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修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
Anne is my best friend in high school. Honest and friendly, she gets along well to other students. She always lend a helping hand if someone needs help. Anne is as older as me but tall than me. Basketball is her favorite sport though she is girl. Because Anne studies very hardly, she often gets high grades in exams. I’m not good in English, so he often helps me with my English after school. With her help, I have made great progresses in English. And I also help her as much as I can. I hope our friendship will last as long as we lived.
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As a student, my main target is to study well and then make progress step in step. As we know, all works and no play makes Jack a dull boy. When holiday comes, it is time for me play and I’m usually very happy. Therefore, playing all the time makes me feel empty because I have done nothing at all. I want to do nothing meaningful to enrich my life, so a target is needing for me. I usually set a small goal for myself, for example, read a book. Every time when I finish my target, I felt so satisfied. The really meaningful life is to do some usefully things.
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
For about half century, scientists have been making better and better computer. Now a computer can do a lot everyday jobs wonderful. It is widely used in factories, hospitals and banks. Many computer’s scientists are now thinking of making the computer to “think” like a man. At the help of a person, a computer can draw pictures, write music, talking with people, translate languages and so on. Perhaps computers will one day really think and feel. Do you think that people will afraid when they will find that the computer is too clever.
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修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We have been travelling for more than a week already but arrived in Saudi Arabia today. Most people here wear traditional type of long and loose clothing that cover the whole body. Saudi Arabia is in the desert, and in summer, the weather is extreme hot. One of the tour guide told us that it gets as hotter as 50℃ every summer. Wear this kind of clothing may be very comfortable in that weather, but this is winter and quite cool now. During the day in winter, it was about 22℃ and about 13℃ in the evening. I think I will find the weather a bit of cold when we return to China.
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party in five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much. But we’ve kept writing to each other.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mom is a volunteer in a public hospital. She serve dinner every day to the people waiting for their relatives outside hospital. One day, she asked me to help her of volunteering. At first, I didn’t want to, and in the end I gave in to her. Certain, I went there unwillingly. The much food we gave, the more people would come. Looking at people’s smiles, especially those from children, was amazed! That made me to feel glad for being there. I realized that happy is not only about receiving, but giving as well. Since then, I had kept volunteering every week.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A perform in our city made people think more about an overuse of plastic bags. It called on people use more cloth bags instead of plastic one. In front of a largely supermarket, five volunteers wear white plastic bags and walked through the crowd. Some of the plastic bags worn by the volunteers was collected from customers in two food markets, and all the others were collected by 700 students from a secondary school. On that day, upon leaving the food markets, customers were asking to hand in the plastic shopping bags that they didn’t need of. Several hundreds plastic bags were collected within just two hours.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, the Olympic Games are held in every four years under a regular basis. There are 2 kind of Olympics---the Winter and the Summer Olympics. It is in the Summer Olympics which there are many events include swimming, sailing and so on. Every of the sports has its own standard. All the competitors from all over the world enjoy compete for honour of their countries. Those who win the medals is very proud. Women are not only allow but also play an important role in some events
As matter of fact, it is a great honour to host the Olympic Games for many countries.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Editor,
I’m a middle school student named Li Hua. I’m written to tell you something I don’t think is good. Recently I have noticed very many of my classmates often go to the Internet bar near our school. The other day, I go there, too. I was very shocking to see many students playing games there. In my opinion, the Internet bar should be a place that we can find much useful informations. The Internet is good if we make well use of it. Otherwise, it will do we great harm. So the local government should take measures make sure that the students use the Internet bar correct.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
1. He lived in Beijing for two years, during when he learned Chinese.2. Shakespeare’s works were highly thought by people of different times.
3. The policemen tried hard in the search of the missing boy, that made his parents very moved.
4. Though you have failed many times, you shouldn’t lose your heart.
5. Which has been said above, grammar is a set of dead rules.
6. The birds survived in the severe winter.
7. Those successful deaf dancers think that dancing is an activity which sight matters more than hearing.
8. It is no doubt that he couldn’t escape punished this time.