增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, my mother and I went to a park. We had a goodtime, deciding to have the lunch in the park. With some milks and bread ready, my mother and I went to wash my hands. However, when we came back, our bread was going! We thought that it was someone took it. We were very angry. I thought that the thief will come back to take the milk. So, my mother and I hid behind a tree or waited. One hour late, no one came. We were such hungry that we had to give in. Suddenly, I found something under the chair. Oh, it was our bread!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The unforgettable birthday party for him is not one of my birthday but it is my grandfather’s. My uncle held so a big party that all the relatives and friends of his family could get together and enjoyed that wonderful time. The party began at noon and many neighbors had gone to my uncle’s house do their help in the morning. In the afternoon, more people came up many presents for visiting grandpa. My grandpa said that if it was his 60th birthday and this day was the better of his life. You can imagine how touching my grandfather was on that day. Grandpa loved the big lively party.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This summer, to support the activity of environmental protection, Jack and I was passing from Mainpuri city to another city while two young kids came to us and said: “Well done, you are doing good work. We are with you.” It was a very inspirational moment for me to get acknowledged and appreciate. They walked with us for one mile. They were very impressed by our work and looked very happily. They also offered food. But their words and companies were enough for us. Before that we didn’t need food or water, so we thanked them and were moved forward. Through journey, I hoped everyone could realize the important of environmental protection.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, our school held a 5km cross-country running race, that attracted many enthusiastic participants, included both students and teachers.
The route went from our school gate to the foot of the South Mountain. About 200 students and 60 teachers participate in the race, which began 9: 00 am and lasted about an hour. The whole course was extreme difficult. However, no participants gave up halfway. All the racers are held on to the finish line.
As the activity was challenging, everyone enjoyed it but benefited a lot from it. Therefore, we both think highly of it, and expect more activity like this in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is reported that 1 out of 3 school child doesn’t have the needed supplies support their learning. To collect school supplies for the needy students, my friends and me organized a charity action in our school on last Sunday. I lay some tables in the playground, where the students involving in it could put their donations. Eventual, forty backpacks filled with school supplies was donated to the needy children. Meantime, we collected two boxes of school supplies for teachers with the total value of approximately $1,100. It’s amazing that we can accomplish when we work together!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last year, with Christmas approached, my sisters and I felt quite thrilled. However, one day after Christmas, my father gathered us together. He told us he can’t afford any presents, even our traditional treat. As the oldest child, I felt upset and understandable. My mother had a serious disease, who cost my family much money to constant seek a cure. On the Christmas Eve, we heard a knock on the door. Unexpectedly, two our neighbors came in with some gifts. It kept we entertained. I will never forget the two kind neighbors who have always been inspiring me to share anything with those in need.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Born in Tokyo in 1950, Steve moved to London with his parent at five, where he started school there. His mother was a housewife and his father work at a hospital.
After ten years, Steve went to Cyprus to study at the Mediterranean University. Unfortunate, he didn’t succeed and went to Jordan. His parents were very unhappy, but he decided to try in America.
He applied for many universities in the USA and finally got some acceptance offers. He chooses Wichita State University in Kansas and her major was Bio-medical Engineering. He stayed there for about six months before he moved again to very small town calling Greensboro to study in a small college.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When study in elementary school, I once talked to a better friend about volunteering. I was sorry to hear she has never volunteered before. More surprising, I found that opportunity to volunteer was not easy to get for other classmates either. Then I came up with an idea, this was to organize one volunteer opportunity a month at school. They would make a difference through simple act of service if I could offer other kids situations to teach them the importance of giving back. However, I presented my idea to our headmaster. To his great happiness, it was recognized. It started as one project in a small classroom and eventually was turned out a success in my whole school.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was sitting on a train to Shenzhen on the other day. During the journey the middle-aged man suddenly threw up, making those around him extreme upset. The lovely young lady, Miya, sitting near me stepped forward but started talking to him to make sure he was all right. They talked for about 10 minutes, during that time Miya showed such great cares towards that complete stranger. She calms him down and helped him come to the decision seek assistance. Admittedly, she impressed all of us sitting nearby with her good. Thank you and well done for win at being an awesome human being!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m sorry to say that I can’t go to Wuzhen with you as planning. I’m writing to apologize for breaking my promise. I had been expecting to visit Wuzhen with you, where we can get close to the nature and experience local customs. However, I can’t travel recent because I hurt my leg in an accident. That is because I think it is a good choice for us to put away our travel. I would appreciate if you could allow me to fix another date. If it’s convenience for you, shall we travel there in our summer vacations this year? If not, please keep me informed of what time suited you best in advance.
