注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today I went to the local store do some shopping. When I went to a store, two foreign visitors were happened to be there. The salesgirl didn’t know that they wanted to buy because they couldn’t speak Chinese. Saw this, I offered to help them. In my help, the two men got the things they wanted. They were very glad and thankful to her.
How happy I am that day. Though I knew little English, I could help others, it makes me further realize how important spoken English is. I’ll work even hard at it than before.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day, I went home so lately that my mother couldn't afford to wait me any longer. So she began to have a lunch by herself. When I opened the door, my mother seemed to feel a little embarrassing. She hurried to heat the dishes what had already turned a little cold on the table. I stopped her and saying with a smile, “It was not necessary, Mom. I can eat them.” I clearly remembered that my mother had taught me not to cause any trouble to other at any time. In fact, I just didn't want to trouble him any more as she was already too tired from doing the houseworks.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Chelsea Hill is a respectable girl. Since the age of three, she has dreamed of be a dancer.
That ambition was nearly on an end one night in 2010. Hill, then a17-year-old high school student in Pacific Grove, California, was in a car accident, that put her in hospital for 51 day and left her paralyzed from the waist down. For most people, that will have ruined any hope of dreams. For Hill himself, it was the beginning. Although it was real tough, but Hill achieved the dream in her wheelchair. Hoping to expand her dance to help women like her, Hill moved to Los Angeles in 2014 and formed team of dancer with disabilities naming the Rollettes.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Babe is one of my closest friend now. Whenever I feel down, I enjoy his company. Whenever he is in trouble, I would like help him. Actually, he was an abandoning cat. I rescued him from hard situations and nursed him back to health. It was in my friend's backyard which I found him. Then he was a baby of less than a month who he looked so skinny and sick. Seen him trembling with cold, I took him in with hesitation. Now he is 7 years old, health and happy. Quite often a naughty cat gets in fights with cats in the neighbourhood but frequently comes home with scratches in his thick, gray fur.
增加:在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My school held an excited sports meet recently. During the event, enjoyment sweep over us all. In the relay race, while the starter gun fired, athletes ran fast to pass other competitor. It kept the rest of us on the edge of our seats.“Hold on! You can make that!” students yelled. In the distance running competition, all people cheered and clapped with runners who passed by. At the same time, a volunteer team of over 400 students were divided into several groups to help teachers and athletes. Taking a part in a sports meet is a good way to raise your enthusiasm for learn. Sports can help you forget all that make you unhappy and face school and life more positive.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day when I was 7, my mother and I were doing shopping. I saw the dress and I liked it very much. But money was tight, or my mother said to me “Maybe next time. “May I buy the dress your daughter?" asked other customer. "Thank you, but we can't accept such a beautiful gift,” my mother said. Then she told us her story. She has been homeless for three years. But for the kindness of strangers, she would not to have survived. "I feel luckily that I'm no longer homeless," she said. "That I've promised to do is repay the kindness. "After pay for the dress, she just accepted our thankful hugs.
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are many reasons why helping others are good. Not only does this behavior make us feel satisfying, but also this satisfaction leads to sense of belonging. I learn this lesson by helping a totally stranger out last Friday. When I was walking back home after school on last Friday, I came across an old man lain beside the street, who had tripped over because of stepping on a banana skin. By his side scattered his purchase out of a shopping bag. Seeing this, I quickly came to him and helped himself stand up. I didn’t leave until I made sure whether he recovered. Now I think I did the easiest thing of all to make myself happy!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, I met a foreigner whom asked me the way to the hospital. At the first, I didn't understand him very well. And then he repeated and tried to make him understood. Finally, I knew where he wanted to go but told him the way patient. As a poor English learner, I managed to let him know how get to the hospital. The foreigner thanks me for my help and I felt glad that I got a chance to communicate with others by English. At that time, I realized the importance of learn English well. From now on, I decided to study English well.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In a freezing cold winter, Cory Richards was climbing down from Gasherbrum II, the 13th tall mountain peak in the world, when his life changed in an instant. Lied between Pakistan and China, the mountain is not easy to climb and the cold that day was painful. As Richards and his team was climbing down, they heard a noise and looked down. They saw snow and ice coming toward them. They were hit and throwing to the ground. Luckily they all survive. Seeing his partners were safe, so Richards took some pictures, which captured the accident they had experienced. One of these photo made him become famous photographer. Sometimes it is something unexpected which can change your life forever.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A woman which has recently had plastic surgery on her face now regrets the decision. The surgery takes place more than a month ago, but Ella Edwards still suffers from daily pain. This is stopping him from returning to a normal life. She has been to several hospitals and all the doctor say that the pain is unlikely stop any time soon. She may need to take painkillers for a long time. In an addition, Miss Edwards says the surgery makes her look unnaturally and that she is unable to make certain facial expressions.
Miss Edwards is unhappy with the results of the surgery. “I wanted to become more beautiful, and it hasn’t turned out well at all. I really regret have the surgery,” she said. “I’m very anxious for it.”
