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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My teacher Mr. Bush is the most positive person I’ve ever been met. He serves for a great teacher because of his ability to passing on positiveness to young students. Mr. Bush have been my teacher since kindergarten. He always smiles and never gets madly at students. At that time, I always felt overshadowed by my brother, which seemed to be doing better in every way. Hopelessness drowned us. But when Mr. Bush found I lost confident in myself, he just keeps encouraging me, and an unexpected warmth rushed through me as though I had been refueled. This made me ready go! Because of Mr Bush, my world was filled with sunshine and power.

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