1 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修以你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How many time do you spend with your parents? Your parents are your dearer people in the world when you are young. And they always care for you deep. But even though many children still loves their mum and dad, families may become less close as you get older. The end of the year is a time for families to got together. Have you ever thought of how you can show your parents that you love them? Find a chances and do something for them or have sincere talk with them. What you can do this, your parents will be very happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our school organized a hike last week, what impressed us deeply. In order to strengthen our bodies, all the students and teachers in our school took an active part in it.
We set off at 8 am on Wednesday at the school gate, head for Qixing Mountain happy. On the way to the destination, we chat with each other, sang songs and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. We had hiked for about one and a half hour before we arrived at the mountain. Then they had lunch there and played with some interesting games. How meaningful and impressive activity was!
After walking a long distance, all of us was exhausted, and we felt very happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, I didn’t get up early as usually. In the morning after I finished my homework, I do some washing. Then I telephoned one of my classmates, invite him to see a film. And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema, we found all the tickets had sold out. Then we went back to school and played the football. After that, we were about to go home while we saw our English teacher, Ms. Gao, coming into the school gate. She told us we had made great progresses in English. This term she suggested that we would read and write as much as possible. She also asked us to help those on need. She hoped we would improve English together.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday our school was held a long-distance race. The race had a distance of 8,000 meter along the lake, which the traffic is less crowded and the air is fresh. I participated the race too, because it was a good chance to build up my strength and appreciate nature. Those who finish running the race could win medals. The top three students had access to the track and field team of their school. I was between them. Though tiring, I felt proud of myself. I hope our school will hold such a activity every year.
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I know that you have a strong desire to buy some specially gifts with typical Chinese features. I’m extremely delighted to offer you some advices. Here are some details.
Firstly, a tea pot producing by Wuxi is an extraordinary option. China has a profound history concerning tea culture, which could date back thousands of years ago. Beside, not only can drinking tea promote our sense of satisfaction, but also can improve ours memory. Secondly, that calls for our special attention is the treasure of China, Panda. Thus, a toy is named Bing Dwen Dwen can be considered due to its lovely look.
As the matter of fact if you can take my suggestions into consideration, I’m sure your family will love what you chose for them.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Aiming to provide an opportunity with students to enrich their knowledge about Western culture, yesterday the English club organizes a visit to the art exhibition of David Hockney in the City Art Gallery. He is one of the most influential British artists. I was fortunately to participate. Together with other club members, I admired some masterpieces by David and watched a video about her. My favorite part was watching the digital versions of the paintings, which enabled me observe those great work from different angles and have a new insight into them. Although that this exhibition displayed was limited, but I think the visit meaningful and beneficial. After all, learn English is not only about the language itself, but also a culture it comes from.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last weekend, our school hold an activity themed “Forbid Littering in Our School”. It left an unforgettably impression on me. Aiming to solve the problems causing by casually littering in, and it asked us to pick up rubbish. Many student just ignored our school rules and littered everywhere, what made it annoying to walk around the school. It was not only bad our health but let us develop bad habits. Through this activity, we realize the importance of protecting the living environment in your school and many of us volunteer to help those who breaks the school rules. We believe we can make the big difference together.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字的符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
More and more people attach great importance relationships in career success. Being polite is the first and most important step to develop good relationships among friends. Polite word can be easy yet very powerful in your daily life.
Always saying “please” and “thank you” will make your friends feeling more comfortable and more willingly to offer help when necessary. We all know that one man’s success is based on what he deals with people. Always being grateful to others people’s kindness and show your gratitude through the words you say. The more support you win from other people, the more faster you will move towards your goal.
Remember, being polite cost nothing so it’s worth a million dollars.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分，
Dear Steve,
I’m interested in voluntary work and want to do which I can to help anyone in need. So I’m writing to apply to the job.
I really love science and technology, but I’m a member of the Science and Technology Club in our school, which has helped me accumulate a lot of knowledges. Also, be hard-working and outgoing, I think I can get along well with others easy. Thus, with your experience and deep love of science and technology, I believed I can provide the best service.
I would be more than happy if you could offer to me such a chance. I’d appreciate if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It cause more traffic jams and accidents. As the student, what can we do to guarantee our safe? First of all, the traffic rules must be strict obeyed. When we cross streets, waiting until the traffic light turns green. Next, don’t forget walk on the pavement. Finally, I think it very dangerously to wear headphones while walking or cycling. Since we can’t pay enough attention on the traffic around us, so accidents may happen. We should take good care of us and not let our parents worry about us.
