增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of disease, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in greet need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I will concentrate to studies, after all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As the development of technology, more and more students prefer to use electric products for taking notes and sending messages, rather than writing on the paper. However, our handwriting is not as good as it is in the past. Face the problem, we should do as follows:
First, we should use more electric products when learning. If so, we can have more opportunities to improve our handwriting. Besides, we must form the habit of practising calligraphy every day. What’s more, it is better to write letter to our relatives and friends by the hand instead of sending e-mails.
Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit to us students. So let’s take action right now! I’m sure our efforts will paid off.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
I used to follow other people’s methods of learn English, but I don’t get good grades. But I decided to combine my hobbies and to learning English. Now I often watch British dramas and listen to English songs what are popular over and over again. After repeatedly listening and watching, I learn new words, authentic expression and Western thinking patterns. I also read few foreign books like the Harry Potter series and listen to short audio courses and stories. Those things allows me to improve your English ability, not just English scores.
增加: 在缺词处加个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With my college life approach, in order to get used to college life quickly, I should prepared myself for that from now on. To begin with, when entering into college, I will set new goals for my studies and stick to it until I succeed. What’s more, since I’m away from home, it is necessary for me learn to live independently. In my spare time, I will take part in a variety of activity. Additionally, getting along with my classmates and teachers at college are another challenge for me, and for sure I’ll make it. I have a strong belief what my college life will be absolute wonderful.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Karl,
How’s everything going? I’m writing to share you a brilliant thing.
I win the first prize in the Music Star Festival to held by my school last week. The song I sang was the Red Sun by David Lee. I chose a song because of the inspiration it took me. Every time I enjoy it I feel something warmth flowing in my heart. I can’t emphasize the importance of others’ encouragement too much. Not only can they make me happy, but also can encourage me to keep moving. When I were under pressure, I choose to listen to the song and catch my breathe.
I do hope you also like the song. Do you have any songs that encourage you? Looking forward to you early reply.
Yours,
Jack
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
My favourite inventor is Alexander Graham Bell. At a young age, Bell started to show much interest helping deaf people communicate, which led to their invention of the microphone. Beside, he also invented the telephone in 1876. However, at the beginning, what he actually tried to design was not a telephone but a multiple telegraph. During his search to improve the telegraph, Bell invents the first telephone. One of his most famous saying is: “Leave the beaten track occasional and dive into the woods. Every time you do so you will be certain to find something which is completely new in your life.” Indeed, what it was his acute curiosity that made his success. Bell was a honourable inventor all his life. He made his first invention at 11 but his last invention at 75.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I know a professor who’s also a millionaire. A few years ago he have an important invention and made fortune. Although he was very successful, he didn’t forget the village children who was suffering from poverty and hungry. He could have lived comfortably so he donated all his money to a village school so that the children would not drop out. He also equipped teachers offices with furniture. Her ultimate goal was for all children to go to school. If he couldn’t do so, he would be feel guilty. The professor’s kindness has been appreciated for all. It is said that the professor has became a philanthropist(慈善家).
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Among the colorful after-school activity in our school, I like dancing best. I have been in a school dance club since the first week I came there. After school we practise dance on a regular basis, which helps me connect with others and great enriches my campus life. I love dancing because of it is more than just moving your body for fun and joy. It is a way relieve stress and enjoy life. Beside, mastering any style of dance take hard work, determination and patience, which shape me into a better person. I would not be that I am today without dancing after school.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was in Grade Eight, I was the member of the school choir. Confident of my sweet voices, I was delighted to sign up a singing competition. The audience gave a long and loudly applause when I finished my last high note. I hope to win first prize. However, the result was that I came second. Shocking and sad, I couldn’t help but to weep in a small voice. Just then, my friend Alice passed I a handkerchief and told me not to cry for what I lost and appreciate what I have. A warm smile and words of comfort relieved me of my grief, and I was not longer in low spirits.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第l1处起)不计分。
Our school sports meeting finally came to end last Friday. Tiring but cheerful, we made it a success. I can say it’s the best one I have ever been taken part in. The opening ceremony was a feast for the eyes. To begin with, the headmaster makes a speech. Then came various performance, including singing, dancing and kung fu. Besides, students dressed up as dolls, and that they wanted to show was confident and talent. When the teachers’ shows began, the audience went crazily. As a class photographer, I took pictures of such many brilliant moments, which, with doubt, meant a lot to all of us.
