增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, my friends and I decided to go to skiing together. As we arrived, we could see the slopes cover in a blanket of white, which waited for us to overcoming them. We eager rented our skis and snowboards and made our way to the beginner’s slope. Some of us were experiencing skiers, when others were trying it for the first time. We encouraged each other but shared tips on how to manage the slopes. As we slid down hill, a sense of joy filled the air. We challenged us to tackle more challenging runs. Skiing together not only allowed us to enjoy the thrill of the sport but strengthen our friendship.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The environment pollution becomes more and more seriously today. We may have little clean water to drink in the future because of water has been polluted. And when trees are cut down, some animal disappear. There is more and more dirty smoke in the air. People’s health has been affecting by air, noise and water pollution. Much people have died of diseases caused by pollute. In order to live a better life, it’s time for us protect our world. We should recycle and reuses resources in our life, which saves money and reduces pollution. Don’t use plastic bags. And we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them down. In the near future, we will have an unique and clean world with your efforts.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Now I still remember my working experience in a restaurant last summer. One day, I entered into it to get a meal. However, that attracted my attention was not the menu, but a notice that said, “NOW HIRING”. I took look at the requirements and thought maybe I could had a try. On arriving home, I talk to my parents about get a part-time job in the restaurant during the summer vacation. They strong supported me. Determined to challenge me, I went to the interview. Fortunately, I passed it but I was really pride of myself!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Xiao Li,
Now I’d like to tell you why I learn English. I often read English al oud and try to learn something important by heart, which can help you remember it easily and form the good habit of think in English. I listen a lot of and talk with others in English. However, I have improved my spoken English. I keep an diary in English every day and my written English are becoming better and better. I also try my best master the necessary grammar. In this way, I can expressed myself in English correctly. That’s the way I have been learning English. I hope it will be very use to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When the news came which I was not chosen as a member of the volleyball team, I was so disappointed that I almost decided give up. However, my best friend Mary analyzed her problems. She pointed out that my lazy and poor preparation led to my failure. From then on, I devoted all my spare times to practising playing and consult my teachers about skills. When another chance came up, I have got fully prepared, as a result of which, I was chosen but became one of the most important players in our school team. From this story, I am definitely convinced that the well prepared we are, the more likely we are able to achieve of our goals.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, many students in our school don’t have enough time do sports. Most of our time is spent on study, which causes some health problem. Thus, our school is held Sunshine Sports activities to improve our physical but mental health. The activities are conducted on every afternoon. We are free to do however we like. The schoolyard is full of laugh and life. As the name suggest, the Sunshine Sports activities make us sunshine boys and girls. Besides, we have a good understanding of sports, friendship as well as team spirit than before. Up to now, the activities had received high praise from both students and teachers.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Good morning, everyone! It is my great honour to be here to share with you my opinions on how to learn well in school.
Firstly, we should learn to learn efficient. Personally, I used to trying effective method to achieve my academic goals. Develop a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot of to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what have been taught after class. In addition, we should learn how to get along well with other. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithful that we created a harmonious atmosphere. Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently, that were really helpful to build up our body and enrich our school life.
No pains, no gains. I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy colorful and meaningful life here.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday morning, I planned to have a long sleep, but my mother woke me up in a louder voice, “Time to get up, sweetheart.” It was just 8: 30 in the morning, so I reply, “It’s still early, Mum. I want to sleep again.” However, no sooner had I continued my sleep than my mother pulled me out of bed. When my parents and I started out for their home in the countryside, the weather was fine and I was cheerfully. Upon arriving at our farmland, we began to work in the field. At the beginning, my mother taught me what to grow vegetables. And it took me some minutes learn to take the care of them. After that, I was asked to turn over the soil with a digger and I soon ran out of my energy. Although do farm work was tiring, but I had a really great day. Now I realize it is of great important to do farm work even for us students because we should have any labor education.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(⋀),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(1)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, I went on the study tour in Mount Tai with a group of students. During one of our hikes, I found myself felt weak and struggling to keep up with the others. As I stop to catch my breath, I started to feel discouraging with myself. But soon I realized that not everyone had their own pace and that it was okay for me to take breaks when I needed it. With this new perspective, I continued the hike with a more positive attitude but was able to appreciate those unique qualities that makes me who I am. I realized what it was important to admit my strengths and weaknesses and accept myself who I am.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I spent an unforgettable time in last weekend. My mother has to go to the hospital to take care of my grandmother which fell ill and received an operation. Therefore, he asked me to stay at home and look after my brother, who was only three year old. I had to keep my eyes fixing on him while doing my homework. Then I did all I could please him by singing sweet songs and telling amused stories. Five hours passed by before our mom came back. I breathed a sigh of relief. This turned out to be an special experience. Now I know that being a mother of two is not so easier as I thought.
