at the school gate and took the school bus to the tree planting place. Upon arrival, we set to work immediate. Some dug hole, and some carried and planted young trees, while others watered it. We all worked too hard that we finished the task ahead time. After getting the work done, we put up a board read “Adult Forest”. Then we took some photos to recording our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, so we all had a sense of achievement.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
For thousands of years, people had accepted challenges in different fields. There are not only physical challenges and also intellectual challenges. Some people risk his lives to play sports to see how good they can do. Others try to invent something make life easier. They all enjoy challenges. Today, there are still much challenges before us. Medical science face the challenge of conquering(攻克)many diseases what still attack human beings. Engineers and planners must build new city and design new kinds of transportation. Scientists must develop new forms of energy. In short of, we live in an age full of challenges.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
To enrich the school life, a activity named the Youth Art Competition will held by the Students’ Union next Friday. All the students were welcome to participate in the activity. Thought of the convenience, we require you to submit your basic informations online. You must include your name and phone number, what can help us get in touch with you timely. Because of there are many styles of traditional arts in the activity, remember to chose a group when you sign up. Prizes of the competition are very attractively, including twelve finalists and one special prize winner. So what are we waiting for?