增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’d like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well.
First, it was important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practicing with your fellow students. Then, it also help to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible. It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!
Besides, it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easy. You can also make more Chinese friends, who will tell me a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try to speak Chinese as many as possible.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My 4-year-old son Sandy happened find a toy panda. He held onto it all day but took it to bed with him at night. Later, I run across a community post from a mum urgent looking for a lost panda—her son’s favorite. I messaged that we had one that evening. She was so relieving! In the morning, I had to break the news to Sandy which another little boy was missing his favorite toy. Tear streaming down his face, he gave me the panda. The little treasure was returned back to its rightful owner. This morning, I found a dropped-off card and new panda for Sandy—as the big thank you for him! Thank you so much, lovely neighbors!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a student, my most favorite dream job is becoming a doctor. It has been my dream since my early age. My father is a doctor and he is very busy to be with me. I am not sad because what he did is highly thought by his patients. I hope to be a person like her and devote my life to help others. But what I can reach my goal soon are not easy. The only thing I can do is to study hardly and prepare myself with rich knowledges. What about your dream?
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
After leaving a store, I returned to my car, only find that I’d locked my keys and cell phone outside. A boy which rode his bike saw me kick a tire and say a little choice words. “What’s wrong?” he was asked. I explained my situation. “But even if I could call my wife,” I said anxious, “she can’t bring me her car key, since this is our only car.” He handed me her cell phone. “Call your wife and tell her I’m going to get her key.” “That is a seven-mile round trips.” “Don’t worry about it.” An hour later, he returned with the key. I offered him some money, and he refused. “Let’s just say I needed the exercise,” he said. Then, like an cowboy in the movies, he rode off into the sunset.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Allan Stewart, a famous Australia legend, was born on March 7th, 1915. It makes him remarkable what he has experienced life of constant study. He acquired his first academic qualification in 1936. He devoted himself to medicine for several years, but he got a Doctor’s degree. Having been acquired two degrees, Allan Stewart continued to study law in her eighties. Successful, he got his master’s degree in 2006 when he was at the age of 91, the older one, creating a world record. His belief that one was never too late to learn made him succeed getting the fourth degree. Allan Stewart will encourage us to improve our spiritual life to reach great achievement in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Many little drop of water make an ocean, as the saying goes. A small action may lead to major changes in society. My friends and I participated a voluntary activity at a nursing home last week. We first did some cleaning or washing. After that we spend half an hour chat with the old people living there. Though it was a tired day, we were happy with that we did. I felt a sense of responsibility by visiting the old. If all of us lend a hand to the people in the need, we can live in harmony with each other. Our society is just like a big family. If they are willing to help others, our small action can certain make a big difference.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In your e-mail,you ask me for some suggestions about how to have a healthy family. Here is my advice. Generally spoken,a healthy family needs efforts of every family member. First,it is obviously that parents should treat their children equally，that is important for the family. What's more,children or parents can benefit from having some day-to-day routines. In the addition,every member should give other member right expectations. Finally,you should love my own family life. In a word,if you want to own a healthy family,it is the positive attitude that are of great importance. I would appreciate very much if you could write back and give me your own opinion.
